Nothing is Impossible-AkshAn FF (LAST EPI)(Pg 64) UPDATED: 1ST MARCH - Page 4

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Awesome update
Love it
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Posted: 6 years ago
#32

Originally posted by: Raglak_akshan

Joeee Di🤗

Thanks for this SUPER SE BHI UPAR update😆👏
U know it takes full lot of efforts to keep the readers hooked to the writeup and u manage it with perfection
As always I'll once again repeat that u definitely are a script writer😉for the essence ur writeup has ... as if one is watching the show itself😳
Already started waiting for the next update😛😉
Continue soon😆



Thank u so much for the appreciation 😊 I repeat I am not a script writer 😆 I will try to update in the weekends 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
#33

Originally posted by: Bee222

I agree your writing feels just like a script😉


So AJ appreciates Guddan but doesn't know it's Guddan he's appreciating😛Waiting to see how you develop their equation😉



Thank u 😆
Well this is just the starting
A lot more to happen
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Thank u 😊
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Originally posted by: plmzaq

Awesome update

Love it
Continue soon



Thank u 😊 I will try to update the next one this weekends
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Episode 3


Hi everyone. So I am back with the third episode. There won't be much Akshan scenes in this episode so it will be that one boring episode. I had to write this to make Akshan meet each other more often 😆 Anyways here is the update

Scene 1: Guddan's House
The episode begins with Guddan reaching her home and her father is there.

Guddan: Papa!

Guddan hugs her father.

Bhushan: How is my doll?

Guddan: I am fine. Papa where is Maa and Chutki?

Bhushan: Kaushaliya went out and Chutki is studying in her room.

Guddan: Papa I have something for you!

Bhushan: Is it?

Guddan takes out the Rs3000 and passes it to her dad.

Bhushan: This money?

Guddan: I earned it.

Bhushan smiles and puts his hand on Guddan's head.

Bhushan: Beta what is the need to work? Sometimes you work as a plumber, sometimes you help people sell things door to door, sometimes florist, see it's not a must to always work. You should do what you like.

Guddan: That is the problem Papa. I don't know what I like to do. I want to become actress but it's impossible to do that right.


Bhushan: If you really want to be actress, then try for it.

Guddan: No, no. Initially I wanted to become actress, but later I realise so many problems. First some stupids fans disturb them for no reason, and then those weird dresses. No, no I can't do it.

Bhushan: Then what you want to do?

Guddan: I don't know.

Bhushan: Look beta, if you are happy. I am happy too. If doing these jobs make you happy then you can continue, I won't say anything.

Guddan: Papa, problem is not with you. It's with Maa. She taunts me for no reason.

Bhushan: That is her love for you.

Guddan: I know but still... And Papa don't give a single rupee to Maa. Keep that money safely.

Bhushan: Why?

Guddan: I have seen her stealing money from your wallet.

Bhushan: I know.

Guddan: Why don't you say anything to her? Stealing is not good.

Bhushan: Beta, your Maa is taking money, not stealing. Whatever is mine, is my family's.

Guddan: Papa you are so good. You know people take advantage of your goodness and I don't like that.

Guddan hugs Bhushan.

Bhushan: Have you ate anything?

Guddan: I have already eaten in the NGO with the kids.

Bhushan: Good.

Guddan: Have you? No right. Come. Let me serve you food.

Guddan serves Bhushan food.

Bhushan: (in his mind) My daughter is so naive and innocent. There are some things which I can't explain to her. I hope her in-laws would be understanding and my Guddan gets a good husband. She has endured a lot.

Scene 2:Jindal Mansion
After a few days,

Saraswati is looking through her wedding album. Shweta comes there.

Shweta: Saraswati?

Saru: Shweta?

Saru tells the servant to call Laxmi downstairs since Shweta is here.

Shweta: Is this your wedding album?

Saru: It just arrived.

Shweta and Saraswati sees the pictures in the wedding album.

Shweta: You are looking so beautiful in all the pictures.

Saru smiles.

Just then they come acrosss a picture where Guddan is talking to AJ.

Saru: What is this Guddan's picture doing here? And why is she talking to AJ?

Shweta: You know this insolent girl!

Saru: I know her very well. She used to be in my college. Such a stupid girl. Every second she will make a mistake. I don't like her at all. She failed her first year and got outsed of college. Her mom and my mom are friends that's why she came to my wedding.

Shweta: She is the same girl who spilled coffee on my dress! Not only that she fought with me and even pulled my hair.

