Originally posted by: meera851
interesting
liked the story
waiting for more
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Originally posted by: meera851
interesting
liked the story
waiting for more
Originally posted by: lively-piia
That's so real just like in show... perfect
Nice updates ... both were awesome
Keep it up..
Update soon
Part 5 - The gourmet's Nightmare
In pitch black darkness, the white moon glowed with an eerie glint of red. The long grass danced wildly with the wind. She moved through the fields with hesitant steps when a rustle behind her, made her come to a standstill and gulp hard.
Gathering her bits of courage, she turned around slowly only to come across...nothing. The sigh of relief had barely escaped her lips when a sharp blade was pressed against her throat, and her breath hitched.
"How dare you create trouble in my paradise?! A deep voice snickered evilly.
"Now, I'll cut your neck into pieces and feed it to my hounds!, the voice warned as she looked at the mammoth hounds flashing their magnanimous canines at her..
"Nhiii!!!
Guddan woke up with a startle, sweating profusely. As her eyes adjusted to the dark, she turned her head towards the left to see AJ deep in sleep, and sighed in relaxation.
"Guddan, agar inn AJ uncle ki neend toot jaati na toh sahi mein tera khoon hi kar dete! Guddan concluded to herself, staring at his face wearing a serene expression.
"Sapne mein bhi rakshas ki tarah saans atka di! Guddan huffed annoyed at his clueless self.
Suppressing a yawn, she checked the time. It was 4:07 am.
Sleep has escaped from her eyes with its tail between its legs. And today was going to be her first rasoi, as dadi had explained. And at 7 sharp, this khadoos would be down, dictationg his rule at the breakfast table.
Guddan got up to her feet stretching her arms, and looked at AJ yet again.
"Abhi toh sapne mein jaan nikaal rahe the, aaj kuch galti ki toh, sapne ka climax reality mein naa dikha de! And with that, Guddan hurried into the bathroom.
Yesterday, AJ had miraculously disappeared right after the pooja ended. This had spared Guddan the much needed time to relax her nerves, for the upcoming torture that he would unleash on her in the night. But that never came. Guddan fell asleep while watching the TV, and the next thing she knew was waking up to horror dreams!
As Guddan appeared out of bathroom, very stealthily she moved about the room taking care not to disturb him. She wore her chuda and was exiting the room, when her phone slipped from her hands and fell on the marble floor, creating noise...dangerous one, for her wellbeing.
With abated breath, Guddan waited for few seconds but nothing happened. Surprised at her (always bad) luck she turned to see AJ deep in sleep.
"Inhe abhi bhi kuch sunai nhi dia!! Guddan wondered amazed and started leaving when her steps halted.
And she turned around wide eyed and mouth agape, "Kahin uncle... neend mein hi toh... Guddan panicked, and looked towards the roof with a troubled face.
Quickly she hurried by his side, and warily pressed her ears against his chest. And his chest heaved up and down, up and down..
Finally assured of AJ being alive, Guddan left the room.
It was when AJ opened his eyes.
"Pagal ladki! He grunted irritated and pulled the blanket over his head.
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As the clock struck 7, AJ descended down the stairs where the entire family waited.
Durga, Saraswati and Lakshmi looked at each other worried. Only a single thought cramped their brains.What will happen if AJ will see the disaster that went down in his kitchen!?
Since Dadi had said that today Guddan was going to handle the rasoi, they had decided to left her to her devices because they knew that Guddan se kuch na ho payega and AJ had no place for mistakes and wrongdoings in his life. However this plan of their backfired, heavily.
Khaana toh khaana, kitchen looked like a battlefield strewn with disastrous outcomes. They could only catch a glimpse of the late' kitchen when AJ showed up. They were seriously worried.
They had no clue what sort of poison awaited them all, behind the close lids of casserole. But what worried them most was the thought of poison laced words AJ would shoot at them if the food came out terrible!
Once AJ was seated,he looked at Guddan smiling jovially.
"Kya aap khana serve karengi! He asked as Guddan nodded.
"Bilkul! Aapke na hosh udd jayenge, you are going to be surprised! Guddan replied boastfully and started removing the lids of casseroles.
"I just hope that I won't be shocked!, AJ murmured to himself.
"The food looks delicious, Vardaan complimented as the 3 bahus opened their eyes and looked at the food, in disbelief.
This was definitely not the appearance they imagined'
Akshat looked at the food, and breathed in it's aroma twice.This girl was going to be the death of him, literally!'
AJ got up from his seat as Guddan stared at him quizzically.
"Kya hua lalla? Dadi asked.
"Maa, restaurant mein kuch urgent kaam yaad aa gaya.., Akshat lied.
"Kaam toh hota rahega, Guddan ki pehli rasoi hai, rasm toh puri karni padegi na, Dadi smiled.
"Ritual? Which ritual?! Akshat asked dumbfounded.
"She will feed you with her hands, Dadi replied.
"Kyaa! All 3 bahus and their nayi naweli saas stood up, surprised.
"Par dadi humne toh aisi koi rasm nhi ki thi! Durga complained.
"Ha, kyuki tum bahu bankar aai thi, Guddan tumhari saas bankar aai hai.
With that said, Dadi signalled Akshat to sit back, who obliged ruefully."Guddan beta, come forward and serve him.
