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Posted: 2 years ago
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Hi guys im honey

I like to modify stories. I used to write fan fics in sasural simar ka(rosid), kasam, silsila forums and i lost my account so i came with my new one.

I also wrote 2 stories in ghum in savi and vinayak pov got some good amt of likes😊

And let me confess i hate pakhi charcter and i also not fond of acting but there is so much scope for her charcter bt cvs made her victim🙄

But i always feel she need a good frnd who shows her right path. So that is my point for this os

Im not so good at writing and im also not regular viewer of ghum i read updates and forum.discussions so i have no idea abt sequences so i modified according to my thougts..so please for give me if any point is not aligned with serial scenes and alsoi lost in touch with writing fanfics so forgivr.my sentance formations and grammer


Lets jump into story



Pakhi left chavan nivas after her fight with sai

Pakhi came to her parent’s house. She saw her mom who is sipping tea while reading some random book

Her mom saw pakhi entering into house with blank face

Mom: pakhi beta, what happened you came without any intimation. Is everything alright?

Pakhi: im fine mom, im having severe head ache. I will go to my room and take rest

Mom: ayyo beta wait i will bring tea and also head ache medicine

Pakhi: no mom. Im good i don’t need anything i just need my space please let me go

By saying this she rushed into her room

She closed her door and started throwing pillows to let her anger out

Pakhi to herself: wat is this sai thinking about herself.

I don’t know from where she got this attitude. And this virat ..who promised me that he won’t love anyone except me is becoming love sick puppy around that sai.

What is there in her that he is forgetting everything around him when she is with him. And that girl is giving dhamki to me to forget virat.

Arey how can i forget. He is my pehla pyar i loved him truly. I will never forget him and i will never let him forget me.

So i fought with sai today deliberately and i know virat still have feelings for me. He will come to me definitely then i will also pour out my feelings to him. I will make virat mine and make sai to leave cn forever.

While she is in her own dreams she heard knock on door

Pakhi: i think virat came, arey wah pakhi ur plan is working

She happily went to open door. After seeing the person she became upset

Pakhi: papa

Pakhi dad: pakhi beta shall i come in?

Pakhi: ha papa

Pakhi father sat on her bed. Pakhi sat beside him

Dad: looks like someone is upset with my arrival

Pakhi: no papa not like that

Dad: r u sure? I thought my beti will hug me after seeing me but she is lost in her own thoughts

Pakhi immediately hugged him

Pakhi: sorry papa, and u know wat i love u so much

He smiled and kissed on her forhead

Dad: pakhi first tell me wat im to u

Pakhi is confused little bit and then smiled and said

Pakhi: you are my best friend papa

Dad: really?

Pakhi: ofcourse

Dad: ok i will agree. Then as a friend im asking..tell me pakhi wat is going on ur mind?

She looked at him confusingly

Dad: ha pakhi..today we will talk as friends. Yeah i agree before ur mrg i used to be ur friend but when i started searching matches for u i became ur dad.

I was more interested to u get marry asap without thinking about ur heart. I should have given time to u to accept alliance instead of rushing

U told me that u r loving a guy whom u fell in love in 2 days yoga camp. I want ur happiness so i agreed to ur love but u misunderstood him when he didn’t lift ur phone. So i made u agree to the alliance i brought. I thought u will be happy with samrat but i never thought fate will play with u and that guy u loved became ur devar. And u became his bhabi

He stressed the word devar and bhabi

Pakhi shouted : papa

Dad: pakhi that is truth which u has to accept.

Pakhi: no papa before that relation formed he is my love papa. He is my true love

He smiled

Dad: i used to feel my daughter is the most mature person in the world. But i never thought love made her blind. First of all its not love beta it is just ur attraction and now it is becoming obsession.

Ok Pakhi i accept u liked virat. But wat about virat?

Pakhi: he also loves me papa

Dad: if he loves u then y he asked u to marry samrat. That means he loves samrat more than u. Ur not his priority beta. If he really loves u he would have fight for u with entire world. If he really loved u he would have revealed truth to samrat and his family before marriage. U know wat at that time there are very less complications. He just needs to reveal to samrat about ur love but situation is more complicated u married samrat and virat married sai. And im sure virat will never take risk of losing sai and samrat now.

Pakhi: papa i agree situation is complicated, but he told me that he will only love me he won’t give my place to any one so he will come back to me

Dad: ha beta y ur not understanding the fact that there is no place for u in his heart and let me throw u bitter truth “he loves only sai”

Pakhi: no papa sai is his responsibility thats it

Dad: pakhi just close ur eyes and think..u will get reality check. didn’t u see love for sai in his eyes? Didn’t u see how he takes stand for sai infront of his family? Didn’t u see fear of losing sai when she met with accident? That is love pakhi. And urs is just attraction

Pakhi remembered sairat moments...she has no ansr now

Dad; shall i say wat true love is? The love samrat have for u.

