Tera Mera Milna - AkshAn TS Last Part (Pg 6)

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Tera Mera Milna - TS

Hi all. I think for the first time I am posting a two shots instead of one shot which I usually do. I have had this idea on my mind when I read the spoilers of Antra trying to trap Akshat. Since Kammy02 was requesting me to write something on Akshan based on current track and I also have had Shona1991 requesting me to write on a similar track before, I have decided to make this a two shots instead of one shot so that I can dedicate it to both Kammy02 and Shona1991. 😂😂😂

This OS is continued from where Antra plans to seduce Akshat.

Antra spikes something in Akshat's juice and according to her plan she serves it to Akshat and he drinks it.

Antra calls Akshat downstairs near the poolside pretending as Guddan and dresses like Guddan and stands there. Akshat thinks its Guddan.

Akshat: You called me Guddan?

Antra nods and smriks.

Akshat holds his head.

Akshat: What is happening with me?

Akshat pats Antra, and a victorious smile appears on her face and as Antra is about to look at Akshat, just then she gets a phone call and Akshat falls on the bed almost dozing off and is semi-conscious.

Antra gets shocked hearing something.

Antra: Okay I am coming right now!

Antra: (in her mind) I have to go now but Akshat...

Antra makes Akshat lie down.

Akshat: Guddan....Guddan...

Antra: Your Guddan will be coming soon. Don't go anywhere Akshat, okay.

Antra goes.

While Akshat waits for Guddan, he feels sleepy and goes to sleep.

Guddan comes downstairs to the poolside for a stroll as she was not feeling sleepy and she was smiling reading the letter her Jindal Saab gave her while walking.

Guddan spots Akshat sleeping near the poolside.

Guddan: Why is Jindal Saab sleeping near the poolside?

Guddan: Look at Jindal Saab. He is sleeping without blanket. Let me put the blanket on him. Guddan keeps the letter on the table and goes to Akshat.

As Guddan goes to put the blanket on him, Guddan hears Akshat murmering her name.

Akshat: Guddan...Guddan...

Guddan: (holding the blanket to put on Akshat)Yes Jindal Saab I am here. Your Guddan is here.

Akshat opens his eyes and smiles. Akshat stands up and hugs Guddan. Guddan is surprised.

Akshat: Guddan today I want to open my heart to you.

Akshat: There was a time I stopped living but then you came to my life. When all the colors went away from my life you brought back those colors in my life. (carresing Guddan's face)

Akshat: Our journey started with hatred but I never imagined it will convey to love. As I started understanding you, from liking you, I don't know when I have fallen in love with you. Your innocence, your mischief, your maturity, your childishness, your selflessness, your support I am in love with everything in you. I love you Guddan. (cupping her face)

Akshat hugs Guddan tightly and this confession from Akshat's heart makes Guddan really emotional.

Guddan: You know Jindal Saab when you gave me the letter, when I read it I could imagine you saying all these to me. I didn't know what love was, but I remembered you said once that love is not a feeling but an emotion which I felt when I read the letter. You said that love can be conveyed through eyes and I can clearly see the love you have for me in your eyes. I love you too Jindal Saab.

Guddan and Akshat shares an eyelock. While they stare at each other, Akshat eyes Guddan lips and goes on to come close with her.

Guddan moves away at first.

Guddan: No Jindal Saab this is not the right time now.

Akshat holds Guddan's hand to stop her.

Akshat: Do you trust me Guddan?

Guddan looks at Akshat.

Akshat: Trust me Guddan... I promise you this will be the best night in our life. You trust your Jindal saab, right? (holding her close)

When Akshat touched Guddan, Guddan lost all her senses and she was completely lost on him. She allowed him to go ahead. Akshat crushed his lips on hers with his hand around her waist. Guddan took some time to reprociate as it was her first time but when they ran out of oxygen, Guddan stopped.

Guddan is about to go back, Akshat stops her once again but he pulls her close to him in such a force that they both tumble and fall into the swimming pool, together.

Guddan: Jindal Saab, see what have you done!!

Akshat was completely lost in Guddan.

Akshat sides Guddan's hair and tugs it behind her ear and he starts to get intimate with her, surprising Guddan, and soon she starts enjoying it and surrenders herself to Akshat. Akshat starts to kiss her neck and then her face.

He lifts her in his arms and then carries her and comes out of the pool. He walks to to the bed setup at the pool side and makes Guddan sit on the bed. He removes the dupatta for her white lehenga and untangles her blouse while Guddan slowly starts to unbutton him. As Akshat is shirtless, Guddan touches Akshat's chest and starts doodling on it using her fingers. Alshat smiles and comes closer to Guddan

and makes her lie down on the bed completely. He holds Guddan's fingers and two souls become one that day.

