Guddan FF - What I Deserve (Part-12 UPDATED on Pg-20) - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: Akshata2010

This piece painfully reminds me that Akshat has not known about Guddan even a bit in the past months of their marriage. He doesn't even trust her.

Afyer everything she did for his family, she is the devil and Antara is the Angel... Like 🤔

I know right... I mean, Guddan had literally saved the whole family and now they think she is money minded and changed... Kya zamaana aagaya?

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Posted: 6 years ago
#12

Amazing👍🏼

Do continue....

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Posted: 6 years ago
#13

Originally posted by: srain10

Amazing👍🏼

Do continue....

Thank you very much! 🤗

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Posted: 6 years ago
#14

Awesome start

Love it

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#15

Wow nice start.. can’t wait for the next.. plzz continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#16

Hey Guys, I hope You all are doing well. Shall we quickly get on with Part-2?

Antara was in fury. How could she lose like this? To a commoner like Guddan? She was waiting to get this property and now its all going to be just an illusion. No, she can't allow that! This property belongs to her and only her!

D: How could you do this, Antara? Are you even my Antara? Why did you do this? Teri wajese Mein meri Guddan pe haat utaya!

Antara quickly took hold of Dadi and got her gun.

An: All of You, In your places, otherwise dear Maa-jiwill go to heaven!

Everybody gasped. Akshat shouted along with everyone else.

A: ANTARA!!! DON'T YOU DARE! LET GO OF MAA!!!

An:(Smirking) I'm sorry Akshat, but what can I say? Money made me so blind that I can't see or even think about anyone else! And if I have to kill lovely maa here, then I'd gladly do so!

She pointed her gun on Dadi's forehead and said to Dadi.

An: Haan.... mein badal gaya Maa.... But not now! I was like this from day one. From the day I stepped in this family, I always thought of all these luxuries I could gain by marrying your son. What all dreams I've had? But, You and your son ruined it all. Moreover, made me a mother of three grown-ups and a saas. Hats off to you Guddan, You really have a huge heart, being the wife of Akshat Jindal and being a saas! But, I'm not foolish and stupid like you! I mean, who in their right mind would marry someone twice their age and become a mother-in-law at such a young age! You should really have your brain checked!

Saying so,Antara laughed. Akshat Jindal was devastated. So this was her true nature? How could he not notice?

An:Oh and You were right all along! I faked my death and my pregnancy! I've blackmailed those doctors but hey, till 15 mins ago, Your whole Jindal-Parivaar believed me! These people are all acting to love you! I've heard what you had done to this family and look, they completely forgot what you did and turned against you! You should know that everyone is selfish, Guddan! They just want to make use of you!

Everybody had their face down in shame.

Guddan came forward and Antara told her to back off otherwise she'll kill dadi.

G: Leave Dadi right this instant!

An: I will, but not without a price! I want you and Akshat to hand over all the property of the Jindal's. Then, I'll leave your lovely Dadi!

Guddan ignored her and took a step forward.

An: Oh... so you really want your Dadi dead?

A: Guddan!!! No!!!

G: (Stepping forward)What you are doing is wrong! Leave dadi alone!

V: Antara, tum teek nahi kar rahi!

An: Fine by me! Goodbye Maa.... vese yeh meri galati nahi... yeh Guddan ka galati hein!

Saying so, she pulled the trigger.

And that's the end of Part-2. Its a bit small but I'm a little bit busy nowadays! And I wanted a cliff hanger!😉 And my fingers are paining!😒

What do you guys think on what would happen?

Be sure to like and comment! Till then, this is Pooh, signing off~

Ps: You guys give such lovely comments and I try to reply to you but if I don't,please don't think I ignored that! Even if I don't reply, I'll atleast like it!



Edited by PrincessPooh - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#17

Why the cliffhanger man

Update next part soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: sweetcherry95

Why the cliffhanger man

Why? Because I want to see all of you waiting for the next update like crazy!😉

Update next part soon

I'll try, mate!😊

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Posted: 6 years ago
#19

Yr ye suspense q

I hope dadi ke badle guddu ko hi goli lag jaye😆

Plz continue asap

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Posted: 6 years ago
#20

Hope so ki goli guddan ko lagi ho

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