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Posted: 6 years ago
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Chapter 9
After guddan's greh pravesh saru take her to akshat's room after entering the room guddan start to admire it but one thing she notice left her wondering their was some stains like haldi or something on the wall she also saw their was no flower vases on the room she look towards saru who just put her luggage on the corner

Sa- guddan ma apki smana yaha rak diya aaj aap aram kijiye kal hum milkar apki saman wardrobe main rakha denge

G- thanks saru tumse ek baat puche

Sa- puchiye na hesitate mat hoiye

G- yeh deewaro par daag aur yaha ek bhi vase nahi hai aise kyun

Sa- wo deewar par daag khane ki hai main ne apko kaha tha na ke 1 saal laga papa ko mujhse aur dadi se familiar hone main to jab bhi koi maid unke liye khana leke jata tha wo usse phek dete the aur rahi baat vase's ki to pata nahi pehel pehle papa ek dum violent ho jate the aur room ki cheez broke karte the to unhe chot na pohche humne glass ki cheez yaha se hata di

G- saru to kya abhi bhi wo aise violent hote hai

Sa- nahi abhi aisa kuch nahi hota aap dariye mat

G- I know main ne pehele bhi kaha tha par phir bhi again thanks unka khayal rakhne ke liye

Sa- ofo aap bhi na ma mein bhi pehele kaha tha thanks mat kahiye hum ne itne din apke amanat ko sambhala aab aap ki bari

G- aur main vada karti hoon aap logo ko apke Aj wapas dilayenge

Saru smile at her and hug her guddan also hug her back just then akshat come inside with kishore vardaan

K- acha saru tum akele hi guddan ma ke sath mil liya aaur hume introduce ka moka nahi dia

V- papa ki chamchi tu ja papa ke paas hume humari ma se baat karni hai

A- wo meri biwi hai tumse kyun baat karegi wo mujhse baat karegi na pari

G- aab aap jhagada mat kijiye hum sabse baat karenge

K-hii guddan ma main apka bada beta kishor

V- aur main chota beta vardaan

G- hii vaise mujhe thoda ajeeb laga raha hai apse ma sun kara

Sa- main ne kaha tha aab apko ma sun ne ki adaat dalni hogi

All laugh at this expect akshat as he don't understand why they are laughing kishor vardaan saru went from their guddan went and Lock the door akshat was setting in the bed

A- pari ye bed aise kyun sjaya hai hum yaha kaise soenge

G- akshat aap chinta mat kijiye hum change karke aate hai phir ye saaf karnge

A- ok jaldi ana ha

Guddan went inside the washroom after sometimes she come out and saw akshat playing with chotu she smile at his cuteness

G- akshat kya kar rahe hai

A- main na chotu ko kehe raha tha mi aab wo mere pass nahi soyega meri biwi mere saath soyegi jaise movie main hota hai

G- acha aap hume chotu se nahi dilayenge

A- hi hi hi pari chotu to tumhe janata hai na tumne mujhe chotu ko diya tha na

G- apko yaad hai ki ye main ne diya tha aaur kya yaad hai

A- aur kya kuch nahi pari mujhe sona hai ye saaf karona

Guddan thought may be he remember all that but due to his mental condition he can't describe it properly

G- acha aap jaiye kapde badal dijiye hum saaf kar denge

Akshat went inside guddan start to clean the bed akshat come out and saw bed was clean

A- pari tumne to pur saaf kara diya aab hum sarm se soyenge

Guddan smile at him both climbed on the bed guddan was on the left side akshat went near her guddan felling goosebumps seeing him come near to her

A- pari mujhe tumhari godi main sona hai main so jau kya

Guddan said nothing just look at him how can be some one so cute akshat thought she doesn't like it

A- pari tumhe bura laga sorry

G- nahi babu mujhe bura kyun lagege aayie

Akshat happily lay on her lap

A-main tumhara babu hu kya

G- ha aap mere cute babu ho

A- to promise karo apne babu ko chhod kar kabhi nahi jaogi

G- promise main apko kabhi chodke nahi jaungi

She slowly crease his hair he soon slept hugging her waist like a baby guddan kiss his forehead she start to remember their first meeting

Flash back (4 years ago)

At delhi bhushan ji arrange guddan's stay one of his friends flat who is out of country as a paying guste two more girl come their to stay as paying guest revati and Elena both are from same college only guddan was from another college

Trio became best friends within Short period of time as kaushalya angry at guddan she stop bhusan ji to sent money to guddan so he always send money secretly but that was not enough for living in Delhi

So guddan start to do part time job but due to her clumsy nature she always fired from jobs only after a week her friends always encourage due to which she didn't give up

It is their final year guddan was working in a restaurant and fortunately she was working their more than one week

The restaurant is non other than jindal's restaurant yes they have many branch of their restaurant it is one of them

The manager of the restaurant is cheap man she always try to do cheap things with girl employee of the restaurant as owner is not their no girls able to complain about him they will just leave the job

