||Secrets & Lies||- AkshAn SS (Part 16 PG 41) (27 May) - Page 5

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Posted: 6 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Secretfollower

Here i see a new side of guddan 👏...i think u also can't digest durga so tumne guddan ki memory hi skip kar di taki vo dura ki wrist twist kar de

😆...bcoz you know hamari.guddan kabhi aisa nahi kar sakti.u r on full revenge mode😈
Isn't it fair though😆 that witch is forever after Guddan's head ready to bite it off, you are right Guddan can never become someone so poisonous but my GK can⭐️

Feel bad for akshat but buddhe ek baar tadapte hue dekhna tha😆
Intehaan hogi tadap ki, i assure you😉 itni ki u people wld probably start to curse me!
I think in past guddan was a confident & ver " moofat" type.& believe in tit fir tat situation.guddan ke real.character se " ulat" ⭐️...i would love to see how aj handle this new guddan.
Aj won't be able to😆 Gk aint his Guddan
I think gk is a name of guddan
G - GUDDAN
K -?
Lovely...continue soon


I'll update on 12😃
Your views make me happy! :)
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Posted: 6 years ago
#42

Originally posted by: meera851

Wow

I have been wanting to read a story like this
Really awesome
Eagerly waiting for next part


I heard your unsaid request😃
You won't be disappointed😛
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Posted: 6 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: sumatra1234

Wow this is very interesting.

Loved it
Update soon


Glad to know you enjoyed it😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#44

Originally posted by: nahtani88

Fantastic

Update Soon


Thank you😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

Love it
Continue soon


Will do😉
Thanks for your vote of confidence😛
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Posted: 6 years ago
#46
Hi nish amazing story and awesome update concept is quite different though it reminded me of a show it was somewhat same difference being it was ml there who lost his memory and was a grey character there anyways coming here I am excited to read more of GK now is there a reason for her being the way she is like AJ became what he is after loosing his love and wife Antra there was a reason now is there a backstory for GK something really terrible,sad and tragic that made her what she is because it's hard to believe that is GK nothing like Guddan. Even with lost memories there are certain things that are part of you that does not change with having your memory or not. there has to be somewhat Guddans innocence, naivety, childlike and fun nature from her heart even if it's hidden from the world just like AJ.There are few things that I wanted to see not possible in the show or rather I should say with a character like Guddan but is possible with GK can I ask for it????
1. I want Guddan to dress up her age modern, bold yet elegant classy and sober. Something that represents her strong personality without making it awkward in front of the Dadi, AJ and rest of the family.

2. I don't want her to misbehave with Dadi , Kishor, Vardhan and AJ. They have been nice to her. Tadpaoing AJ by not remembering him and other stuff is ok. You know even if she is dark grey here she needs to have her heart at right place and doesn't look wrong.

3. This is a must you see Pervy is Pervy him eyeing Guddans is nothing new getting beaten up by her for it is also not I would love to read him trying to do the same with GK and what she does with him. I am sure even you are going to enjoy it. Since Pervy is bewakoof and pervy he is not going to stop and get beaten up again and again also how she kicks him out of Rewati's life bcz Guddu might have failed GK won't.

4. I want her to be rich and successful even more much more than Jindal's so that their mouth is shut for once and for all that she married for money to AJ.

5. I want AJ and the rest of the family to realise hard worth and specially AJ that this girl is admired, desire and wanted by everyone. I want them to realise that iss ladki ko ladko ki kami kabhi nahin hone wali even if she never allowed any guy to come near her or had a boyfriend that doesn't mean it will remain the same always especially when one when she doesn't remember him or their marriage and she has better prospectives and proposals present to her and second if Guddan took so long and refused to accept their marriage initially then there is no way GK is gonna come after him even if she accepts their marriage it is him who needs to go after her and fight for her/them. She won't hesitate from walking out of their marriage. It's him who needs to fight for it and stop doing Antra's jaap. It stays it will purely out of love and nothing else could stop her or bind her to them.

