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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetcherry95

Update nhi aaya

Shukr raat nhi jaagi

Cherry yaar yeh Shona update nahi ke subah bade ummed se IF paar aye thi mein Shona update ke hoga socha magar isne toh nahi kiya but Tanu ne naya story update kiyasmiley17

aur tum kab karoge next partsmiley42

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Akshananju

Cherry yaar yeh Shona update nahi ke subah bade ummed se IF paar aye thi mein Shona update ke hoga socha magar isne toh nahi kiya but Tanu ne naya story update kiyasmiley17

aur tum kab karoge next partsmiley42

Hopefully tomorrow

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Posted: 6 years ago

Hello guys....so here is new part of my story...it's kind of MAHAEPISODE.... As requested by Akshananju....so guys enjoy reading....it's Lil mature so kids plz stay away from this part...

Part-6 (mature contant 18+)

Both reach Goa early morning....akshat has book presidential suite for them....

Guddan:- Kya hum aapk sath ek hi kamre main rahenge Akshat??

Akshat:- yes wify any problem?? Aur plz yaha Hume koi dekhne Wala nahi hai aur kaam k sath agar me kuch wat sirf tumhare sath spend karna chahta hu usme Kya galat hai guddan??

Guddan:- kuch galat nahi hai akshat...hum rahenge aap k sath.... saying she just hug him as if her world depends in him.....

Both took rest for a while then akshat ask guddan to wait he will come after attending mtng... guddan nodded and she again went to sleep and yaha akshat was roaming on colva beach coz koi mtng to thi nahi....and when he was roaming he so some guys playing football...he to went there and he also started playing with them...soon someone tap on his shoulder and as he turn around he was pleasently surprise to see his best friend Vikram in front of him after so long.....

Akshat:- Inspector Vikram Rawat...CBI officer....

Vikram:- Mr. Akshat Jindal....world best chef....

Akshat:- how are you dost...kaha the itne salo Tak?? How I miss you buddy...and you have not attend my wedding also....

Vikram:- hum kshamaprarthi he akshat...hum sach me bAhot vyast the aur humare pas waha ane ka samay he nahi tha...humare kartavya ne Hume bandh Kar rakha tha...

Akshat:- you and your Hindi ki dictionary...it feel so good to see you again...waise I understand your work is more important then anything to you....

Chalo let's have lunch together....

Soon both headed to a restaurant to have food meanwhile akshat inform guddan about his lunch and order something for her in hotel room....guddan was loving this caring side of akshat..she agreed and was heaving her lunch meanwhile both Vikram and akshat was also so busy in there lunch and chatting session that it almost become dark outside and both were tipsy also due to drink....soon both parted and decide to meet tomorrow and akshat went to beach it was dark and no one was on beach...he was watching the sea and decide to call guddan.......

Akshat:- guddan come to the beach near our hotel...me wahi tumhara intzar Kar Raha hu.... saying he hung up without listening wat guddan is saying....

Here guddan was so angry on akshat coz of him she spend her whole day in hotel room and now he is just ordering her to come to beach....she get ready in her favorite floral saree and sleevless backless blouse....she was looking beautiful...she come to beach and started looking for him....and there she saw him sitting down on the sand, looking at the sea... Guddan comes from the back and taps his shoulder.. He turns to look at her, smiles and gestures her to sit beside him. For some reason guddan doesn't want to deny the offer. She sits next to him and after a moment of silence,she started......

Guddan:- akshat aapko pata he Kya time hua hai?? It's 1am and why are you at the beach now? Why didn't you come back to hotel hum aapka pure dinse intzar Kar rahe the... aur aapne Hume is wat q beach par bulaya hai??and continues with her lecture...

Akshat is just admiring his gudiya! Out of nowhere, he gets up and extends his hand towards Guddan...

Guddan is looking at him confused..wondering what & why?!

Akshat;Let's go get WET...!Chalo bhigte hai guddan.....

Guddan;Are you mad? The water would be freezing now...! We would freeze to death..!aur Hume waise b is wqt bhigne ka koi shoukh nahi hai....