Guddan nodded, smiling helplessly and served everything on his plate. Guddan and Akshat looked at each other, helplessly.
Guddan dipped a spoon in rajma chawal, and forwarded it towards his mouth.
Akshat gulped. Kis gunah ki saza de raha hai bhagwaan use'
As he gulped the rajma chawal, his mouth went still and his eyes watered. The rice was uncooked and rajma were overcooked. His throat was on fire, he wanted to spit out the disgusting food but could'nt.
He glared at Guddan, who had her face turned towards the other direction. Brimming with anger, he dipped the spoon in rajma chawal and forwarded it in her direction.
Dadi smiled dreamily as Lakshmi's eyes widened comically at Akshat's gesture.
Guddan turned towards him, with her brows raised. He signalled her to eat but she refused,"Shayad aapne suna nhi, dadi said to feed you and not the other way round
"I heard it quite clear but you are my wife, main kuch bhi akele nhi karunga, jo bhi karenge saath karenge! Akshat smiled slightly, making Saru gag at the cheesy line.
Guddan looked at Dadi, who urged her to comply to his wish and she opened her mouth. The instant rajma touched her tongue, her eyes widened and locked with his.
"Acha hai na... Akshat asked sweetly. But Guddan knew better, his words meant you-cant-spit-it. Guddan gulped, trying to prevent water from flowing off her eyes.
Next, she broke a morsel of the roti and dipped it in dal. A glaring contest started as Guddan forwarded the morsel in his direction, her eyes issuing a challenge. Akshat held her palm, and bit down on the morsel. The roti was raw flour and the dal was overflowing with oil and salt. He wanted to throw up but his ego was on the line now. As Akshat repeated the routine and forwarded the morsel in her direction, Guddan bit down on his finger making him wince, and smiled slightly. Akshat glared arrows at her, and cracked his knuckles.
His stomach was literally coughing acid.
"Ab main chalta hoon, he told his mother and started to leave when someone stepped in his path.
It was Shweta. Lakshmi smiled and went to shweta, pretending as if she had no clue that she was going to come!
Dadi glared at shweta, while Guddan looked at her confused and AJ, with zero expressions.
"You must be thinking what am I doing here? Till yesterday I was going to be the bahu of this house and your wife but now.. Shweta spoke slowly, her words ending in a sob.
Guddan looked at her uninterested as she continued, "Khair jo bhi hua, I have bought a cake for you, a sweet to mark a new beginning of your life.
Guddan looked on amazed. Shweta had no dearth of talent, she would qualify just fine for the role of an overacting idiot.
Akshat opened his mouth to refuse when shweta moved forward and held his palm in hers. "Please don't refuse Akshat Ji, can't you oblige this wish of mine? She guilt tripped Akshat, fluttering her lashes.
Feeling helpless, Akshat opened the box in her hand and picked up a piece of cake in between his fingers. However the cake could not reach its intended destination as Guddan stepped in, held Akshat's hand and directed the piece into her mouth. Lakshmi and Shweta fumed, as Dadi smirked viciously.
"Hmm, cake toh accha hai but Akshat ke taste ke hisaab se ismein 100g cheeni zyada hai, Guddan remarked, chewing on the cake. Akshat looked at her and reminisced that he had uttered these exact same words at her, when she had come to demand the money for the cake that was slapped on his face.
He continued to look at her as she stared back, with determined eyes. To understand her antiques was beyond his level, but he knew one thing, they could fight each other to death but in front of the world, they are life partners.
Smiling, he swiped his thumb against her lower lip, where a crumb of cake was stuck, catching Guddan off guard. Dadi smiled shyly and the three sons chocked on their saliva and started coughing, as AJ licked his thumb with his tongue, without breaking eye contact with a lost Guddan.
"You are right biwi ji, it's extra sweet, he whispered sensuously making Guddan's throat go parched.
"Sorry Shweta ji, but in this age, I can't be eating sweet foods, AJ apologised as Shweta nodded frantically.
Dadi stood up, brimming with happiness,"Beta, jaane se pehle, apni biwi ko pehli rasoi ka tohfa toh de do.
Ji maa, Akshat obliged as he pressed the buzzer and a butler came running, with a big box laid in a magnificiently decorated thaal. Shweta looked on drooling as Akshat opened the box to reveal a stunning turquoise sapphire neckpiece.
Gently, he turned around Guddan and picked the necklace from the box and laid it across her neck. While tying the necklace, he leaned his lips closer to her ears and spoke in a menacing tone, "Never ever step into my kitchen ever again!
His words overflowing with promise of a catastrophe brought Guddan back to earth land and she gulped hard as he pulled the knot of necklace extra hard, choking her a little bit. And with that he was gone, leaving Guddan in a state of absolute despair.
So how was it?😊
If someone wants any scene, suggestions are welcome
Originally posted by: attiya1.3
Aha aha ...dil garden garden hogya mera
Cake scene to muahhh tha☺️Apart from this,we can expeftcrest to happen.It will fun to witness saas susar romancing😆
Originally posted by: kusharberry
beautiful update dear
loved it very muchyeah aj bhi nah gift diya saath saath mein dhamki bhi diyasweta ki ti ti phisss kardiya guddan neplzzz do continue soon 😊