Sorry for long list of demand I hope you don't mind😳 even if you don't feel like writing some of these stuff it's ok but you need to know there is a reader of yours who might not be regular in commenting but is a huge admirer of your work. Keep it up and eagerly waiting for next part. 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#47

Originally posted by: BhataktiAtma.

Hi nish amazing story and awesome update concept is quite different though it reminded me of a show it was somewhat same difference being it was ml there who lost his memory and was a grey character there anyways coming here I am excited to read more of GK now is there a reason for her being the way she is like AJ became what he is after loosing his love and wife Antra there was a reason now is there a backstory for GK something really terrible,sad and tragic that made her what she is because it's hard to believe that is GK nothing like Guddan. Even with lost memories there are certain things that are part of you that does not change with having your memory or not. there has to be somewhat Guddans innocence, naivety, childlike and fun nature from her heart even if it's hidden from the world just like AJ.There are few things that I wanted to see not possible in the show or rather I should say with a character like Guddan but is possible with GK can I ask for it????

1. I want Guddan to dress up her age modern, bold yet elegant classy and sober. Something that represents her strong personality without making it awkward in front of the Dadi, AJ and rest of the family.

2. I don't want her to misbehave with Dadi , Kishor, Vardhan and AJ. They have been nice to her. Tadpaoing AJ by not remembering him and other stuff is ok. You know even if she is dark grey here she needs to have her heart at right place and doesn't look wrong.

3. This is a must you see Pervy is Pervy him eyeing Guddans is nothing new getting beaten up by her for it is also not I would love to read him trying to do the same with GK and what she does with him. I am sure even you are going to enjoy it. Since Pervy is bewakoof and pervy he is not going to stop and get beaten up again and again also how she kicks him out of Rewati's life bcz Guddu might have failed GK won't.

4. I want her to be rich and successful even more much more than Jindal's so that their mouth is shut for once and for all that she married for money to AJ.

5. I want AJ and the rest of the family to realise hard worth and specially AJ that this girl is admired, desire and wanted by everyone. I want them to realise that iss ladki ko ladko ki kami kabhi nahin hone wali even if she never allowed any guy to come near her or had a boyfriend that doesn't mean it will remain the same always especially when one when she doesn't remember him or their marriage and she has better prospectives and proposals present to her and second if Guddan took so long and refused to accept their marriage initially then there is no way GK is gonna come after him even if she accepts their marriage it is him who needs to go after her and fight for her/them. She won't hesitate from walking out of their marriage. It's him who needs to fight for it and stop doing Antra's jaap. It stays it will purely out of love and nothing else could stop her or bind her to them.

Sorry for long list of demand I hope you don't mind😳 even if you don't feel like writing some of these stuff it's ok but you need to know there is a reader of yours who might not be regular in commenting but is a huge admirer of your work. Keep it up and eagerly waiting for next part. 😊


I appreciate your extensive comment😃 but I'll have to apologise if you end up reading a story which is different from your list🥱
I already have a roadmap in mind regarding this story, though one or two points from your list do seem to have a similarilty with my ideas.
And yeah, itna lamba comment padhke bahot khushi hui😆
I won't disappoint you though😃
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Posted: 6 years ago
#48
Hey guys, I am back finally...😆
Rather than ranting uselessly, I'll give you your update😛

Recap: Guddan who has gotten up after a serious accident has suffered a memory loss and refused to register Jindals as her family

Part 2- The Truth

"What is even happening? GK enquired, feeling quite pissed with the new faces around her, who were staring at her, as if she was a demon.

She was one though, but she hasn't shown them...had she?!

"I am asking something, Rewa! GK shouted, her temper crossing the line.

Rewa glanced at Bhushan and as a look passed between them, Bhushan nodded and Rewa turned around to face the Jindals. "I request all of you to leave this room.

"What?! The bahus turned to each other, furious as well as confused.

"Tum humein yaha se nikaal rahi ho! Saru asked Rewa.

"It was a request, otherwise your suggestion can be considered, if you insist, GK interjected coolly, turning to Saru.

"Guddan, tum... AJ caught her wrist but the instant she passed him a look of disbelief, he let go and turning around to his family, asked them to comply with her request'.

