~~ Mere Humdum Mere Dost ~~ Akshan FF || Part 7 on Pg 24 Updated || - Page 18

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Mishti24

Nice one

Contiue soonnn

Thank you so much for liking😳

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Posted: 6 years ago

Tanu you can add some gifs at the start of the chapter.

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: srain10

Tanu you can add some gifs at the start of the chapter.

GIFS add karna toh thoda mushkil hai as I give update from phone😔

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: TC_FA

GIFS add karna toh thoda mushkil hai as I give update from phone😔

Ok..Koi nahi👍🏼

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Posted: 6 years ago

Part 7

After reaching her home, Bhushan tells kaushlaya to show Guddan her room and goes from there. Kaushlaya calls the maid and orders her to show Guddan her room.

Kaushlaya- Beta,aaj se yahi aapka Ghar hai. Aap jaise chahe yahaan reh sakti Hain. Agar aapko kisi bhi cheez ki zaroorat ho toh aap mujhse ya apne papa se keh sakti Hain. Yeh aapka apna Ghar hai so ghabrane ki koi zaroorat nahi hai. Ab aap jaayein aur apne room mein rest karein. I'll take your leave now as I have to go to office tomorrow.

Guddan says thank you to her and goes from there.

In her room, Guddan is lying on her bed and thinking

Guddan- Kya yeh Ghar Sach mein mera hai. Mujhe toh aisa nahi lagta. Iss Ghar pe Mera koi haq nahi hai. Iss par sirf angad ka hi haq hai. Jab Mera apna baap mujhe apni beti nahi maanta toh phir kaisa haq. Unhone ne toh mujhse dhang se baat Tak nahi ki. Main sirf unke liye ek majboori Hoon Jo Bina wajah unke Gale mein daal di gayi Hoon. Maa aapne kyun mere saath yeh sab Kiya. Jab Meri yahaan koi ahmiyat hi nahi hai toh kyun mujhe iss jagah bhej Diya . Main aapse bahut naraaz Hoon maa. With these thoughts, she falls asleep.

Next morning

Bhushan and kaushlaya are having their office talks on the dining table. After sometime, Guddan also comes there.She greets them.

Kaushlaya- Aao beta,hamare saath baithkar naashta Karo.

Guddan obliges her and sits for breakfast. Seeing her eating with her hands, Bhushan feels irritated and about to say something to her but kaushlaya stops her.

Bhushan- So Tell me,tumne aage Kya socha hai apne future ke baare mein. Tumhe aage padhna ya phir kuch aur karna chahti ho.

Guddan- Humne abhi kuch socha nahi hai iske baare mein.

Bhushan again feels irritated listening to her. The thought that her own daughter has no aim in her life made him angry. But he controls it.

Bhushan- Toh I think tumhe koi computer course Kar Lena chahiye. Saara din Ghar mein khaali baithkar bore ho jaogi.

Guddan just nods and saying this both kaushlaya and bhushan leaves for office.

Guddan goes to her room but she feels alone here. She remembers Akshat's home where she had maa ji to be with her. But here,there is no one except some maids.

Seven days have gone like this only.

At Jindal house

Akshat- Maa, it's been seven days. Guddan ne ek phone Tak nahi Kiya aur na hi hum logon se Milne aayi.

Maa- Beta,ek kaam karte Hain. Kyun na hum unn logon ko dinner par bula lein aaj raat.Waise bhi aaj Sunday hai.

Akshat- Maa, that's a very good idea. Main abhi Bhushan Bhai ko phone karke invite karta Hoon.

And he calls Bhushan and invites him. Bhushan agrees to his request.

Akshat- Maa, Bhushan Bhai maan Gaye Hain. Woh aaj raat aa rahe Hain hamare yahaan.

Maa- Theek hai beta,main tyaarian shuru Kar deti hoon.

At Gupta house

Bhushan tells kaushlaya about Akshat's invitation. Guddan also comes there and sits.

Kaushlaya- Beta,aaj Akshat ne hame dinner par bulaya hai toh aap raat ko tyaar rahiyega.

Guddan- Aap dono chale jaayiyega,humara bilkul bhi Mann nahi hai.

Kaushlaya-Par beta..

Bhushan- Agar tum nahi jaana chahti toh theek hai koi baat nahi.

At night,both leave for dinner at Jindal house. Before leaving kaushlaya orders the maid to look after Guddan and give her dinner at proper time.

After sometime they reach Jindal house

At Jindal house

Akshat welcomes them. But his eyes are looking for Guddan.

Akshat- Kaushlaya bhabhi, Guddan nahi aayi aap logon ke saath?

Kaushlaya- Woh actually uska Mann nahi tha toh humne use force nahi Kiya.

Akshat (with a amused face)- Okay,aap log aayein Ander.

They both meet Akshat's mother and later they have dinner together. After dinner,they have some chat and soon they leave for there house.

Reaching home, kaushlaya asks about Guddan to maid. She tells her that Guddan is sleeping in her room. Then she goes to her room .

At Jindal house

In Akshat's room

Akshat is lying on his bed thinking about Guddan.