Pakhi looked at him shockingly

Dad: ha beta samrat loves u so much. He know about u n virat but still he didn’t say anything. As a husband he has every right to show his right on u but he never did.

He can put u and virat on spot and question u both about ur past but he didn’t do any thing.

He just wants to give space to u as he understood ur not in position to think wat is right what is wrong

he is staying in his friend room. From far he is taking care of u.

When he got to know u left home and came here he called me to know whether u reached safely or not.

he asked me to take care of u. He didn’t judge u based on past r present he just want u to be happy where ever u are.

Pakhi As a father im asking to leave virat obsession.. he is moving on, as a friend i want to say one thing please u should also try to move on. And im not asking u to choose samrat. That is ur wish. I just want u to leave all these kitchen politics.

if u forgot i want to remember u. Ur mba graduate and also passionate photographer y cant u restart ur career. Once u get back ur career u will forgt all these things

in future u may remember all these blunders and think arey kitni gadhi thi mein

Once ur professional career becomes stable u can concentrate on ur personal life. Whether he can be samrat or any one u like.

As a friend i gave my suggestion its ur wish whether follow or not. But i know my pre yoga camp pakhi is mature i want her back.

By saying this he left

pakhi lost in her thoughts. Her father words echoed in her ears

after one week

there is no call from virat and he didn’t come to see her

pakhi to her dad: papa u said right gadhi hu mein

by saying this she opened her laptop. She understood wat she have to do

dad: wat r u doing beta

pakhi: updating my resume dad

her mom and dad smiled and hugged her happily

after few months

she is getting ready for office

she got notification

she opened notification of some memories

she opened it and saw her and samrat marriage pics with tag line one year ago

she got smile on her face

she thought for a while

and started typing message to samrat

shall we meet samrat ji?

** new beginings for samrat and pakhi**


The end

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Guys if u read it please encourage me with likes and comments

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Chalo even Pakhi got a good ending in this story. It was a nice read. Welcome to the forum 😊

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Originally posted by: MiniCupcake

Hi guys im honey

I like to modify stories. I used to write fan fics in sasural simar ka(rosid), kasam, silsila forums and i lost my account so i came with my new one.

I also wrote 2 stories in ghum in savi and vinayak pov got some good amt of likes😊

And let me confess i hate pakhi charcter and i also not fond of acting but there is so much scope for her charcter bt cvs made her victim🙄

But i always feel she need a good frnd who shows her right path. So that is my point for this os

Im not so good at writing and im also not regular viewer of ghum i read updates and forum.discussions so i have no idea abt sequences so i modified according to my thougts..so please for give me if any point is not aligned with serial scenes and alsoi lost in touch with writing fanfics so forgivr.my sentance formations and grammer


Lets jump into story



Pakhi left chavan nivas after her fight with sai

Pakhi came to her parent’s house. She saw her mom who is sipping tea while reading some random book

Her mom saw pakhi entering into house with blank face

Mom: pakhi beta, what happened you came without any intimation. Is everything alright?

Pakhi: im fine mom, im having severe head ache. I will go to my room and take rest

Mom: ayyo beta wait i will bring tea and also head ache medicine

Pakhi: no mom. Im good i don’t need anything i just need my space please let me go

By saying this she rushed into her room

She closed her door and started throwing pillows to let her anger out

Pakhi to herself: wat is this sai thinking about herself.

I don’t know from where she got this attitude. And this virat ..who promised me that he won’t love anyone except me is becoming love sick puppy around that sai.

What is there in her that he is forgetting everything around him when she is with him. And that girl is giving dhamki to me to forget virat.

Arey how can i forget. He is my pehla pyar i loved him truly. I will never forget him and i will never let him forget me.

So i fought with sai today deliberately and i know virat still have feelings for me. He will come to me definitely then i will also pour out my feelings to him. I will make virat mine and make sai to leave cn forever.

While she is in her own dreams she heard knock on door

Pakhi: i think virat came, arey wah pakhi ur plan is working

She happily went to open door. After seeing the person she became upset

Pakhi: papa

Pakhi dad: pakhi beta shall i come in?

Pakhi: ha papa

Pakhi father sat on her bed. Pakhi sat beside him

Dad: looks like someone is upset with my arrival

Pakhi: no papa not like that

Dad: r u sure? I thought my beti will hug me after seeing me but she is lost in her own thoughts

Pakhi immediately hugged him

Pakhi: sorry papa, and u know wat i love u so much

He smiled and kissed on her forhead

Dad: pakhi first tell me wat im to u

Pakhi is confused little bit and then smiled and said

Pakhi: you are my best friend papa

Dad: really?