"Par AJ... Durga tried to intervene but AJ raised his forefinger and leaving no room for argument, left the room.

As Durga glared at Guddan, GK raised her brows mockingly and signalled her to leave. Huffing, Durga left followed by others and soon GK was alone with Bhushan and Rewa.

"Let's start now, shall we? GK insisted and turning towards the window, stood ramrod straight with her hands crossed behind her back. "What is the date today?

"Its 13 Jan. 19 Rewa replied, in response to which GK stiffened.

"So, this means I am almost 20 and a half years old... GK trailed and turning around, approached Bhushan. "Is he alive?

In response, Bhushan looked away and GK clenched his fingers into a fist, almost feeling helpless. He was gone.

"The last I can recall is running out of the meeting when... GK trailed grimly to which Rewa nodded. "We were tricked that day, that call you received was a farce...it was a carefully devised plan to kill you.. Rewa stopped, uncertain, seeing the mirthless smirk on GK's lips.

"Don't stop on my account! I am hardly surprised.. GK chuckled darkly.

Flashback

As GK stood along the window, overlooking the streets of Dubai, two men dressed in thobes waited patiently in their seats.

"I won't compromise, Mr. Khurshid. GK plays by her own rules, GK turned around and sauntered towards them like a cat. As her fingers leisurely traced the contours of her table, she looked up and smirked at them. "But if you are willing to...

"Miss! A man interrupted her proposal, as the smirk turned into a frown and she turned to the door annoyed, to see a man panting for breath. "Seems like, you don't like the concept of living, Harris! She hissed, at which Harris gulped hard.

"There's a call from hospital! He replied, forwarding the phone as GK's eyes widened and rushing towards him, she snatched the phone and pressed it to her ears.

The conversation wasn't very pleasant as in the next few seconds, GK rushed past Harris out of the room, leaving him with the men, absolutely clueless.

As the contingent of cars, entered a lonely road amidst the desert, a shot echoed across, combined with a bursting sound. Soon a screeching sound followed and as a bullet whizzed past GK's head, she lost her control and rammed her head, straight into the steering wheel.

~*~*~*~*~*~

"I must have fainted then GK recalled, to which Rewa nodded.

"As far as I know, after that your car toppled over and over, while the barrage of bullet attacks from all around continued until Jayce showed up accompanied by his men... Rewa trailed, clenching her teeth.

"Ah! That guy! He is like my shadow, GK smiled slightly and turning around, patted on Rewa's shoulder, "It's not your fault, Rewa. I was the one who sent you to Mexico otherwise if you would have been by my side, I would have never got injured.

"So, what happened after I was rescued?! GK turned to her father.

"Your memories of the past 4 years were wiped clean due to your head wound. But that wasn't all, your personality switched...

And as Bhushan continued with the story, GK's eyes widened in shock and she struggled to hold on to her head, as blurry images like a maze poured in. A myriad of voices echoed in her ears and her heart started pounding heavily. Worried, as Rewa helped GK to sit on the sofa, GK hid her face in her palms, disappointed.

"Ridiculous! This is ridiculous! I am GK!! Guddan never existed, this is all a load of s***. That feeble, idiotic girl had died 5 years back when...this is plain ridiculous!! GK shouted slamming her hand against the glass table.

"Guddan! Are you ok!? Tum theek ho!! Akshat slammed on the door worried, hearing her shouts.

"And this man! IS MY HUSBAND!! Memories meri gayi thi, aapki nhi!! How could you allow me to go ahead with such idiocy and marry some unknown man! GK shouted at Bhushan.

"He is not an unknown man! You married him choice, because you loved him!! Bhushan shouted, tired of his daughter's rants.

"I don't love him! Guddan did! And I am not Guddan! I am GK, Garima Khurana! GK screamed back.

"Chillao mat! Tumhe kitna roka tha maine par tum par pyaar ka bhoot sawar tha! Let me make it clear, Akshat Jindal is your husband and my son-in-law! Bhushan replied getting frustrated.

"This Akshat Jindal is Guddan Gupta's husband, which I am not! GK smirked.

