AkshAn TS: Back to Square One last part updated pg 4

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Hey everyone, i am quiet new to this forum, thought of writing something on akshan, havent watch the drama, just some glimpses here and there but i Love Nishika off screen chemistry. Everything is same as the show and all the misunderstanding and tussels have been resolved and Akshan have kick start their relationship

I hope all the readers will like this so kindly be generous and leave your love in form of likes and comments, i will decide whether to convert it into TS or SS after satisfactory response

Till than enjoy

Part 1

Early morning

AJ was admiring guddan caressing her hairs lovingly, he slightly pecked her forehead. Just last night they officially kick start their relationship and consummated their marriage after 6 long months though confession was still impending. He very well knew that guddan loved him and he equally reciprocate her feelings.

Here guddan opened her eyes and looked at her beloved husband with a shy smile engulfed in his arms " Good morning Jindal saab" " Good Morning Mrs Akshat Jindal" he wished her and pulled her into a passionate kiss. He rolled her over and he was above placing wet on her forehead, eyes , lips and moved down towards her neck, he sucked hard on her neck imprinting his mark on her. They were engrossed in their makeout session when they heard a knock on the door.

Durga: AJ jaldi neeche aaye, koi ap se milne aaya. , saying so durga went downstairs.

AJ kissed guddan on her forehead and went to get ready. Its been quite a while that he has developed a habit of pecking her forehead whenever he leaves even if all the member of the house are present.

Both went down the stairs smiling but it was short lived as soon as they had a eye contact with person who was waiting for AJ.

AJ went near that person , hold her hand to make believe, he immediately hugged her tightly he couldnot believe himself whilst a tear escaped from guddan, her happiness was of a single night because Jindal Saab first love, his life, his wife Antara was her infront of her in his arms. He was twirling her around with happiness. Everyone else was shocked with Antara's entry.

Each of the daughter in law was introduced to Antara except for guddan. Antara moved towards guddan , cupped her face and questioned " Maa ye itni pyari, gudiya jaisi kaun hai" everyone was in delimma what to answer but dadi muster up the courage and disclosed " yeh mere lalla ki biwi hai Guddan" she looked towards akshat " Akshat maa sach keh rahi hai " , he remained quiet which pierced guddan's heart. " Antara teri akhri khuwaish thi k akshat apni zindagi ki nayi shuruwat kare, toh usne wahi kiya hai , par tu itne sawalon baad kahan se aayi, kahan thi tu " dadi question , antara looked towards AJ for explanation " Màa antara itne saalon se coma main thi, par maine ap logon se yeh baat chupayi par 10 saal intezar krne k baad doctors k suggestion pe antara ka life support system hatadiya gaya peechle saal par mujhe ab bhi yaqeen nhi horaha k meri biwi zinda hai " he explained " akshat ab jaise hi uss raat hospital se mere sansein laut aayi thi shyd abhi saath baqi tha, par kismat k khel ajeeb hote hain jaise hi mujhe hosh aaya main sab kch bhul chuki thi, par jaise hi mujhe sab kch yaad aaya main dauri chali aayi yahan apke pas" akshat once again hugged her he was overwhelmed with turns of event. Guddan was totally heart broken but she composed her self and ordered the bahu to welcome their MIL. After all the rituals all went for breakfast, antara went and took guddan's seat, she resist that and continued to serve everyone. At the time of leaving, guddan waited for him to kiss her forehead like every other days but he left not even bothering to look at her.

Throughout the day akshat was confused overwhelmed with everythinh and he clearly forgot guddan, on the other hand guddan was trying her best to hide her emotions and jelled up with antara. They moved antara's luggage inside the room and guddan was back to her poolside bed.

Akshat came back late at night till than everybody was settled into their rooms. Guddan was lying on her bed , recalling their last night moment how he loved her and they were bonded into one soul but it was all for one night, as soon as antara comeback they were back to square one but she doesnot blame antara for that she was a nice lady she concluded. Silently weeping she went into deep slumber.

Akshat climbing the stairs called guddan, he opened the door of their room and it was clean and tidy no mess. He was amused. " Mrs Jindal yeh room aj itna saaf kaise hai , aj bilkul bhi mess nahi hai yahan " he shouted , somebody wrapped arms around his torso " apko toh har cheez neat and tidy hi achi lagti hai na" he turned around and looked at antara. He pulled back and asked her " Guddan kahan hai antara" " Mujhe nhi pta akshat" " kya matlab hai, yeh room uska hai na" " akshat yeh room humara hai isme guddan kahan se aagyi" she replied " dekho antara tumhare aane pe main bht khush hun per jaise tum meri biwi ho waise guddan bhi meri biwi hai , aur woh is waqt kahan hai mujhe janna hai " he said leaving the room, he went to his mother's room but she was not there. He than went to poolside and there she was sleeping on her bed. He set beside her and could see her tear stricken face, he carefully wiped her tears and kiss her forehead and went back to his room. After tossing and turning for quiet a while, he check that antara was fast asleep , he immediately left the room and joined guddan on her poolside bed , pulling her into his embrace.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Too good 😊

Plz update soon

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Intresting

I hope ye fake antra ho

Really sad for guddu

Update the nxt part soon

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Good start.. Do continue soon

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Wow...

Loved how Aj make it clear to antra...

And at the end of day he was with his gudiya...

Even after his love his antra was with him still he went ahead with guddan...

Awesome....plz continue soon

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It was so good😳

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😢😢😢 Antara aa gayi huh😠😠 fake Antara

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Awesome start

Love it

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Thanks , will try to update soon

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Originally posted by: Kammy02

Intresting

I hope ye fake antra ho

Really sad for guddu

Update the nxt part soon

Thanks

Will try to update soon

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