Next day,

Guddan is sleeping on Akshat's chest and Akshat is also asleep and holding Guddan close to him by her waist and they both are covered in blanket.

Guddan opens her eyes and sees Akshat smiling. She blushes recalling yesterday night's incident. Then she looks at the time and thankfully no one is awake at this time.

Guddan: Thank you Jindal Saab for such a beautiful night.

Guddan carresses Akshat's forehead and plants a kiss on his forehead.

Guddan: I love you.

Guddan somehow manages to adjust her dress back and she goes back to her room as anyone may wake up anytime. She tried waking up Akshat but then she decided to wake him up a bit later and get ready by then.

Guddan happily applied sindoor as she recalled her moments with her Jindal Saab yesterday. Guddan is about to wear her mangalsutra, she spots a love bite on her neck, she happily touches it and then wears her mangalsutra. She hides the bite by adjusting her dupatta.

Just then Antra reaches to the poolside and sees Akshat still sleeping.

Antra: Thank God no one saw Akshat here. Everyone must be still sleeping.

Antra executes her plan and lies next to Akshat.

Later,

Akshat wakes up and he smiles recalling his moments with Guddan but it was short lived as he gets shocked to find Antra instead of Guddan.

Akshat: Antra...

Antra pretends waking up and starts her drama.

Antra: Akshat...

Akshat: What are you doing here?

Antra pretends crying. Akshat quickly wears his shirt and buttons them up.

Akshat: Antra will you tell me what exactly happened?! I am getting scared.

Antra: Akshat yesterday I came here to tell you to go back to the room, but then...

Akshat: Then...

Antra: You forced on me. And we both..we both got intimate. I tried to stop you but I couldn't.

Akshat: No! This is not possible!!! I cant believe this! You are lying!!

Antra: I am not lying Akshat! How do I make you believe I am speaking the truth! (crying)

Antra: Look at all these marks on my body.

Antra recalls how she made those marks by her own when Akshat was sleeping.

Akshat: No!!!!

Antra: Don't worry Akshat this was a mistake. No one will know about this. Not even Guddan. You won't need to worry about her. I should leave now before anyone sees us like this and things become worse.

Antra goes from there and smirks while Akshat is confused.

Akshat climbs upstairs and tries to remember what happened yesterday. All he recalls is some of his moments with Guddan yesterday, but what Antra told him and when she showed those marks to him on her body screwed his brain up. He holds his head trying to remember something more.

Akshat: How could I imagime Antra as Guddan? How could I??!

Akshat goes to his room and starts throwing things as he is super guilty and angry.

Akshat: There is something I am missing! Something is really wrong!!! But what is it!!

Akshat looks at Guddan's portrait. He touches Guddan's potrait and cries.

Akshat: I am sorry Guddan! I am sorry, I cheated you!!!

Akshat falls on his knees and cries.

The whole day Akshat was quiet and chose not to speak to anyone. He kept himself locked in the room. Guddan thought Akshat might be busy with work till she got to know from Vardaan he didnt went to the restaurant.

Guddan: I wonder where Jindal Saab went!

Guddan collided with Akshat and she smiled looking at Akshat. Akshat ignored Guddan which surprised Guddan.

Guddan: (in her mind) Why did Jindal Saab just ignore me?

At night,

Guddan was wondering why Akshat ignored her especially after the beautiful night they spent together yesterday and while thinking she fell asleep.

Akshat sat down on his table and wrote a letter that he would be leaving this city forever and wrote what he did with Antra and he could never face Guddan and that he loves Guddan a lot. He even told Guddan to take care of his family and Antra. Akshat decided to get his property divided and he looked at the file.

Akshat went to the room Guddan was sleeping at. He kept the letter and file near Guddan's pillow. As he is about to go, Guddan holds his hand in her sleep.

Guddan: (in her sleep) Jindal Saab I love you.

Akshat looks at Guddan and he took a relief to see she was actually asleep and not awake. Akshat kissed on Guddan's forehead.

Akshat: I love you too Guddan, but I don't deserve your love.

Akshat takes his suitcase and opens the door to leave Jindal Mansion forever.

As he is about to step out of the house, he finds someone stopping him. He finds Guddan holding his hand. Akshat is surprised seeing Guddan.

Akshat: Guddan?

Guddan: You will leave me so easily?! You forgot all your promises?!