"You are Guddan Gupta! At least in this country, and before you start cooking up something, let me advise you Garima, tum dono ki shaadi legal hai aur registered bhi, tum mano ya na mano, you are Guddan Akshat Jindal! Bhushan snapped and marched out of the room.

"Wait up Dad! I am not finished with you...wait up! GK shouted and started to follow after him. But as she stepped out of the room, she came face to face with Akshat and stopped.

They continued to look at each other, one with hope while other with anger. "Rewa!! I want to leave RIGHT AWAY! GK hissed dangerously as Rewa came running and nodded in affirmation.

"Kahan ja rahi ho tum!? Durga interrupted in between and GK snapped.She was already disturbed by the recent revelations and this woman, who apparently was supposed to be her daughter-in-law, was trying to act like her mother-in-law, which didn't bode well with GK.

Overcome by a fit of rage, GK looked around here and there and spotting a vase, s he shattered it against the wall and twirling around Durga, held a broken piece against her neck.

"Didi

"Durga

"Guddan

Cumulative shouts rung across the hall as bahus mouths opened horrified while Dadi' s eyes widened in terror. AJ decided to take a step forward but GK stopped him.

"Don't! Mr. Husband! Just don't! And you! Pointing the sharp piece back to Durga's neck, GK continued "I am not in the best of my moods right now! And you probably won't appreciate the ways in which I cool down! Aren't you supposed to be my lovely bahu?! GK pressed the piece to Durga's neck as Durga's pulse picked up.

"Bahu ho toh bahu ki tarah behave karo, meri saas banne ki koshish bhi mat karna, varna tumhari saansein cheen ne mein mujhe zyada takleef nhi hogi! GK threatened menacingly as few drops of blood slid across the vase's edge and Durga hissed in pain.

"To be honest, I feel quite tempted to do so seeing as how you've successfully managed at bringing out my worst in a matter of few minutes BUT I'd rather not have my clean record tarnished, by your blood! And with that, Guddan pushed Durga towards Kishore as he caught her.

Gasping for breath, as Durga pressed her fingers against her throat and glared her way, GK threw the shard away and clicking her fingers, signalled Durga to keep her eyes to the ground. "I hope to never see your ugly face ever again but If we do meet, make sure to keep your eyes down...it will aid you in living longer! GK smiled and let herself be pulled away by Rewa, while Akshat watched her leave, his eyes as empty as space. Was it...because of him?! Had he done that?! Has he ended up destroying his happiness by his own hands?!

How was it?😃

Though, I know this part had no AkshAn scenes and the previous one hadn't either. The thing is, this story is kind of a suspense thriller so probably, AkshAn scenes won't be in a heavy number, the prime reason why we all read FF/OS/TS. But I do assure you, that story will be interesting and will gradually develop along with AkshAn's relationship😛

And yes, this story will have quite a few number of flashbacks so that I can form a background and give you an insight into GK aka Guddan's life. This story's background is a bit different from the show, as you must have noticed that Guddan married AJ coz of love. And since, story is about Secret and Lies, I'll develop them on the go so I recommend all the readers to pay heed to every single detail😃

And finally, after reading the update, you all will think that how this story will progress.😆

Halt! Screech! Stop! Don't think! Don't judge either! Because I love Akshan just as much! And I won't butcher their characters😃

Hope you all can find in your heart to continue with me, till then😃

Part 3 - PG 11

Edited by nish_vir - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#49
Nice chapter
Guddan ne kya band bajayi durga ki

Typical saas ban gayi guddan
So guddan was garima but memory loss change her identity

Continue soon nish
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Posted: 6 years ago
#50
How????how could you stop there or is it just me to whom the update looks small? Oh I am loving it if Guddan turning grey means we will get to see Durga getting bbbed by Guddan. I would love it I mean come on it was long over due. Now who is he which is mentioned here? Why and who are the people wanting to kill GK?? so many questions. This GK I am enjoying let her band bajao everyone who ever wronged her as Guddan be it 3 Bahus, Kaushalya, Pervy or anyone else. Bring it on. Update the next part soon pretty please.

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