TS - Time's Up!!! Part 3 (pg 9) - Page 6

Yes... Hope it lives up to expectations ☺️

Haha! Finally didi ne pregnancy ka bomb phodaNice update

Waiting to read what Sai Bai has to tell!

Thanks for the tag!

Originally posted by: Moor278

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Bechara V kuch bol bhi nahi payega ittu se baby ko 🤪

Can we name him something? Paap (Pakhi+Jagtap) ek se shuru, doosre pe khtam.

I am sure Virat wont even look at him (Virat's preference is a girl)

Wow... very interesting 👌🏻 👏🏻 😍

SaiRat, samrat and pulkit teaming up to expose Pakhi... wah..🥳🥳

Atleast samrat is not dumb like serial....

Please update next part soon... excited

Thank you so much.. ❤️

Hope the last part lives up to expectations 🤠

Hi guys...

Thank you for liking this story so much.

It is the first time I wrote something like this...

Contrary to many of your expectations, I had envisaged a different ending for my story.

Hope it lives up to your expectations.

If it feels rushed, its because I didnt want it extend further. There is only so much that can be added.

Do read and please send honest comments.

Thanks again🤗

Loved the ending!

Thanks for the tag! This reality should really hit these CN monkeys.... Enough of their hypocrisy and selfishness😔

Maine comment likha tha...kaise gaayab ho gaya?

Anyways, good conclusion to the story....👍🏼. Glad that Samrat ki batti jal gayi atlast...

Ending was ...mazaa aa gaya!

This story is just superbly amazing 😍❤️. It has suspense, thriller, drama - literally all the genre which attracts viewers 💥. Read all the 3 parts in 1 go ♥️. How I wish this same story to be adopted in show, mazaa ajaata yaar 😍😭. Trp aunties would legit love to see something different (except virachiiiii content) I liked the way how chavannis previous crimes were also revealed here & fgs virat atleast thought about arresting them!!! And bargain mai finally demanded respect & love for his baiko, pheww 😌.

Ps- Tqsm for the tags ❤️😊.

Keep writing such amazing plots & hosake tho vanku boi ko apne ideas daan kardo, banda seems to have lost it completely that he's rushing things like mad bull 🐃😒🤦🏻