Journey From Khadoos Jindal to Romantic Jindal {Completed} - Page 44

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Shona1991

Wow...

Kash mere yeh b Aj jaise hote...??

He never wish me on my bday??

The surprise was good?????

Hope yeh bhuaji party na bigade????

Durga k sivay aur kon hoga?? BTW saru aur parv b ho sakte he kuch bol nahi sakte in Tino ka????????

Hope Aj ki Mann ki aur humari khwaish b Puri ho????????

Continue soon waiting for the update ????

There is no durga, saru and parv in the story as of now.

Keep guessing 😉😉😉

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Akshan5148


Rang main jab bhang dalega tab hee everyone will get to know the strength of their relationship. 💏💏

yesss but i hope jyada bhng n pde

Plz update next part too

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Posted: 6 years ago

Ok so shaam not fair y u guyss always give Lollipop to us ......😏😏😏

Or jahan tak BAAT hai call ki

I guess it's nimi herself....kyonki sab k scene like sivaay nimi k ....so let's see how much close am I ???

Till then waiting waiting for your updates....,😪😪😪

Sorry bhool gayi ....

Ye wala mast tha ....😝😝😝😝

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Kaya_luvakshan

Ok so shaam not fair y u guyss always give Lollipop to us ......😏😏😏

Or jahan tak BAAT hai call ki

I guess it's nimi herself....kyonki sab k scene like sivaay nimi k ....so let's see how much close am I ???

Till then waiting waiting for your updates....,😪😪😪

Sorry bhool gayi ....

Ye wala mast tha ....😝😝😝😝


Why do you think it's nimi?

I mean why would she. She is a positive character till date.🤔💭🤔💭

P.S. it's shaan not shaam.

Yes thanks for the appreciation too 💓💖💖

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Posted: 6 years ago

Arre yrr shaaan hi Likha tha typo error hua se shaam huaa sorry

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Posted: 6 years ago

Originally posted by: Kaya_luvakshan

Arre yrr shaaan hi Likha tha typo error hua se shaam huaa sorry


Heyyy that's ok no need to be sorry...

Maine to bas bola tha for future use..

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Posted: 6 years ago

Chapter 35

Guddan looks around in the Hall but cannot spot AJ.

Guddan: ye sab to theek hai par wo khud hain kahan? Abhi bhi koi surprise hai.

Angad: nai surprise nai hai, bhai bahar gaye hain kuch kaam tha.

Maa: bahar, wo bhi is waqt. Aisa kya kaam aagaya achanak se. Abhi tak to wo yahin wait kar raha tha.

Guddan: koi baat nai hai maa wo aajayenge. Hum wait karte haina unka and she proceeds to her room.

Nimi: didi ruko aap kahan jaa rahe ho?

Guddan: room main, kyun kya hua.

Nimi: nai aap nai jaa sakte

Guddan: matlab?

Nimi: matlab ye ki bhaiya ne mana kiya hai. He said you can't go there.

Maa: aajao baith jaate hain sab yahin.

Guddan sits and talks with her parents and other family members.

Guddan: angad akshat kahan hai. It's been an hour now. Abhi tak nai aaye. Sab theek hai na mera dil bahut bechain horaha hai.

Angad: haan bhabhi sachi sab theek hai pata nai kyun nai aarahe hain. I will call him.

Guddan: Maine kiya tha but his phone is not reachable.

Maa: Tu pareshaan kyun ho rahi hai aajayega lalla.

Aarti: OMG 😱😱😱

Guddan: aarti kya hua, aise kyun chilaya

Aarti: kuch nahi bhabhi news padh rahi thi (showing her phone) aap dekho kaisa accident hogaya hai?

Angad: (worried) kahan pe

Aarti: airport road pe

Angad: kya bakwas kar rahi hai aarti. Zara Tu TV on kar.

Guddan: angad kya hua tum itne pareshaan kyun ho rahe ho.