Akshat: (not looking at Guddan) No Guddan, no. I don't deserve you. I am not even able to meet your glances. I am ashamed of what I did.

Guddan: (holding Akshat's face and making him look at her) Look at me Jindal Saab.

Akshat looks at Guddan.

Guddan: I have read the letter. And all I know is that I trust my Jindal Saab. But looks like you don't trust your Guddan at all?!

Akshat: Guddan what are you saying? It is fine if you don't trust me now because I broke your trust. So I deserve it somewhat.

Guddan: Is our relationship that weak Jindal Saab?

Akshat looked at Guddan. He knew their relationship is not weak at all.

Guddan holds Akshat's hand and takes him to the room she was sleeping at.

Guddan: Now you tell me what exactly happened?

Akshat: The problem is I myself don't know how all these happened?!

Guddan: What exactly happened?

Akshat narrates Guddan on what happened.

Akshat: Antra told me that you were waiting for me near the poolside so that's why I went there. But I was feeling dizzy. I don't know why. I found you waiting for me.

Guddan: (in her mind) Why did Antra Jii lie to Jindal Saab that I was waiting for him near the poolside?

Akshat: Then my head was feeling heavy and I dozed off for a while. And then when I opened your eyes you were there, trying to put the blanket on me. And then I opened my heart to you and after thst we consummated our relationship, that's all I remember yesterday.

Guddan smiles a bit recalling their consummation. As Guddan is about to talk regarding that,

Akshat: But the next morning, when I woke up I was shocked to find Antra next to the bed not you!!! And then Antra told me what I did yesterday night. And that's when I got to know that whatever I did yesterday was not with you but with Antra...

Akshat could not complete his statement and he breaks down hugging Guddan.

Guddan is shocked hearing what Akshat told her. She instantly understood Antra was lying. Guddan tried to calm Akshat down due to which she could not clear the misunderstanding Antra planted in his mind.

Akshat was soo guilty about what he did with Antra assuming her as Guddan and he also felt guilty fof cheating on Guddan. He did not know that it was indeed Guddan with whom he got intimate yesterday and spent such a beautiful night with.

Guddan: (in her mind) Why did Antra Jii say such a big lie to Jindal Saab!! I have to investigate about this matter. I need to confront Antra Jii about this.

End of part 1.

I hope you all liked the first part. I Will try my best to post the second part on Sunday if I can as I am too busy on Friday and Saturday.

Please please please do share your opinions on this TS so that I can know if this story is going fine or not, and I would know what amendments to make in the next part and what to keep in mind.

Thank you for reading 😃

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Amazing

Jindal sahab was actually with guddan

Continue asap

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Amazing

Akshan were together on poolside and Antara doesn't know it🤣dumbo antara

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome

Dumb antra, she doesnt know that she was there after antra left

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Posted: 6 years ago
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First of all thank you so much much for writing story on current track....🍰🍦🍩

But yeh cheating Kiya Mera special Wala bola tha mene.....👀

But it's ok...I accept it...ha but jab b kabhi time mile specially likhna mere liye ..🙏

And about this ts....

I love pura 1st part of this story...❤️

Chipdi ki cheapnees and guddan ka pyar...

Majdhar main fase humare Jindal saab....🤣😂🚣

Btw love how akshat open to guddan...so heart touching.....🤗

And the way guddan reciprocate his feeling was so pure Bliss and love....😚☺️

And there pool Wala romance followed by suhagraat was so so beautifully written....🥰😘😍

Aur Aj ko guilty Kar he Diya na medam chipdine??😠😡

Aur bichara sab chod-chaad k chal b Diya...🤪🥴

Shukar hai guddan ka ki usne rok Diya warna Jindal Saab suchme Himalaya he chale jate....🤓🧐😹

Love how guddan console him....💏

Ab age dekhte he Kya hota he....🤔

Ha but one thing is sure ab Akshan mil k chipdi aunty ka BBB karenge....😀🤼

And after antra ki antarmann revelation ho Jaye akshat k samne then humko pure hosho-havaas me donoka suhagraat mangta he...🥰🤗🙈

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome start

Love it

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Very nice👍🏼

Update next at the earliest😊

Edited by srain10 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Amazing update.

Eagerly waiting for the second shot. Update soon please.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Yeh chudial ko toh naa😡 huh

Kya Guddan bolege Akshat ko ke woh he thi uske saath ?

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Posted: 6 years ago
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So it's guddan

I thought yha bhi whi na hua ho jo serial me hua

Now antara is gone

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