Akshat- Why didn't she come for the dinner? Is she upset with me? Have I done anything wrong with her? Yeh ladki bhi na ek number ki ziddi hai. Humesha bus apni manmarzi karti hai. Atleast maa ka Dil rakhne ke liye hi aa jaati par nahi madam ke mood swings. Chalo koi baat nahi ,agar woh yahaan nahi aayi par hum toh wahaan ja sakte hai na. And he decides to go to Gupta house tomorrow to meet her with his mother.

Next day,in the evening Akshat takes his mother with him to Gupta house.

Maa- Beta,yeh tumne bilkul theek Kiya Gupta house jaane ka . Chalo ab main Guddan se mil paayungi. Itne din ho Gaye use dekhe Huye.

Akshat- Maa,woh abhi bhi uss Ghar mein apne aap ko akela mehsoos karti hai. So I have to do something for her. Jisse uska dhyaan baaki cheezon mein lage. Woh khud kuch bhi nahi kehne wali Bhushan Bhai se. Isliye mujhe hi kuch karna hoga.

Maa- Tum bilkul theek keh rahe ho beta.

After sometime,they reach Gupta house.

Bhushan and kaushlaya gets surprised seeing them.Kaushalaya hugs Akshat's mother and bhushan shakes hand with Akshat.

Kaushlaya- What a pleasant surprise. I'm so happy aap log humse Milne aaye.

Akshat- Woh bhabhi hum log yahaan se guzar rahe toh socha aap logon se milte chale.

Bhushan- Bahut achha Kiya Akshat.

Akshat's mom- Kaushlaya,hamari Guddan kahaan Hain?? Dikhai nahi de rahi .

Kaushlaya- Woh apne kamre mein hai ,main abhi use bulati Hoon. She calls the maid and asks her to bring Guddan from her room.

Maid goes to Guddan's room and knocks the door.

Guddan- Kaun hai?? Andar aa jao.

Maid- Chotti Malkin,aapko neeche bula rahe Hain.

Guddan- Kyun,Kya hua??

Maid-Woh Akshat Saab aur unki maa aaye Huye Hain neeche. Aapse milna chahte Hain.

Guddan- Theek hai,tum Jao main aati Hoon.

Maid goes from there.

Guddan (in mind)- Woh yahaan Kya karne aaye Hain?? Zaroor unse hamari shikayat karne aaye honge ki humne unke saath kaisa behave Kiya tha jab main unke Ghar par thi. With these thoughts she goes downstairs to meet them..

Akshat's mom sees Guddan and hugs her tightly.

A.Mom- Arey Meri bachi,kitne dino baad tumhe dekh rahi Hoon. Tum toh lagta hai mujhe bhool gayi ho, isliye Kal dinner par bhi nahi aayi.

Guddan- Aisi koi baat nahi Maaji,woh Kal bus hamari thodi tabiyat theek nahi thi. Isliye hum nahi AA paaye.

Akshat- So madam,I hope ab aapki tabiyat bilkul theek hai.

Guddan nods in positive.

Both look at each other and Akshat gives a glare to her. She understands that he has caught her lie.

Akshat- Aur batao Guddan,aage ke baare kya socha hai. Tum toh masters karna chahti thi na toh Kya hua ab ??

Guddan- Wo.. woh main.

Bhushan- Guddan, masters karna chahti hai??Isne mujhe kuch bataya nahi.

Akshat- Ji Bhushan Bhai, Guddan ne mujhe bataya tha ki woh masters karna chahti hai.

Bhushan- Maine toh use kahaa tha koi computer course karne ke liye. But if she wants to do masters thats completely fine. Main Kal kisi se kehkar form mang wa Dunga.

Guddan just nods her head and gives a tough look to Akshat.

Part 7 ends

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Posted: 6 years ago

Good going tanu...

but don't you think thoda slow motion me chal rahi he story??

Don't feel bed ha....I just share my thoughts...if you felt bed I'm sorry about it....

Guddan need to open up more and Akshan ko ek he office me la do to kuch ho sake....

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Shona1991

Good going tanu...

but don't you think thoda slow motion me chal rahi he story??

Don't feel bed ha....I just share my thoughts...if you felt bed I'm sorry about it....

Guddan need to open up more and Akshan ko ek he office me la do to kuch ho sake....

Iss story ka slow hone mein hi mazaa hai

Aur office kaal abhi koi chance nahi. Abhi use padhai complete karni hai

Btw thanks for liking it👍🏼

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Posted: 6 years ago

Nice update

Akshat understands Guddan very well and good he talked about her master's dream otherwise in sadness she would have let go her dreams

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: TC_FA

Iss story ka slow hone mein hi mazaa hai

Aur office kaal abhi koi chance nahi. Abhi use padhai complete karni hai

Btw thanks for liking it👍🏼

Accha....but how will akshat meet then...

Guddan is now actually annoying me..

Constantly renting about yeh aapne thik nhi Kiya...

Will wait for story to unfold but one request at least give makeover to guddan...

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Shona1991

Accha....but how will akshat meet then...

Guddan is now actually annoying me..

Constantly renting about yeh aapne thik nhi Kiya...

Will wait for story to unfold but one request at least give makeover to guddan...

You will get everything you want, just have patience

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