Angad: bhabhi wo kuch bhi nahi bas aise he

Guddan: angad sach sach bata kya baat hai 😥😥😥

Angad: bhabhi actually bhaiya, wo bhaiya haina

Guddan: angad speak up, kya problem hai

Angad: bhaiya b airport gaye hain bua ji ko laane.

Guddan: sits with a thud. Nai nai wo aarahe honge. Ye to abhi hua hoga accident. Tu kyun pareshaan horaha hai.

Just then they hear the news on TV saying that it was a very dangerous accident and casualty is still not known. A car is shown on the TV but number is not visible.

Guddan: (phone in her hand) ye akshat ka phone kyun nai lag raha hai.

Mummy: Tu zara neeche baith guddan. Revti, guddan k liye paani laa.

Guddan:( teary eyes) mummy sab theek hoga na. Mera jee bahut gabhra raha hai.

Mummy: Tu pani le sab theek hoga. Dekhna damadji abhi aayenge.

She does not respond and goes straight to the mandir and starts praying. In between she keeps asking Angad if AJ received the phone Or not.

It's been two hours now but nobody was able to contact him. Now guddan was crying badly and everyone was consoling her.

Guddan: maa akshat kyun nai aarahe.

Maa: Tu shant hoja lalla aaraha hoga. Tu chup hoja beta.

Just then they hear some noise and Rajkumar (RK) comes and calls out to angad. Everyone turns to the door and are shocked. AJ is standing with RK holding him for support. His head is slightly bleeding and their are bruises on his arm.

Guddan rushes to him wiping her tears and hugs him tight and he stumbles back due to sudden force but guddan holds him tight and takes him to the sofa.

Maa: lalla ye sab kaise hua aur angad ne bataya Tu didi ko lene gaya hai. Didi kahan hai.

Bua: main yahan hoon bhabhi. Lekin kisi ko meri fikar thodi hai. Is ghar ki badi bahu main zara sa B tareeka hai. Mehmaan ka swaagat kaise karna hai ye bhi nai aata isko. Aate he besharmon kisi tarah apne pati se chipak gayi. Na ashirwad liya na kuch. Kya ladki laayi hai bhabhi aapne mera akshat k liye.

AJ clenches his fist but guddan holds his hand and signals him no.

Maa: didi aisa nai hai wo lalla ko dekh k hum bahut darr gaye thay. Aap andar aaye. RK didi k liye paani lao.

Guddan: aap baithiye main first aid box laati hoon.

Angad: bhabhi ye lo.

She starts dressing the wound on his forehead first and slowly wipes the blood and then blows on the wound before putting the bandaid on it. Then she checks his arm and sees slight bruise on it and cleans that too.

Maa: lalla ye sab kaise hua

AJ: maa maine jab car park ki to jab main utar raha tha to achanak se ek bike aayi and wo Disbalnace hoke gir gaya and mujhe bhi chot lag gayi. Zyada kuch bhi nahi hua hai maa (looking at guddan)

Guddan then gets up and hands over the first aid box to angad and goes to wash her hands. She then goes to bua ji to take her aashirwad but she doesn't give her blessings to guddan and taunts her saying don't do this drama and all and stands up to leave.

Maa: didi aap kahan jaa rahi hain. Aaj guddan ka birthday hai.

Bua: mujhe neend aarahi hai main sone jaati hoon, aur waise bhi mujhe kisi ne thodi invite kiya tha and leaves.

AJ: aap sab kyun mood kharab kar rahe hain. Chaliye meri biwi ka birthday celebrate karna hai mujhe.

They all stand up and go to cut the cake. Guddan notices that AJ is not standing properly but does not say anything. She cuts the cake and feeds first to AJ and then to others. AJ notices she is upset with him but thinks to talk in the room.

Angad alongwith Guddan helps AJ to the room till the door. Guddan holds AJ with one hand and opens the door. Guddan is mesmerized by the decor of her room. She enters and makes AJ sit on the couch.