Pakhi: ofcourse

Dad: ok i will agree. Then as a friend im asking..tell me pakhi wat is going on ur mind?

She looked at him confusingly

Dad: ha pakhi..today we will talk as friends. Yeah i agree before ur mrg i used to be ur friend but when i started searching matches for u i became ur dad.

I was more interested to u get marry asap without thinking about ur heart. I should have given time to u to accept alliance instead of rushing

U told me that u r loving a guy whom u fell in love in 2 days yoga camp. I want ur happiness so i agreed to ur love but u misunderstood him when he didn’t lift ur phone. So i made u agree to the alliance i brought. I thought u will be happy with samrat but i never thought fate will play with u and that guy u loved became ur devar. And u became his bhabi

He stressed the word devar and bhabi

Pakhi shouted : papa

Dad: pakhi that is truth which u has to accept.

Pakhi: no papa before that relation formed he is my love papa. He is my true love

He smiled

Dad: i used to feel my daughter is the most mature person in the world. But i never thought love made her blind. First of all its not love beta it is just ur attraction and now it is becoming obsession.

Ok Pakhi i accept u liked virat. But wat about virat?

Pakhi: he also loves me papa

Dad: if he loves u then y he asked u to marry samrat. That means he loves samrat more than u. Ur not his priority beta. If he really loves u he would have fight for u with entire world. If he really loved u he would have revealed truth to samrat and his family before marriage. U know wat at that time there are very less complications. He just needs to reveal to samrat about ur love but situation is more complicated u married samrat and virat married sai. And im sure virat will never take risk of losing sai and samrat now.

Pakhi: papa i agree situation is complicated, but he told me that he will only love me he won’t give my place to any one so he will come back to me

Dad: ha beta y ur not understanding the fact that there is no place for u in his heart and let me throw u bitter truth “he loves only sai”

Pakhi: no papa sai is his responsibility thats it

Dad: pakhi just close ur eyes and think..u will get reality check. didn’t u see love for sai in his eyes? Didn’t u see how he takes stand for sai infront of his family? Didn’t u see fear of losing sai when she met with accident? That is love pakhi. And urs is just attraction

Pakhi remembered sairat moments...she has no ansr now

Dad; shall i say wat true love is? The love samrat have for u.

Pakhi looked at him shockingly

Dad: ha beta samrat loves u so much. He know about u n virat but still he didn’t say anything. As a husband he has every right to show his right on u but he never did.

He can put u and virat on spot and question u both about ur past but he didn’t do any thing.

He just wants to give space to u as he understood ur not in position to think wat is right what is wrong

he is staying in his friend room. From far he is taking care of u.

When he got to know u left home and came here he called me to know whether u reached safely or not.

he asked me to take care of u. He didn’t judge u based on past r present he just want u to be happy where ever u are.

Pakhi As a father im asking to leave virat obsession.. he is moving on, as a friend i want to say one thing please u should also try to move on. And im not asking u to choose samrat. That is ur wish. I just want u to leave all these kitchen politics.

if u forgot i want to remember u. Ur mba graduate and also passionate photographer y cant u restart ur career. Once u get back ur career u will forgt all these things

in future u may remember all these blunders and think arey kitni gadhi thi mein

Once ur professional career becomes stable u can concentrate on ur personal life. Whether he can be samrat or any one u like.

As a friend i gave my suggestion its ur wish whether follow or not. But i know my pre yoga camp pakhi is mature i want her back.

By saying this he left

pakhi lost in her thoughts. Her father words echoed in her ears

after one week

there is no call from virat and he didn’t come to see her

pakhi to her dad: papa u said right gadhi hu mein

by saying this she opened her laptop. She understood wat she have to do

dad: wat r u doing beta

pakhi: updating my resume dad

her mom and dad smiled and hugged her happily

after few months

she is getting ready for office

she got notification

she opened notification of some memories

she opened it and saw her and samrat marriage pics with tag line one year ago

she got smile on her face

she thought for a while

and started typing message to samrat

shall we meet samrat ji?

** new beginings for samrat and pakhi**


The end

well done ..you’re talented 🥰
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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: nutmeg7

Chalo even Pakhi got a good ending in this story. It was a nice read. Welcome to the forum 😊

Thank u yar🤗🤗

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Indira1211

well done ..you’re talented 🥰

Thank u indira 🤗🤗

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Beautiful ❤️

Really meaningful dad-daughter conversation

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: Deevu

Beautiful ❤️

Really meaningful dad-daughter conversation

Thank u yar🤗🤗

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Originally posted by: MiniCupcake

Thank u yar🤗🤗


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