Bonded by Fate- AkshAn FF (Part 48 Pg 117) (UPDATED-2 Jan) - Page 9

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Posted: 6 years ago
#81
Great update Nish
If Akshaan keeps this up 3 Devils will get diabetes
Love the dhamki at the end
Please kick Shewta out
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 6 - Not me, Not you, It's US

Bure khane se hui subah ki buri shuruat ka bura nateeja AJ ke employees ne chukaya. He literally made them hop on one leg. Every food he tasted felt ten times worse. His taste buds felt damaged to point of no return and his mood was way beyond the moon!

"This is wrong!! Hubby disappeared like Mr. India the instant Guddan warned about the food, why couldn't I become Mrs India!, Lakshmi whined while rolling all over the bed holding her stomach.

"The food w...was in...e.d..edible and yet dadi forced us to ea...baaarfff!, Saru's complaint from inside the toilet was cut by her vomits.

"We paid for messing with Guddan the wrong way. We targeted a woman's dignity and this is our punishment, Durga proclaimed standing like a statue, surprisingly immune to the effects of poisonous food.

"So should we just accept her? Lakshmi asked shocked.

"Nhi, we've been doing things the wrong way. One thing is very clear, if AJ didn't burst at her even after eating that' food, then there is no way he is going to oust Guddan from his life, no matter what mess she creates, unless Guddan wishes to walk out on her own, Durga explained, immersed in thoughts.

"Vo chidiya kyu chodegi AJ ko, she married him by cheating! Lakshmi retorted.

"And yet, this nagging feeling in the back of my brain says that there is something we don't know...and knowing that information will help us to remove Guddan from our lives, Durga pondered hard, raising her right eyebrow.

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Guddan plopped on the bed, disappointed. How was she even capable of concocting such disastrous mess in the name of food? Even after following the Utube...orrr maybe not, Guddan reminisced how mistakenly she had emptied the jar of red chilly in the rajma, when she was asked to put a spoon or two.

Guddan looked at the volume of sarees and suits scattered over the mattress, given as a gift of her first rasoi by Dadi. Dadi was way too good to be true.

Now, to stuff them into the closet.

She got up from the bed, and opened the closet, only to be amazed by the size of it. It was almost like another room, the north wall was lined up with coats, overcoats, suits, shirts, traditionals and what not! This collection could put any mall to shame!! On the eastern wall was a gigantic wardrobe. As she pulled the first rack towards her side, a collection of watches revealed themselves. Impressed, she opened the other rack to come across a collection of ties- striped, dotted, plains...everything. And as she opened the last rack, her eyes widened comically.

Spectacles- with a variety of funky frames that were totally not uncle's style. Aviators, cat eyed, without rim and others that she had no clue about.

Strange! Even after owning masses of them, he wears those spects', she wondered to herself, confused.

And the western wall was lined with all types of footwears, at various levels just like in malls! Guddan looked at the collection of sharp tipped shiny boots of various colours and mammoth sizes but what caught her eyes was the pair of neon coloured sneaker, which was way too gaudy even for her own tastes!

AJ uncle ke shauk unki tarah anutthe hai' she thought and moved towards the northern wall and slid the door of almirah to left to reveal space.

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Akshat entered his room tired. It was certainly peaceful.

Peaceful!?

AJ looked around the room confused, where was Guddan?

"Well whatever! At least I can breathe in some peace, Akshat spoke to himself and entered his closet.

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Guddan sat by the poolside, dipping her legs in the chilled water. This felt nice. She tried to comfort herself but failed miserably. She had married AJ but what now? She didn't think it through and now guilt was gnawing at her. Just because she thought he was a good man, to save him from Shweta, she had messed her life. The reality came crashing on her today as the trideviyan were forced to eat the food she made. She is now their mother-in-law. She could hardly become a good daughter to his mummy, has failed in the test of being a big sister to her chutki and now, she not only has daughter in laws to look after, but also a mother-in-law, 3 grown up sons' and a very grown up' husband. And for the most part till now, he had been the one looking after her. Plus she was a replacement, a terrible one at that, of a woman who holds a man's heart even after her demise. After all, this was the only reason why AJ had accepted her because his late wife wished for him to move on.

"I wonder what he was like when she was alive, Guddan spoke to herself, leaning back.

However, she came face to face with Parv and almost lost her balance, when he held her in the middle.

"What a luck I have, to have crossed paths with you! Parv smirked flirtatiously as Guddan straightened away from him and stood up.

"Tum! What are you doing here? Guddan shouted.

"Jo aap kar rahi thi, he replied moving closer.

Guddan stood her ground and snapped her fingers at him. "Main tumhe apni chutki ki zindagi se bahar nikalne ki taiyaari kar rahi hu!

He caught her forefinger and smirked, while she tried to retract it.

"Chaliye, issi bahane hamari mulakat toh hui, bhabhiji, he spoke menacingly moving a step closer.

Guddan backed off ready to blast him off when her feet slipped on the water spilled at edges of pool and she started falling backward. Parv couldn't let go of her finger in time, and started falling too. And as Guddan flailed her hands, a black robe clad arm caught her wrist and stopped her fall while Parv fell in the water.