Guddan: ye sab

AJ: sirf tumhare liye.

He stands up to hug her but stumbles and falls back on the sofa.

Guddan: akshat sambhal k. Kya kar rahe hain aap (holding his hand).

AJ: kya hua tum bahut upset lag rahi ho. Main bilkul theek hoon.

Guddan: dekha maine abhi kitne theek hain aap. (She sits down and hugs him) aapko pata hai main kitna darr gayi thi, agar aapko kuch hojata. Aise karta hai koi. Na phone utha rahe thay na kuch. Mujhe nai karni aapse baat.

AJ: ouchhhh (holding his shoulder)

Guddan: kya hua? Mujhe neeche he samjh aagaya tha aapko aur b kahin chot lagi hai. Dikhaye zara

AJ: kuch bhi nahi hai, zara si chot hai

Guddan: aap zara shirt utariye, I will see myself.

AJ: kya baat hai room ka decor dekh k, someone is being too bold 😉😉

Guddan: aap na kabhi nahi sudhrenge ( and starts opening his buttons)

AJ removes his shirt. Guddan stands up and goes behind him to check the wound. She has tears in her eyes as she sees its a deep wound but she wipes them.

Guddan: aap zara uthiye aur stool pe baithiye wahan mirror k saamne. Main first aid box laati hoon.

Guddan helps him in sitting on the stool and gets the first aid box. She sits behind him on her knees and takes cotton with dettol to clean the wound. AJ hisses in pain and guddan cries but he doesn't notice.

Guddan: sorry sorry, main aaram se karti hoon.

AJ: itss ok guddan. Bas jaldi se kardo.

Guddan: hmmm

Guddan after cleaning the wound applies some antiseptic and bandages the wound. Unable to control her tears she hugs him from behind. AJ covers her hands which are on his bare chest with his hands.

Guddan: aapko pata hai mujhe kitni gabrahat ho rahi thi jab aap yahan nahi thay. Kyun karte hain aap aisa. Aapne socha hai mera kya hoga agar aapko kuch hogaya to. Aap kyun mujhe pareshaan karte hain itna.

AJ: shhh chup hojao tum pehle aur zara khadi ho jao

Before standing up she kisses his wound and then AJ hugs her tight while wiping her tears.

Guddan: aap sach sach bataye aapko kahin aur to chot nahi lagi haina.

AJ: ek kaam kardo poore kapde he utar do aur khudi dekh lo.

Guddan: akshatttt. Aap is waqt b mazak kar rahe hain. Boliye na sach sach.

AJ: sach main aur kahin chot nahi lagi hai.

Guddan: aap rest kijiye main change kar k aati hoon.

AJ: aise kaise meri itni mehnat (looking around the room) waste nahi ho sakti.

Guddan: matlab 👀👀👀

AJ: matlab baad main pehle zara ek birthday selfie lete hain (pinching her nose)

They take a lot of selfies while hugging and kissing each other.

Guddan: chaliye ab aap rest kijiye main ek baar bua ji ko dekh k aati hoon.

AJ: guddan nai aarti ko bol do, ab bua ji kuch bolengi tumhe, I don't like it.

Guddan: kuch nahi hoga. Main yun gayi aur yun aayi. Till then you change.

Guddan proceeds towards bua's room but meets her MIL on the way who tells her she already asked her if she needs anything but she denied.

Maa: lalla theek hai na? Zyada chot to nai aayi hai?

Guddan: chot to lagi hai but ab dressing kar di hai. He will be fine soon.

Maa: guddan, didi ne jo kuch bhi bola, us k liye main tujhse maafi maangti hoon.

Guddan: maa please aap aise kyun bol rahe ho. Chalo ab raat bahut hogayi hai aap jaake aaram kar lo.

Maa: haan theek hai tu b jaa lalla k pass.

Guddan enters her room and sees AJ is lying flat on his stomach without a shirt. She bolts the door and sits by his side.