Saru: I know how stupid she is. But I didn't know she will be so daring to pull your hair? Are you sure?

Shweta: Yes...

Saru: Her name should not be Guddan. Her name should be Galti.

Shweta: Galti Se Naa Ho Payega.

Shweta and Saru laughs and gives each other a hi-5.

Shweta: Really that Guddan girl is...

AJ comes there. Shweta and Saras gets quiet.

AJ: Guddan?

Shweta: AJ that girl who spilled coffee on my dress in Rahul's wedding...

AJ: Don't even take her name infront of me. Remember I don't want to hear her name in this house again!

Saru: Okay AJ.

Durga, Laxmi and Dhruv comes there.

Durga: AJ can you do me a favour?

AJ: What is it?

Durga: Can you help me drop Dhruv to school? I have a lot of work at home today. There is a Puja.

AJ: Alright.

AJ takes Dhruv with him.

AJ: Dhruv beta let's go! Today ADaJi will bring you to school.

Dhruv: Okay ADaJi. (Clapping his hand)

Dadi comes there.

AJ: Maa, you won't go to temple today?

Dadi: I will go later.

AJ leaves taking Dhruv.

Shweta: This Guddan's picture is not looking good. What will AJ say if he sees the picture?

Saru: You are right. Let me do one thing. Let me remove this Guddan's picture from this album.

As Saraswati is about to remove Guddan's picture, Dadi comes there.

Dadi: The wedding photo album is here. Let me see.

Before Saraswati could say anything, Dadi takes the album from her.

Dadi: I will see the album in my room.

Dadi takes the album with her.

Saraswati and Shweta looks at each other as they fail to take out the picture.

Laxmi: Shweta Dii, come to my room upstairs. Let me show you the saree I am going to wear for today's kitty party.

Shweta: Okay.

Laxmi: Saru you also come with us.

Saraswati and Shweta follows Laxmi.

Later,
Laxmi and Shweta is about to go,

Dadi: Laxmi Bahu where are you going?

Laxmi: Dadi actually, there is a kitty party in the afternoon, so we are going for that.

Dadi: Okay, go for your kitty party now. I don't want you to get late.

Laxmi smiles and leaves.

Durga: What was the need to let her go?

Dadi: Durga Bahu...

Durga: Dadi, have you had your medicine?

Dadi: Yes! You go and work.

Durga: Saru come with me.

Saraswati nods.

Scene 3:Road
Guddan is fixing a car. She is finding difficulty to fix the car.

Guddan: Maa and Chutki went for shopping. They must be having so much fun.

Laxmi and Shweta are in the car.

There is a cafe near the garage.

Shweta: Laxmi let me buy some pastries from the cafe for the party.

Laxmi: Alright Shweta Didi.

Shweta goes to the cafe. While Laxmi waits in the car.

Guddan is done fixing the car.

Guddan: Now how should I know that the car is working or not? On top of it, it's Happy Jii's brother's car.

Guddan: I think I should go for a test drive.
Let me ask Happy Jii.

Laxmi: This Shweta Dii is taking so long. I am getting bored sitting here in the car. Let me see where she is.

Laxmi comes out of the car and waits for Shweta. Vardaan calls her.

Laxmi: Hello Babyboo.

Laxmi: I am going for kitty party. Shweta dii went to buy something and I am bored here.

Laxmi is chatting with Vardaan on phone.

Guddan is driving the car

Guddan: Well, it's good Happy Jii gave me permission for the test drive.

The car stops midway.

Guddan: Why is the car not starting? I hope it's not spoiled.

Guddan tries again and she drives the car. As she starts the car, she sees a lady(Laxmi) and she stops the car from hitting her.

But in that turn of event, the car accidentally spills mud on Laxmi's dress totally. Laxmi gets shocked.

Guddan gets scared and she quickly comes out of the car.

Laxmi: What have you done?

Guddan: Sorry! I didn't do it by purpose. I was test...

Laxmi: Shut up! Now what will I do? You spoiled my dress.

Guddan: You should go home and change your clothes. Simple.

Laxmi: But kitty party starts in a while, if I go back home change and do makeup and then go again, it will take me 3 hours! By then kitty party will be over.

Guddan: Kitty party? Party for kittens!

Laxmi: Keep Quiet! Because of you my party is missed.

Guddan: How is the kitty party so important?! I tell you what. You go back home. How can you go to party like this?

Laxmi: I won't spare you, I am telling you?

Just then Happy Jii comes there,

Happy: What happened Guddan?