Guddan found herself staring at Akshat and as a splash sound echoed, Akshat pulled her towards himself, into his arms. Surprised, she stared at the expanse of tanned chest and slowly looked up to see Mr. Husband, looking beyond her. She turned her neck around while in his hold, to see Parv appear from under the water, coughing water. His situation made her laugh. Chuckling, she stepped out of AJ's hold and leaned by the pool's side.

"Tch!Tch! Tum toh gir gaye! Aur kitna giroge Perv, P-E-R-V!, she shook her head at him.

Guddan backed off as Parv stepped out of the pool, dripping heavily. As he combed his hair back with his hands, he moved towards Guddan only to come across AJ.

"I asked you to keep your distance from her AJ remarked coolly.

Parv looked past AJ, at Guddan and smiled. "Arre AJ, aap toh jealous ho gaye! Hum aur bhabhiji toh bas yu hi... Parv trailed off.

Guddan furrowed her brows and came to the front. "Main aur tum kya? Kitna jhooth bolte ho! Guddan pointed, surprised.

"Chalo Guddan, iske muh mat lago! AJ remarked and started dragging her away, whilst Guddan turned around and stared daggers at him.

"Abhi tak toh nahin lagi, par baad mein... Parv trailed off in a cheap tone.

Akshat's steps halted. He let go of Guddan's hand and turning around, approached Parv. As they came face to face, Parv smirked yet again.

"Aap toh bura maan g... and before he could complete his sentences, long fingers wrapped around his neck and lifted him off the ground.

Guddan's eyes widened and she came running towards them. She held AJ's arm and tried to pull him away. "Chodiye, Kya kar rahe hain!? Guddan asked, trying to shake him out of it.

"THIS IS MY WIFE, you are talking about. You should know ki Akshat Jindal ki biwi se badtameezi karne ka anjaam kya hota hai, you swine!! AJ threatened, lifting him higher up.

"Let him go! Chodiye use! He will die! Why are you dirtying your hands? Guddan spoke, trying to loosen his grip.

Akshat's nose scrunched and he moved Parv in right direction, in air. "I am letting it slide this time. But next time if I even saw the ghost of your shadow hovering anywhere in her vicinity, you'll be dead! AJ threatened and dropped Parv, right into the pool.

"Chaliye! and Guddan held his wrist and starting pulling him away, while Akshat turned around and a glaring competition ensued between him and a very angry Parv.

So how was it? I was kinda low on ideas for this one, however I believe it's important for Guddan to start exploring various aspects of AJ's life😊

Edited by nish_vir - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#83
* whistle*, , *whistle*, Perv Ka beating, love the hero hubby to the rescue n his threat to Perv
I loved the 3 Devils punishment👏😆
Something evil is cunning in Durga mind.
I agree with you n love your scene Guddan needs to see n explore Akshaat has a person.
I want a scene after the pool between AJ n Guddan.
I am waiting for CVs to explorer Guddan inner thought but I like how Guddan was reflecting😆
Today I was also thinking of scene of Perv n Guddan, where he does this leech act n he gets threat by AJ
AJ is very protective of Guddan
at least Guddan should say Thank you😳
Please write soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#84
Nice update
Love it
Continue soon
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Posted: 6 years ago
#85
this was great ⭐️⭐️⭐️
thanks for pervy's literal dhullai 🤗

hope we get to see such scene in show 😳

in between how is guddu pervy's bhabi ? 😆

will be waiting to read further 😛
Edited by captainplus - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
#86

Originally posted by: *Piku*

* whistle*, , *whistle*, Perv Ka beating, love the hero hubby to the rescue n his threat to Perv

Aj's characcter demanded a ruthless show of brute force:)
I loved the 3 Devils punishment👏😆
Something evil is cunning in Durga mind.
Hmm, the wheels in her brain are starting to spin!!
I agree with you n love your scene Guddan needs to see n explore Akshaat has a person.
I want a scene after the pool between AJ n Guddan.
I am waiting for CVs to explorer Guddan inner thought but I like how Guddan was reflecting😆
Today I was also thinking of scene of Perv n Guddan, where he does this leech act n he gets threat by AJ
AJ is very protective of Guddan
at least Guddan should say Thank you😳
Please write soon


Thank you! Glad to know that I was able to make this part a worthwile read
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Posted: 6 years ago
#87

Originally posted by: kayafever

Dil garden garden ho gayaaa 😆


Mera bhi😉
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Posted: 6 years ago
#88

Originally posted by: plmzaq

Nice update

Love it
Continue soon


Its nice to know that I have regulars😉 whose words of appreciation boost my morale!
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Posted: 6 years ago
#89

Originally posted by: captainplus

this was great ⭐️⭐️⭐️

thanks for pervy's literal dhullai 🤗

hope we get to see such scene in show 😳

in between how is guddu pervy's bhabi ? 😆

will be waiting to read further 😛


Someone asked me for this scene :)
And bhabhi!!😆 well this added extra cheapiness to pervy's character. Honestly i didnt think it through🤣
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Posted: 6 years ago
#90

😆was it now?
Everyone likes AJ behaving like a caveman, threatening anyone who dares to harm Guddan

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