Guddan: (ruffling his hair) aise kyun soye hain aap, dard ho raha hai.

AJ: nai baba dard nahi horaha but i thought I would be more comfortable without a shirt(placing his head in her lap).

She bends down and kisses his cheek and then feels his wound with tears in her eyes. He holds her hand and kisses it.

Guddan: why do you seem upset?? Bua ji ki wajah se?

AJ: she shouldn't have talked to you like this. You go and change first phir baat karte hain.

Guddan comes out of the washroom wearing a red sleeveless nighty. She goes on her side of bed and lies down facing the ceiling. AJ sees her lying down and moves closer to her mesmerized by her beauty.

AJ: Mrs. Jindal what do you intend to do? (Raising himself a bit on his elbow)

Guddan: nothing Mr. Jindal. What do you mean?

AJ: ouchhh (holding his elbow)

Guddan: akshat kya hua (sitting on the bed inspecting his wound on the back)

AJ: nai wo shayad elbow stretch hogaya thoda sa

Guddan: aap bilkul dhyan nahi rakhte hain apna (facing away from him)

AJ: (sitting on the bed) ab meri kya galti hai madam, aap itni zyada khoobsurat lag rahi hain (making her face him).

Guddan: aap to bas mazak he krna. Aapko koi fikar he nai haina apni (lying down on bed)

AJ: Arre baba main sach bol raha tha. Acha chodo ye sab bua ji ne kuch kaha to nai abhi.

Guddan: main nai gayi thi maa already unke paas jaa chuki thi. Ab so jaye.

AJ: (pulling her cheek) gusse main cute lagti ho tum.

Since AJ is sleeping face down, he puts her arm on her waist and buries his face in the crook of her neck. He starts kissing her neck, sucking her sweet spot while she moans his name.

Guddan: (breathing heavily) akshat aapko chot lagi hai, sambhal k.

AJ looks up to her and kisses and she too responds as they both were craving for it after all the chaos that happened. They part due to lack of oxygen and AJ places his head on her chest.

Guddan: I love you

AJ: I love you too (kissing the bare skin on her chest). Sorry tumhe bahut pareshaan kiya na aaj.

Guddan: aapne jaanbooj k nai kiya. It's ok.

AJ: (looking into her eyes) may I?

Guddan: aapko chot lagi hai akshat. I don't want you to hurt yourself jaise abhi thodi der pehle hua.

AJ: kuch nhi hoga and starts kissing her again.

Her breath hitches but she too can't resist him for a longer time. Her hands roam on his bare torso avoiding his wound. He then kisses her neck moving towards her shoulders and slides both the straps down her shoulders. He starts kissing her shoulder while marking her his.

Guddan lifts his head and kisses him fiercely. He raises a bit from his position as such guddan kisses him on the neck and he kisses her forehead while his free hand roams on her body.He moves from her forehead to her eyes and then to her nose. She on the other hand kisses his bare chest.

Both are now ready to and wanting to proceed further but just then they hear a knock on their door.


What do you guys think who would be knocking the door at this hour of the night???

🤔💭🤔💭🤔💭

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Posted: 6 years ago

Kya aap in dono Ko kahi Bahar nhi bhrj sakti???

Jab dekho tab koi na koi aa jata he disturb krne ko...

Sare velle Jindal Bhavan me he hai Kya??

Waise romance wala part was hot....

Hope ab koi Naya kaand na ho ...

Aur in donoko adhura kaam pura krvado plz.....

Warna Jindal sahab be suchme Himalayan na chale Jaye kantal Kar...

Anyway update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago

👏astonishing update

loved it 👍🏼

Akshan scenes  penned beautifully☺️ ❤️

Buaji aai nahi ki tantrum throw kar diya

Aargh!! 😡rang mai bang dalne kon aaya hai? It might be angad or aarti or dadi

update ASAP

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Posted: 6 years ago

Awesome update

Love it

Continue soon

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