AkshAn TS: Back to Square One last part updated pg 4 - Page 2

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Posted: 6 years ago
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This seems interesting

Poor Guddan 😭

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice story

I hope yeh fake Antara ho

Jindal Sahab last mein apni Guddan ke pass aaye toh unhe Sukoon Mila

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Posted: 6 years ago
#13

Eager to know what will happen next.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Next part update karo

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Plzz continue soonnnnnn......

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 2

Next day with the rise of sun , AJ went back to his room as if he slept in his room only. Everything was as per routine, but for Guddan it was no more a happy place still she kept the hope that her Jindal Sahab will come back to her because the emotions she saw in his eyes cannot be a lie. Eventhough she was indeed hurt but never blamed it on antara instead she made her favourite dish and present her on breakfast table " antara di, yeh lijiye apki favourite dish, humne khud apke liye bnayi hai" everyone was shocked on guddan calling antara as Di but AJ was happy that his gudiya is very sensible woman and he appreciate it enough he made a mental note to thank her later. Days passed by, with Akshat spending most of his time either at his office or with antara , going on dinners and parties. Akshat kept sneaking back to Guddan without her knowledge. AJ and Antara were growing close again but still their relationship was devoid of any physical attraction from Akshat's side.

Akshat was confused with his feeling, he was actually happy with antara's come back but he could not stop thinking about his gudiya, she is the treasure that GOD has gifted him and he very honestly know that he was hurting her beyond repair. Initially he was not aware of sorrowing lingering in her beautiful orbs but after sometime he notice that she looked at him hopefully that he would kiss her forehead when leaving for office or he would give her side hug occassionally or would call her for his small small works which ultimately turns into mess. He was himself confused why he was distancing himself from guddan so that antara is not hurt, than what about his guddiya , he was confused like a teenager, he pushed all thoughts aside and went to sleep on arm chair.

Next morning , akshat was waiting to leave when lakshmi bahu, dadi and guddan was whispering , actually they were making guddan sit and have something because she was not keeping well. " maa , yeh itna shor kyun macha rakha hai " " lalla woh main gudiya ko samjhane ki koshsh kr rahi hun k woh kch khaa , kal raat bhi usne kch nhi khaya" he looked at guddan with disappointment " yeh main kya sun raha hun, abhi baitho" " par jindal saab hamara kch khaane ka dil nhi kr raha" . Well akshat convinced her and made her have some juice and fruits with his own hands. He than left after giving a side hug to his gudiya and peck her forehead. Antara was looking at him amusement filled gaze, she very well knew that akshat was loving, caring and affectionate but only within the confines of their room.

Later that day, lakshmi bahu forces guddan to take pregnancy test which comes out to be positive " hum jindal saab ko kaise btayein ge" she told lakshmi " jaise sab apne pati ko btate hain waise hi ap nhi btayein gi sasumaa" lakshmi explained " nhi nhi nhi, hum nhi btaye ge " " pagal mat banye, AJ ko pura haq hai jaane ka" " chale hum koshsh karein ge".

At night when akshat came back, antara was waiting for him " aaye hum apka hi wait kr rahe thay" "kch khas kaam" " nahi bas aise hi guddan k baare main apse baat krna chah rahe thay" " uski tabiyat toh theek hai na" he suddenly got worried " haan woh bilkul theek, par ap kch badal gaye hain" " kya matlab" "matlab yahi k ap guddan ko aise treat krte hain jaise woh koi gudiya ho, bachi ho, woh itna mess create krti hai phr bhi ap muskura dete hain" " toh kya karun antara woh hai itni pyari , bilkul gudiya hai ,sirf meri hi nhi maa ki bhi gudiya hai" antara could clearly see the love he holds for guddan is tenfolds than what he used to have for her.

Next day , guddan tried telling him multiple times but failed miserably, than dadi have her idea to take lunch to resturant and tell him there but antara already took the lunch. After failing for thousand times she decided to stand outside his room early morning and will inform him as soon as he is outside the room. Everybody was aware of the good news except for akshat and antara.

She was standing outside his room, akshat came out " jindal saab suniye, hume apko kch btana hai" " haan bolo guddan" " woh hum...hu..hum" she was stammering, suddenly an important call came and he went downstairs, guddan ran after him but her feet slipped and she fell of the stairs screaming his name "jindal sahab".

Everybody came in rushing , but it was too late " lalla, tu bht regret karega" his mother told him , but he ignored and rushed towards hospital. After her thorough checkup doctor came to him " Mr akshat Jindal" " yes" " i am sorry to inform you that, your wife had a miscarriage" . Akshat was shocked would be an understatement because he was not even aware of this " dekha maine kaha tha na lalla".

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Posted: 6 years ago
#17

Awesome update

Love it

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Posted: 6 years ago
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It was too good,,Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#19

Feeling bad for guddu she have to bear so much

Continue soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
#20

Hey!

I'm first time commenting on your story

It's indeed beautiful.

I wish ki Guddu ab Jindal Sahab ko acche se lesson sikhaye.

Bohot saha Guddu ne, ab aur nhi.

Please continue soon ❤️

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