One day at evening guddan was as usual taking order from customer the manager call her and intensionally send her to store room guddan went their searching for the thing the manager come inside close the door he went towards guddan hug her from back

G- chodo mujhe kya kar rahe hai aap

M- are meri rani aise kaise chodo du pehele meri khwahish to puri kar loon

He was trying to kiss her guddan was resiting just then the door open their stand a man in three piece suit he is non other than Akshat jindal he come inside he pulled manager from guddan and punch him

A- teri himmat kaise hui ek ladki ke sath aise karne ki acha hua main yaha agya nahi to tera asli roop nahi dekha pata

Akshat get a information that in their delhi restaurant the manager didn't do his work properly they are facing loss their so giving indore restaurant work to vardaan he thought to shift for some time to Delhi and after settling everything their he will come back after reaching delhi he directly come to restaurant he saw the manager going towards the store room so he follow him

Akshat beat the manager and then fire him from the job she went to guddan

A- sorry miss agar tum koi compensation chathi ho to main dene ke liye tayar hoon

G- thank you sir aapne meri izzat bachayi yehi mere liye kafi hai bas main apni job continue karna chahati hoon kya main wo kar sakti hoon

A- of cours tumhari koi galti nahi hai infact tumhari salary thodi badha di jayegi

G- thanks sir par salary badhana

A- sirf tumhari nahi uske wajahse jo bhi lady employee problem face kiya hai unki.salary badha di jayegi

All say thanks to akshat akshat said now he will be take the restaurant responsibility after settling everything and find a new and trust worthy manager then he will go back

After he went guddan just admiring his retiring figure

Flash back end

Guddan come out of her memory she saw it's 2 pm she slightly shift akshat to other side she sleep on the other side of the bed akshat in his sleep went near to guddan hug her from waist hide his face on her neck and sleep in that position

Guddan shiver at the contact of his face on her neck she smile at him and drift to sleep

So comment and like

As my exam finished now I will be update the story regularly

Stay tuned for my ss

Love you all 😳😳
Edited by Angelsanvika08 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#62
Awww Akshat ko Guddan ne Babu bulaaya ⭐️😆

Too cute ... Update soon Sanvi 😳
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Posted: 6 years ago
#63
Nice one...
Plz update the nxt part soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#64
Hey nice chapter
So finally how Guddan and Akshat met is revealed
So Akshat helped Guddan in their first meet 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome update
Love it
Fb is nice
Continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome update dear
Loved it
Aww akshat is so cute
Now wanna see hw guddan will bring back old akshat
Plzzz do continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#67
Chapter-10
Next day morning sun ray peep through jindal mension Akshan are sleeping peacefully sun ray hit guddan's face she woke up and saw akshat sleeping hiding within her like a baby she smile and kiss his forehead

She then carefully get out of bed then cover akshat with the duvet she then went to get ready it's her first day at her sasural as a daughter in law as well as mother in law she wear a beautiful orange colour Saree she get ready wear her mangla sutra apply sindoor in her forehead she saw akshat still sleeping so decide to let him sleep she will wake him up after some time

Guddan went down stair and saw dadi on the temple she went to her she first take blessings from kanha ji then from dadi she smile at her giving her blessing

S- guddan beta tum itni jaldi uth gayi

G- ji dadi aaj humara pehla din hai yaha hum late nahi hona chate the

S- acha kia beta

G- dadi aap arti karne ja rahi thi par baki sab kanha hai

S- beta wo koi jaldi nahi uth pata na to main hi akele karti hu

G- koi nahi dadi chaliye hum sath main arti karte hai

Guddan then take the arti thaal and start to do kanha ji's arti with singing
Hey mann mohan..hey mann mohan..
Hey mann mohan..

Hey muralidhar hey damodar
Krishana muraari hey natnagar
Hey muralidhar hey damodar
Krishana muraari hey natnagar
Bhul gaye kyaa binati sunkar
Bhul gaye kyaa binati sunkar
Hey mann mohan hey karunakar
Hey muralidhar hey damodar
Krishana muraari hey natnagar

Andhiyare mein gire hue hoon hey gopala
Jyotipunj bankar raah dikhaao hey nand lala
Kaise paar karungi tum bin
Kaise paar karungi tum bin
Jeevan saagar hey karunakar
Hey muralidhar hey damodar
Krishana muraari hey nandnagar
Hey muralidhar hey damodar
Krishana muraari hey natnagar

Kanhaa..krishana..hey kanhaa.