Laxmi: This girl spilled mud on me.

Guddan: No, no Happy Jii. It was by mistake. I was test driving and the car was not starting suddenly. When it start, she was there, and while stopping the car , the mud spilled on her. I didn't do it intentionally.

Happy: Look Madam Jii, I apologise on her behalf.

Laxmi: Get her out of my face, if not I don't know what I will do!

Happy: Let's go Guddan!

Guddan: But Happy Jii the car...

Happy: I will see that later.

Happy takes Guddan away. Just then Guddan sees Kaushaliya and Revati who is eating pastry standing infront of them. Guddan gets shocked.

Shweta comes to Laxmi who is wiping the mud on her face and hand. Shweta gets surprised seeing her like this. She laughs a bit.

Laxmi: Not funny.

Shweta: Laxmi who did this!

Laxmi: That stupid garage girl. Now I can't even go to kitty party.

Shweta: What are you going to do?

Laxmi: Go back home and what else!

Shweta: But...

Laxmi: Shweta Dii you go to kitty party. I go home.

Shweta: (disgusted)Alright! Laxmi...you will go in the car like this?

Laxmi: Then what should I do?

Shweta: This is AJ's car. He will get mad if he sees dirt in his car.

Laxmi: That's right! Then what should I do?

Shweta: I tell you what! I take this car and go to Kitty Party, you take an auto and go back home.

Laxmi: What? Why?

Shweta: We have no option.

An auto comes and Laxmi goes in. The auto wala tries not to laugh.

Laxmi: I won't spare that girl a lot. I will teach her such a lesson, she will rememeber life long!

Shweta goes in the car.

Scene 4:Guddan's House
Kaushaliya drags Guddan home.

Revati: Maa at least listen to Dii.

Bhushan: Kaushaliya, what happened?

Kaushaliya: Ask your this over-pampered daughter what she has done?

Guddan: Papa..

Kaushaliya: I found her working in the garage. Can you believe it?

Bhushan: So what's wrong in that?

Kaushaliya: What's wrong in that? Oh yes you never see her mistakes.

Kaushaliya: By working in garage she tarnished our reputation. What will people say?

Revati: What is wrong in that Maa?

Bhushan: Exactly. I don't think its wrong.

Kaushaliya: Oh wow. Doesn't this mistake have any shame? Doing a guys job!

Guddan: Maa, its not necessary only guys do this kind of job! Last time also you...

Kaushaliya: Just keep quiet! Because of your mistakes, I have to suffer. Now people will say look Kaushaliya Gupta's daughter is working as a plumber, in a garage! Now I can't even said that she is my step daughter!

Bhushan: Kaushaliya!

Guddan gets teary eyed.

Kaushaliya: This Guddan herself is wicked. That's why her mom died a few days after she was born.

Guddan breaks down and she rushes into her room and cries.

Revati follows her.

Revati: Dii!!

Bhushan: Kaushaliya you have not done the right thing by making Guddan cry!

Kaushaliya: Aur Saar Pe Charao Iss Galti Ke Dukaan Ko!

Bhushan: Baas Bohot Hua!

Scene 5: Jindal Mansion
Dadi: Durga Bahu, I am leaving for the temple now.

As Dadi gets up, she feels sick.

Durga: Dadi, are you okay?

Dadi: Yes, yes I am.

Durga: Are you sure?

Dadi: Yes

Durga: Look, if you are not feeling well. You can take rest in the room.

Dadi: I am okay Durga Bahu. Once I go to the temple, I will get peace there and feel better.

Durga: You want me to come with you?

Dadi: No need. Anyways, Dhruv is coming back now. You need to feed him lunch also.

Durga: Let me take you to the car at least!

Durga and Saraswati helps Dadi to the car.

Scene 6:Guddan's Room
Guddan is crying hugging her actual
mother's photo.

Guddan: Mamma, I am missing you a lot. Why did you leave me? Everyone thinks you left because of me? It's not true right!

Revati knocks the door.

Revati: Dii, open the door please. Aapko Meri Kasam!

Guddan wipes her tears and opens the door.

Revati: Dii... Don't feel bad for what Maa said.

Guddan: Chutki...

Guddan hears Bhushan and Kaushaliya arguing. She gets sad and she is about to close the door, Revati nods no.

Guddan goes out of the house.

Revati: Dii, where are you going? Dii!!!

Revati: Oh god, I wonder where Dii is going!

Revati: She must have gone temple! Whenever Dii is upset, she always goes there.

