Hi guys im honey
I like to modify stories. I used to write fan fics in sasural simar ka(rosid), kasam, silsila forums and i lost my account so i came with my new one.
I also wrote 2 stories in ghum in savi and vinayak pov got some good amt of likesđ
And let me confess i hate pakhi charcter and i also not fond of acting but there is so much scope for her charcter bt cvs made her victimđ
But i always feel she need a good frnd who shows her right path. So that is my point for this os
Im not so good at writing and im also not regular viewer of ghum i read updates and forum.discussions so i have no idea abt sequences so i modified according to my thougts..so please for give me if any point is not aligned with serial scenes and alsoi lost in touch with writing fanfics so forgivr.my sentance formations and grammer
Lets jump into story
Pakhi left chavan nivas after her fight with sai
Pakhi came to her parentâs house. She saw her mom who is sipping tea while reading some random book
Her mom saw pakhi entering into house with blank face
Mom: pakhi beta, what happened you came without any intimation. Is everything alright?
Pakhi: im fine mom, im having severe head ache. I will go to my room and take rest
Mom: ayyo beta wait i will bring tea and also head ache medicine
Pakhi: no mom. Im good i donât need anything i just need my space please let me go
By saying this she rushed into her room
She closed her door and started throwing pillows to let her anger out
Pakhi to herself: wat is this sai thinking about herself.
I donât know from where she got this attitude. And this virat ..who promised me that he wonât love anyone except me is becoming love sick puppy around that sai.
What is there in her that he is forgetting everything around him when she is with him. And that girl is giving dhamki to me to forget virat.
Arey how can i forget. He is my pehla pyar i loved him truly. I will never forget him and i will never let him forget me.
So i fought with sai today deliberately and i know virat still have feelings for me. He will come to me definitely then i will also pour out my feelings to him. I will make virat mine and make sai to leave cn forever.
While she is in her own dreams she heard knock on door
Pakhi: i think virat came, arey wah pakhi ur plan is working
She happily went to open door. After seeing the person she became upset
Pakhi: papa
Pakhi dad: pakhi beta shall i come in?
Pakhi: ha papa
Pakhi father sat on her bed. Pakhi sat beside him
Dad: looks like someone is upset with my arrival
Pakhi: no papa not like that
Dad: r u sure? I thought my beti will hug me after seeing me but she is lost in her own thoughts
Pakhi immediately hugged him
Pakhi: sorry papa, and u know wat i love u so much
He smiled and kissed on her forhead
Dad: pakhi first tell me wat im to u
Pakhi is confused little bit and then smiled and said
Pakhi: you are my best friend papa
Dad: really?
Pakhi: ofcourse
Dad: ok i will agree. Then as a friend im asking..tell me pakhi wat is going on ur mind?
She looked at him confusingly
Dad: ha pakhi..today we will talk as friends. Yeah i agree before ur mrg i used to be ur friend but when i started searching matches for u i became ur dad.
I was more interested to u get marry asap without thinking about ur heart. I should have given time to u to accept alliance instead of rushing
U told me that u r loving a guy whom u fell in love in 2 days yoga camp. I want ur happiness so i agreed to ur love but u misunderstood him when he didnât lift ur phone. So i made u agree to the alliance i brought. I thought u will be happy with samrat but i never thought fate will play with u and that guy u loved became ur devar. And u became his bhabi
He stressed the word devar and bhabi
Pakhi shouted : papa
Dad: pakhi that is truth which u has to accept.
Pakhi: no papa before that relation formed he is my love papa. He is my true love
He smiled
Dad: i used to feel my daughter is the most mature person in the world. But i never thought love made her blind. First of all its not love beta it is just ur attraction and now it is becoming obsession.
Ok Pakhi i accept u liked virat. But wat about virat?
Pakhi: he also loves me papa
Dad: if he loves u then y he asked u to marry samrat. That means he loves samrat more than u. Ur not his priority beta. If he really loves u he would have fight for u with entire world. If he really loved u he would have revealed truth to samrat and his family before marriage. U know wat at that time there are very less complications. He just needs to reveal to samrat about ur love but situation is more complicated u married samrat and virat married sai. And im sure virat will never take risk of losing sai and samrat now.
Pakhi: papa i agree situation is complicated, but he told me that he will only love me he wonât give my place to any one so he will come back to me
Dad: ha beta y ur not understanding the fact that there is no place for u in his heart and let me throw u bitter truth âhe loves only saiâ
Pakhi: no papa sai is his responsibility thats it
Dad: pakhi just close ur eyes and think..u will get reality check. didnât u see love for sai in his eyes? Didnât u see how he takes stand for sai infront of his family? Didnât u see fear of losing sai when she met with accident? That is love pakhi. And urs is just attraction
Pakhi remembered sairat moments...she has no ansr now
Dad; shall i say wat true love is? The love samrat have for u.
Pakhi looked at him shockingly
Dad: ha beta samrat loves u so much. He know about u n virat but still he didnât say anything. As a husband he has every right to show his right on u but he never did.
He can put u and virat on spot and question u both about ur past but he didnât do any thing.
He just wants to give space to u as he understood ur not in position to think wat is right what is wrong
he is staying in his friend room. From far he is taking care of u.
When he got to know u left home and came here he called me to know whether u reached safely or not.
he asked me to take care of u. He didnât judge u based on past r present he just want u to be happy where ever u are.
Pakhi As a father im asking to leave virat obsession.. he is moving on, as a friend i want to say one thing please u should also try to move on. And im not asking u to choose samrat. That is ur wish. I just want u to leave all these kitchen politics.
if u forgot i want to remember u. Ur mba graduate and also passionate photographer y cant u restart ur career. Once u get back ur career u will forgt all these things
in future u may remember all these blunders and think arey kitni gadhi thi mein
Once ur professional career becomes stable u can concentrate on ur personal life. Whether he can be samrat or any one u like.
As a friend i gave my suggestion its ur wish whether follow or not. But i know my pre yoga camp pakhi is mature i want her back.
By saying this he left
pakhi lost in her thoughts. Her father words echoed in her ears
after one week
there is no call from virat and he didnât come to see her
pakhi to her dad: papa u said right gadhi hu mein
by saying this she opened her laptop. She understood wat she have to do
dad: wat r u doing beta
pakhi: updating my resume dad
her mom and dad smiled and hugged her happily
after few months
she is getting ready for office
she got notification
she opened notification of some memories
she opened it and saw her and samrat marriage pics with tag line one year ago
she got smile on her face
she thought for a while
and started typing message to samrat
shall we meet samrat ji?
** new beginings for samrat and pakhi**
The end