All come out of their room's hearing guddan's arti akshat also come their all went to mandir kishor vardaan saru are happy seeing guddan they join their hands and stand their while durga laxmi making faces akshat was clapping his hand in excitement

Guddan finished her arti dadi was very much pleased because of guddan everyone come for arti

A- wow pari tum kitna acha gati ho mujhe prasad do na yummy yummy

Guddan smile at him

G- nahi aap ne abhi brush nahi kiya na aur nahaya bhi aap pehele ready ho jaiye

Akshat immediately ran to his room in order to get ready all laugh at him

Then guddan tell them all to get ready then only they can take arti all went to get ready dadi take guddan to kitchen she did puja of the stove then dadi said her to prepare breakfast as it is her peheli rasoi ki rasam

Guddan happily agreed saru come their after getting ready she take the arti eat prasad dadi said that guddan is going to cook saru offer her to help but she denied saying she will cook alone and she just have to taste it saru smile at her

After two hours guddan finished her cooking she cooked aloo puri poha halwa and kheer she then with the help of the servant set the table and told them to call everyone

She went to their room to check akshat with prasad she went inside and saw akshat was already he was trying to comb his hair guddan went to him take the comb form him

G- dijiye hum karte hai

Then he comb his hair neatly akshat was happy with his hair style

A- pari aab main handsome lag raha hoo na

G- ha bhaot handsome lag rahe hai

Akshat happily hug her guddan was feeling goosebumps with his proximity then akshat kiss guddan's cheek saying thank you guddan become red at this she blush furisoly then Compose herself

G- chaliye niche breakfast karte hai aaj hum ne khana banya hai

A- wow tum yaha le aao main khaunga meri pari ne banya hai

G- yaha kyun niche sab ke saath khate hai na

A- wo dyaan durga aur chudail laxmi hai na wo kehete hai ki main pagal hoon na to main yahi kahoonga to saru humsa mere liye yahi khana lati hai

Guddan chuckled at the name akshat give to durga laxmi then get angry how can they do it to him she have to get akshat out of the room

G- chaliye wo dono kuch nahi kehengi apki pari hai na

Akshat noded at her both went down stairs everyone present at dining table all are stunned to saw akshat their

Sa- are papa aap main apki khana leke anewali thi aaj khana apki pari ne banya hai

A- pata hai saru pari be mujhe bataya hai

G- saru akshat hum sab ke sath khayenge yahi

D- nahi wo humare sath nahi kha sakte unhe apne room main hi khate hai varna pata nahi kya karenge

L- ha yeh hume bhi thik se khane nahi denge pagal kanhike

G- laxmi bahu mat bhuliye wo apke sasur hai pagal bolne se pehle so baar sochiye

V- laxmi kitni baar tumhe kaha hai papa ko asie mat kaho

G- rehene do vardaan durga bahu laxmi bahu pehel aap jaise bhi apne sasur se bartab karte the karte the aab wo mere pati hai unke khilaf ek shabd bhi nahi

Both the dayan chudail shocked at her behavior they thought her to be innocent cow types but she is roaring like lionesses

Dadi and saru are happy now guddan will protect akshat and give him his lost respect back to him

Laxmi apologize to akshat guddan make seat akshat on his chair she start to serve everyone

They start to eat it was ver testy they praise guddan dadi give neg to guddan first she was reculant but dadi said it's her right so guddan keep it kishor gift him a diamond set while vardaan give her a golden breclet

Saru then give her a saree

Sa- guddan ma meri salary thodi kam to mein apko bas saree de payi

G- saru gift dene wale ki niyat dekhi jati hai gift ki kimat nahi yeh bahot accha hai

Akshat saw everyone giving guddan gifts so he went to garden come with some rose then give it to guddan

A- pari sab tumhe gift de rahe hai par mere pass kuch nahi hai to yeh rose lo

Guddan blushingly take the rose kishor vardaan saru tease guddan she shut them faking anger

Kishor vardaan went to their respective work saru was on leave because of the wedding she will join after two days

Saru and guddan are cleaning the table dadi went to have some rest akshat went to play with chotu laxmi and durga are in the garden conducting their dayan chudail meeting

Sa- ma vaise mana padega apne khana bhot testy banya apki ma ne sikhaya

G- tumhe to pata hai na saru humari asli ma to bachpan main hi hume chodke chali gayi aur kaushalya ma mujhe jyada pasand nahi karti hai to unhone mujhe kabhi kuch nahi seekhaya aur khana bana na hume kiss aur ne sikhaya hai

Guddan blush slightly saru get the hint who it could be

Sa- wo khas insan kahni papa to nahi

G- ha

Sa- wow ma bataiye na papa ne apko kaise sikhaya

Both went to the hall guddan then start to tell her how akshat tech her cooking


That's it friend

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Kavya hope now your mood will change😊😊😊



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Posted: 6 years ago
#68
Guddan behaves so matured here 👏😳
Loved it 😊
Continue soon 😃
Edited by Raglak_akshan - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#69
Loved the update Sanu
Guddan shut the mouth of that daayan and churail very well
I love Guddan's character here.
M quite eager to read how AJ taught Guddan cooking 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Great Guddan gave perfect reply to chudail and daayan Jodi
Loved Akshat bought rose for Guddan
Nice update

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