Scene 7: Temple
Guddan reaches the temple.

There she prays.

Guddan: Lord Krishna, please don't create fights between Maa and Papa. Maybe she didn't give birth to me, but still she is my mother. Please Lord Krishna make her start liking me. I don't know why people think step daughter or step mother are bad. Make her forget the word step. I don't like it when she refers me as stepdaughter.

Guddan: Somewhere it's my fault too. I always do mistakes!!! That's why my mother left me.

Guddan cries.

Guddan: Only Papa and Chutki understands me. Nobody else. Maa always misunderstands me. Everyone else does too. And I am good for nothing. Can't I ever do anything right. When I will able to do things properly???

Dadi is also there praying.

Dadi: Oh God, please bring back happiness to my family. My LalLa has suffered a lot. Will he never be happy? Please give my LalLa happiness.

Dadi: I am sure that day will come but when? My LalLa has suffered a lot in pain. Now that's enough. Can't anything happen?

Dadi feels pain in her chest. She holds her chest and collapses on the floor as the prayer tray drops from her hand.

Guddan is there and she is shocked to see that. She quickly rushes to Dadi.

Guddan: What happened to you?

Dadi is unconscious.

Guddan: Oh God, looks like she had an heart attack! What should I do?

Guddan: Should I call ambulance?

Guddan calls for help. But nobody is there.

Guddan: What should I do?

Guddan puts Dadi's arm around her neck and with difficulty she climbs down the stairs. The driver sees this.

Driver: What happened to Dadi??

Guddan: I don't know. I was praying, and then I found her collapsed on the floor. I think she got an heart attack.

Driver: Oh god.

Guddan: We have to take her to the hospital.

Driver takes Dadi to hospital. Guddan is with her.

Guddan: You came here to pray for Lord Krishna. Lord Krishna won't let anything happen to you.


AJ gets a phone call.

AJ: Hello?

AJ: What?? (Shocked)

Scene 8: Hospital
Guddan brings Dadi to the hospital.

Doctor: What happened to her?

Guddan: I don't know. I was praying in the temple and then I found her unconscious on the floor. I think she had a heart attack.

Doctor: How is she related to you?

Guddan: Well, I don't know her. She is like my Dadi. Please save her life doctor. Please!!!

The doctor takes Dadi inside.

Later AJ reaches there,

Driver: Sir this was the girl who brought Dadi unconscious in the temple. (Pointing at Guddan)

AJ goes there and he gets surprised seeing Guddan.

AJ: You?

Guddan: Uncle?

AJ: So you were the one who brought Maa here?

Guddan: Oh so that Dadi is your mother.

AJ: Yes! What happened to her?

Guddan: The thing is...

AJ: Wait a minute! Did you do anything wrong due to which Maa...

Guddan: No, it's not like that!

AJ: What's your problem? What do you exactly want!

Guddan: Actually..

AJ: (super furious) Look if anything happens to my Maa I won't spare you!

Guddan: Nothing like that. You are misunderstanding me.

AJ: Shut up!!!

Guddan gets scared.

Just then the doctor comes out,

AJ: Doctor, how is Maa?

Doctor: Don't worry she is out of danger now.

AJ and Guddan gets relieved.

Doctor: (to Guddan) And yes you were right. She had a mild heart attack. Now she is alright. Luckily you brought her in the right time.

AJ looks at Guddan and starts to realise he was wrong in scolding her and it was not her fault.

Doctor: You can come in now.

AJ goes in.

The episode ends.

Precap: AkshAn scenes as AJ drops Guddan home. Guddan bonds well with Dadi.

First of all, I apologise for not adding much Akshan scene in this episode, and I promise this will be the first and last episode without Akshan scenes. That's why to make up for that there will be a lot of Akshan scenes upcoming in the next few episodes. I will post the next update on Wednesday.
Edited by randomfancrics - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#37
Superb update
Guddan saving Dadi's life was good
I hope AJ realises in next update Guddan's good quality and bonds with her.
Waiting for next update
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Posted: 6 years ago
#38
Yay, I'm excited that they're gonna meet more often now 😉 update soon!
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Posted: 6 years ago
#39
Awesome update
Love it
Continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#40
Thank you for updating

I am so exited for the upcoming updates full of Akshan scenes.

You're one of the most talented writers around so keep blessing us with these awesome updates .

P.S I noticed that u changed ur DP from my previous love to my current love , they both are extremely special to me.

Love u
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Keep writing

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