Father's Day special (os)

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Posted: 6 years ago
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This is special OS on FATHER'S DAY

Everyone wished him father's day...his three son and dil..but his ears want to listen one voice..eyes wants to see one face..his AYAN...guddan and his son...who is complete mixture of both of his parents....naive but intelligent like his mother...and full on nautanki...and high tempered like him...he is look alike of him..and always tries to copy him..and off course bossy like his mother...

He again and again look at his room...from breakfast table...

Gudd: kha dhyan hai aapka...nashta thanda ho rha hai..

Aj: haa...wo aaj champ neeche nahi aya..

Gudd:duggu..aree wo aaj Sunday hai na..isliye mne use uthya nahi hai

Aj: thk hai to mai jakr utha deta hu..

Vardan: papa hume bhut late ho rha hai Ayan se aap akr mil lijiyega naa..bhut important meeting hai abhi..

Aj : haa usse mai akr milta hu..

But till he left Jindal Bhawan his eyes were on his door..

Gudd: in dono ka to hume samajh hi nahi ata

Dadi: kya hua

Gudd: aree hum gye the duggu ko uthane ..lekin wo bola ki use abhi papa se nahi milna aur hume room se bhar nikal diya..

Dadi: jaroor daant diya hoga lalla ne us 5 saal ke bacche ko jane kya kya sikhayega ye..mai jakr dekhti hu..

Dadi: kanaha. Beta kya hua..kyu nahi aa rha tu neeche..

Ayan: dadi phle ye bato ki papa kha hai..

Dadi: wo to gya..ab tu mujhe to andar ane de..

He slowly opens his door and take her in..

Dadi saw around..his full room was decorated with Akshats picture and there was written Happy Father's Day my Super Hero..MY papa..

Dadi: to ye sab ho rha tha

Ayan: sshhh!..Dadi surprise hai.

Dadi: lekin ye sab kyu

Ayan: papa bhi to itna sab kuch karte hai..wo to meri har wish puri karte hai..aur mumma bhi to unhe surprise deti hai pta mumma bolti hai ki papa bhut special hai isliye wo unhe surprise deti haito papa humare liye bhi to special hai na dadi..

Dadi kissed his forehead

Bilkul apni maa jesa hai tu

Ayan: lekin mujhe papa jesa banna hai dadi..

Gudd: tum apne papa jese hi ho duggu

Ayan: ye kya hua..mumma ko to sab pta chal gya..ab to mera surprise gya pani mai..

Gudd: kyu gya pani mai.. hum thode hi na bta rhe apke papa ko..

Ayan: but aap secret bhi to nahi rakh pyoge naa..

Jese hi papa bolenge..and he mimic AJ..

guddan,btao kya baat hai

Aap sari baat bta dogi

Gudd: acchaa bacchhoo..ab to hum jroor btayenge..

As she was leaving room he held her pallu..

Ayan: mumma..please

She pretends to be angry with him..

He climb on his bed and kissed her cheek

Ayan: mumma.please..

Gudd: nahi bta rhe hum kisi ko kuch bhi khus ..and she also kissed his cheek..

Ayan: mumma masi ko call kro naa kha rh gyi wo

Revati: maasi yha hai betu aur ye rha aapka blue berry cake..pta hai kese aapke chachu se chipakr lekr aye hai hum..

Pta hai dii apke duggu ne pay kiya hai iske liye..

Gudd: aree kyu

Ayan: mumma ye mai papa ke liye kr rha hu aap please karne do naa..

@Evening;

As AJ entered again AYAN was missing among other members..

Aj: Champ thk to hai naa..subha se nahi dikh rha kyaa baat hai..

Gudd: jo bhi hai aap khud hi dekh lijiye kyuki hume to room mai entry de nahi rha..

Aj: tumhe mujhe phle batana tha..pta nahi kya hua hoga..and he run towards his room..

As he entered..a bucket full of flowers and shining stars and wrappers fall on him

He surprisingly look around in the room and tears filled in his eyes

And he was standing there with one rose in his hand..

Ayan: Happy Fathers Day Papa I love you my superhero

And he came towards him..

Aj bent on his knees and hugged him tightly ..i love you too champ..

And he took him towards..the cake and then they cut cake and celebrate ..

Aj took him in his arms and sit on bed..

Aj: ye sab kyu kiya aapne..agr aap bs wish kr dete mai fr bhi itna hi khus hota..

Ayan: aree..papa ...kishore bhaiya..vardaan bhaiya..sab aapko kitne bde bde aur impo..impo..

Aj: imported

Ayan: haa..whi..jo aapne bola ..gifts dete hai.mujhe bhi to dena tha..aap bhi to meri sari wish puri karte ho

Mumma bhi to apko gift deti hai

Gudd: aur aapko pta hai jindal sahab.. humse to paise bhi nahi liye hai aapke bete ne..

Aj:.. fr ye sab kese..

Ayan: wo jab aap toys aur chocolate ke liye paise dete the na..usme se save kiya..aur thoda sa dadi ne loan diya..

Both Akshat and Guddan kissed him on his both cheeks..

@Night;

Akshat was sitting on his bed and admiring his sleeping son

Gudd: kya hua Jindal sahab..ese kyu dekh rhe hai ise..

She sits near him..

Aj: humara chota sa AYAN aaj kitna bda ho gya na guddan

Abhi kuch din phle hi to tumne ise mere hatho mai diya tha.. aur ab dekho surprise party plan krne lag gya hai

Gudd: kyu na kare ..wo to hai hi creative..bilkul humari tarha..

Aj: pure ghar ka laadla hai sabse kitna pyar krta hai...kisi ka kanaha ..kisi ka betu..tumhara duggu..

Gudd: aur aapka champ...aur pta hai aapse ye bhut pyar krta hai..itna to humse bhi nahi karta...

Aj took her hands in his..

Aj: mai to tumse pyar krta hu naa..aur ye bhi bhut pyar krta hai tumse...

Thank you guddan

Gudd: thank you kyu..

Aj: meri zindigi badalne ke liye..mujhe itna pyara beta dene ke liye...hr us baat ke liye jo tumhare ane se hui hai meri life mai...

She take him with her both stand face to face...

Gudd: fr to aapko ek aur thank you bolna pdegaa..kyu humare pass bhi apke liye father's day ka gift hai..

Aj: kya...

Guddan put his hand on her tummy...

Aj asked is this true..she noded in positive..

He lift her in his arms in a tight hug..

Gudd: arm se...duggu jaag jyega..

He put her down and kissed her forehead and both hugged each other..

He is on cloud nine..

THIS IS AN INDEED VERY SPECIAL FATHER'S DAY FOR HIM...

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Posted: 6 years ago
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It was so beautiful😳

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Aww such a cute piece.

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Happy tears....

Very beautifully written...

And sho sho cute....

I saw want to akshat k reaction when guddan will tell him about he is gonna b papa in show.....

Chalo hope for the best...

And you should write more often...you are very good writer...

Lots of love to you....

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Hayyeee.......shoooo cute one😍😍😍😘😘😙😙😘😘😘😙😘😍😍😍

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Arrey yaar... Tumne toh rula diya 😭

It's so beautifully written 👏

Kaash show mei bhi AJ aur Guddan ka champ aajaye

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awwwieee how cute OS was this!!!!! ❤️

Epilogue chaiyeeeee!!!! Their Little Doll

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: DivyankaTD

Awwwieee how cute OS was this!!!!! ❤️

Epilogue chaiyeeeee!!!! Their Little Doll

I will try

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😡tum kab next part update karoke😭

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Originally posted by: Akshananju

😡tum kab next part update karoke😭

Kiska..??😒

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