Akshat;I'm there na... You won't freeze to death...!kuch nahi hoga tumhe....

Guddan;To to Kya ha? Aap yaha he to Kya??

Akshat;My HOTNESS would warm the water... Saying he wink at her

Guddan blushes hearing him say that.. She holds akshat's hand and gets up...!

Akshat and Guddan slowly make their way towards the sea... The sound of the waves soothing their ears and the moon above the sea is a sight not to be missed... The intention was only for the legs to get WET but somehow both akshat and guddan were now half into the water...

Akshat starts splashing water at Guddan and she does the same...! Guddan starts humming randomly and is lost in the beauty of the surrounding... She looks at Akshat and see him trying to frantically get rid of something in the water..

Guddan;- akshat, yeh aap Kya Kar rahe he??Sab thik hai na??

Akshat;I'm trying to get rid of this damn moon's reflection on the water..

Guddan;Get rid of the moon's reflection?par q?

Akahat;Q ki Your reflection is the only thing I want to see... not some moon's reflection... To me, you're the MOST beautiful and it's ONLY you who I want to see...Meri aankho me sirf aur sirf tumhe bharna chahta hu me guddan....

Saying so akshat closes the distance between them... He cups some water in his hand and slowly releases them from guddan's forehead... Careful not letting the water touch her sindoor...

Akshat was right indeed.guddan is blushing so much, that even in the darkness surrounded around them her face is glowing red...!

Akshat starts tracing guddan's face... He is drawing pattern at her back and making his way down from her forehead.. cheeks..chin and reaching her neck as he is closing the gap between his fingers and her cleavage.. guddan grabs his finger and bites it...

Akshat screams and guddan starts laughing... She pushes him, and he falls back onto the water with a big SPLASH...! Meanwhile guddan, makes her way out of the water, and just as she reaches the shore and starts increasing her speed...

"Guddan" akshat calls out..! As she turns to look, he jump on her pushing her to the sandy ground... They look like a sand statute right now, all covered in sand... Akshat is on top of Guddan..

Guddan is struggling to open her eyes as sand went into them... Akshat tells her to calm down and he slowly forces open her eyes, inches closer to her face, with his lips touching her eye lids...he blows into her eyes...! His warm breathe sends shivers down guddan's spine...

The both share a DEEP EYELOCK... not even moving an inch from how their bodies were intertwined...!

Akshat;Guddan Kya tum mujhe apna banane ki permission dogi??tumhe pata he mentioned sirf aur sirf tumhe he apni patni Mana he to Kya aaj tum mujhe apne pp ati hone ka haq dogi???

Guddan didn't uttar a word she was just staring at him... getting no response from her akshat feels dejected but still manages to whip up a smile and says,

Akshar;It's ok guddan... we will not do anything that makes you uncomfortable...!

Guddan;I love you Akshat...hum aapse bAhot pyar karte he....aapko pata nahi but aap humare crush the...aur aapki he shadi me as wedding planner ban k hum sirf Aakhri baar aapko dekhne he aye the...par shayas destiny ko kuch aur he manjoor that aur hum dono humesha k liye ek dusre k ho Gaye...Hume pata he aap sirf Hume apni patni mante he aur humse bAhot pyar b karte he...aapne Hume patni hone k sare haq diye he ..har wo rasam nibhai Jo shadi k baad nibhai jati hai....to aaj hum b aapko apna pati hone ka haq Dena chate he...make me yours akshat....make me your.....

Hereing wat guddan said Akshat's eyes start to sparkle and his dejected smile is now replaced by a naughty grin... He picks her up, makes his way into the water and drops her...

Akshat;Your punishment for making me sad a while ago...!

Guddan made a puppy face but akshat's attention was somewere else following his gaze guddan saw that she was Drenched completely.. her EVERYTHING could be seen through the transparent saree and blouse, the peeping light blue laced bra...Akshat was eating her alive with his eyes...and also thinking about something deeply...

Guddan; akshat aise mat dekhiye na...Hume sharm AA rahi he plz....

Akshat; mujhse kaisi sharm guddan...Dekho yaha....do you trust me right?? Main Aisa kuch b nahi karunga jisse tumhe taklif ho....so just trust me and enjoy the moment biwi coz it's our "ANOKHI SUHAGRAAT" but before that, one last thing is needed to be done...!

Guddan;Aur wo Kya?

Akshat;I'm already fighting with the forces of the waves, I don't need your clothes as another hindrance...saying he just unpinn her pallu and remove her saree...he litterly teard her blouse and bra....she was naked and then he started removing his clothes....

Soon both were naked and guddan was blushing and akshat was grinning..It's not the naked body that is visible but it's the naked soul...The truest form of one's self is when they bare their soul out to the significant other...

Akshat and Guddan have FINALLY met the purest form of one another... And a lone tear trickles down both their faces... They look at one another and smile...

Akshat inches closer to guddan...her bosom is up against his chest and he could feel her hardened nipples against his skin... His hand travels up to her hair, he slides his hand into her tangled wet hair and pulls her closer... Guddan's lips now touching the crook of his neck... Akshat traces her ear lobes with his tongue...brushed his lips against it and says, "I Love You guddan" and pecks it lightly...

Akshat; guddan main b tumse bAhot pyar krta hu pata nahi kaise...bus 5 din purani humari shadi aur pahechan he par inn 5dino me jaise mene 5 janm ji liye ho tumhare sath....tumhe andaza b nahi k anjane Hui humari shadi ne mujhe dilse tumse jod Diya he...mene kabhi b antrase pyar nahi Kiya tha nahi Karta hu...it was just a coincidence k humari shadi ho gayi....but trust me you are first and only women whom I love you so dearly....and no one remember guddan no one will take your place in my life....aur mujhe yeh b pata he k yeh Sab kehne ki mujhe jarurat nahi he...q ki you KNOW whatever my heart feels for you... We were DESTINED to be...We were MADE FOR EACH OTHER...! It took us a little longer than usual to find one another but I guess it was meant to be this way... But whatever that would have happened... WE WOULD HAVE DEFINITELY ENDED UP TOGETHER... Aur is koi b badal nahi sakta..! Our souls have been connected from Day 1, that's why YOU and I were meant to be in each others arms... I Love You Guddan, I always have and I always will...! saying so he once again pecks her ears... his hand tightened against her waist, making her bosom crush against his chest, suffocating the delicate soft jelly like lotus flowers....

The moonlight was enhancing every curve of her delicate body... The waves was soothing their bodies, getting them ready for the storm that would follow by...the storm that was building up from within their bodies, set to make this night go down in history...a night where 2 naked souls unite...find solace...peace..being in the arms of the RIGHT ONE..!

Akshat;Shall we play a game?

Guddan;Kya Game?abhi aise haal me game khelni??

Akshat;Yes biwi....

Guddan;Kya kuch b akshat.....

Akshat;Ok..! I will write/draw something and you will have to guess what is it?! Are you clear?

Guddan;YES! But where are you going to get a pen and paper for it?

Akshat;wo to humare pass pahelese he hai.

Guddan;humare pass?... Kaha?

Akshat;Pen..my finger.. Paper your back..!

He raises his left hand that had been wrestling with the water all this while and places it on guddan's spine starting from the top... As soon as his wet finger touches her...there's this sensation of warmth that over takes her body...

Akshat starts writing random stuff... He first writes her name "Guddan"... he asks her to guess and she gives up... all the while their bodies digging into one another... Throughout this guddan could feel his manhood up against her and she could sense the change it's been going through from when they started to where they are now...

Akshat than starts to write his name.. A-K-S-H-A-T.. as he finishes with the T, guddan has already guessed it and is about to say the answer but he stops her...

Akshat;Ruko, abhi Baki hai..!

He than continues writing further and starts off with the J-... Guddan understood where his fingers were heading... He started his A at the top of her spine and now his fingers are almost going to reach her butt soon... as Akshat finished writing the last letter.. J-I-N-D-A-L.. he moves both his hands to her butt cheeks and squeezes them lightly...tightening his grip making her butt cheeks scream in joy...

If anyone were to see them right now, they would look in ONE... There's NO gap, even the air can't go through... Akshat starts squeezing his way up... Without letting go of the squeezing motion his hands slowly squeezes it's way to her waist making it's way up the beautiful curve... Guddan digs her nails into his chest as he makes his way up...

As he reaches the top, he brings his hand forward and takes her already squashed bosom and squeezes it further... "Akshat"... moans guddan... Her moan sounds like a melodious song to him...

Akshat inches closer to her and starts raining kisses from her forehead...her eyes...nose...cheeks...jaw and as he reaches for the chin he bites it lightly, making her scream a little...

He starts giving open mouth kisses to her as his making his way down her slender neck... He runs his tongue through her cleavage line, making her close her eyes in shyness...and takes in one bosom at a time...while his mouth is working on one, his hand gives attention to the other giving them equal importance not letting the other feel left out...

Unable to hold on any longer, guddan bites his shoulders...which makes him groan...

He grabs guddan by her waist and swiftly enters her just like that...guddan scream in pain but with the water acting as a natural lubricant it only made it easier for him...Her legs are now criss crossed across his back and her hands are holding him tightly... Guddan moves up and down, first slowly and than picking up the speed... They both are in so much SYNC right now......after an eternity Water fountain emerges as Akshan have attained their PEAK... Both clutching onto one another like their life depended on it and they let out a final MOAN in sync.... Both rested there forhead to each other....guddan was feeling complete....she just cup his face and give a peck on his forehead thanking him.....

Akshat carried Guddan out of water and make her wear her saree and he also wear his clothes....soon both were in there room sleeping in each other's arms....akshat was in mood for another round but guddan was so tired that after changing she just sleep snuggling him ... knowing that it was her first time he control him self and hold her more tight to himself and soon he too drifted in peaceful sleep with smile on his face........

So guys this part is also complete...next part main hoga kuch dhamaka....do shower your love via likes and comments... positive negative both reviews are welcome.....

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Edited by Shona1991 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago

chalo it was wait to worth

hotness overloaded

mjhe laga tha bhootni aunty ka ticket aj hi kat jayega khair unhe jald se jald rawana kro yha se plz

continue soon

ps-plz change ur title from Ts to ss

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Posted: 6 years ago

Shona Shona kya update hai 🔥🔥🔥oh bhi beach mein🙈🙊🙊🙊🙊🙈🙈 Antara chudial ne dekha toh nahi naa

Rawat uncle bhi hai isme aur unke shudd Hindi 😎😎😎😎😎

Antara' chudial ka exposing hai woh dhamaka ?waise maha episode update he tha thank you Shona for bada wala updae😍😘😘😘😘😘😘

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Posted: 6 years ago

Shona Kya likhti ho yrr tum

Temperature bada diya tumne ❤❤

So hot yrr 🔥🔥

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Posted: 6 years ago

I've updated so chk

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Kammy02

chalo it was wait to worth

hotness overloaded

mjhe laga tha bhootni aunty ka ticket aj hi kat jayega khair unhe jald se jald rawana kro yha se plz

continue soon

ps-plz change ur title from Ts to ss

Title changed...

Uska ticket itna jaldi nahi katega....

Glad you like it...

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Akshananju

Shona Shona kya update hai 🔥🔥🔥oh bhi beach mein🙈🙊🙊🙊🙊🙈🙈 Antara chudial ne dekha toh nahi naa

Dekhti to jal bhun he jati na....😂 Waise thanks for loving this part....❤️

Rawat uncle bhi hai isme aur unke shudd Hindi 😎😎😎😎😎

Wo to honge he na😎😎

Antara' chudial ka exposing hai woh dhamaka ?waise maha episode update he tha thank you Shona for bada wala updae😍😘😘😘😘😘😘

Not that par kuch alag...and yes yeh Maha episode sirf aur sirf tumhare liye he tha...😘😘

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Mrihika

Shona Kya likhti ho yrr tum

Temperature bada diya tumne ❤❤

So hot yrr 🔥🔥

Thanks mrihika....

Thanks for appreciation...

Glad you like it....

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