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Posted: 3 years ago
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yaar it was cute romantic funny

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Moor278

Disclaimer : This OS is written as the moment SaiRat enter their room and V has not mentioned that he lied to BK.


"Demolition"


Sai and Virat enter their bedroom to see it beautifully decorated with their pictures, flowers and candles.

Soft romantic music is also playing in the background and Virat looks at Sai lovingly, desire clouding his eyes.

Sai, blushingly avoids his eyes and asks,

"Aapne ye sab kab kiya?"

"Maine nahi kiya... mujhe laga tumne kiya"

Sai looks up at him surprised, when Sunny and Devi jump out loudly screaming

"Surprise!!! Ye humne kiya"

Sai and Virat are pleasantly happy but then Devi exclaims,

"Veeru... ye bed hamne aise hi choda hai thik hai?... ye tum dono decide karo jo bhi karna hai okay" and smiles at Sai.

Virat after exchanging the required pleasantries pushes them out of the room eager to spend the night with Sai. He moves towards the beds and joins them immediately tearing up the curtains between them.


He turns around to see Sai admiring the pictures and the decor.

Walking towards her and embracing her from her back, Virat rests his chin on her shoulder and relishes the closeness.

The butterflies in her tummy are now doing full somersaults when Sai feels the hot breath so close to her ears.

"Virat Sir"

"Hmm..."

"Chodiye na... mujhe change karna hai"

Unable to hide his chuckle, Virat replies,

"Main help kar deta hun"

"Nahi... aap kaise? I mean aap kyun? Main kar lungi" replies Sai pulling herself out from his embrace.

Moving towards the bed, Sai sits on it and picks up a pillow and hugs it tightly, trying to hide her blush.


Virat who is noticing all this, suddenly straightens up and in a slightly rough tone asks,

"Kya kar rahi ho?"

Sai, surprised at his sudden change in tone, looks up at him to see his nostrils slightly flaring up, his gaze fixed on the pillow in her hand.

Intending to tease him for a bit, Sai replies, running a hand over the pillow.

"Kya kar rahi hun matlab? Architect ban rahi hun... Sinhagad ka kila banana hai na... aapko to pata hai... mujhe uske bina comfortable nahi lagta"

Stomping his feet and reaching to her in long strides, Virat jerks the pillow from her hand and loudly exclaims,

"Tum aisa kuch nahi karne wali ho... ye pillow wall bilkul nahi banegi... aur agar tumne aisa socha bhi to main ja raha hun balcony main sone... ab tumne bulaya to bhi nahi aaunga"

"Are par aap itna gussa kyun ho rahe hai?"

"Bewakoof ho kya... kaisi baatein kar rahi ho Sai ... Do you know how difficult it was for me all these years and tumhe to koi farak hi nahi pad raha... I am telling you Sai... ya to ye pillows rahengi ya main... soch lo"

Sai, who is controlling herself extremely hard to hide her chuckle, looks at him with her big puppy eyes expression but that does not break Virat's resolve today.

Eager to prove a point, Virat moves towards the door when something catches Sai's eyes...

She quickly runs to him and holding him by his arm, stops him.

Moving closer and playing with his buttons, Sai very seductively says,

"Acchha thike... ban jaati hun Architect... lets demolish this wall and much more..."

His anger melting in a moment, Virat holds her hands and moves to kiss her when Sai stops him...

"I have a list of things to demolish... shall I tell you Swammmyyy?"

Virat's face breaks into a smile, hearing the word he has started to love now...

"Haan batao... "

"Okay... To sabse pehle ye bataiye ki aapka pehla pyaar koun hai?" Sai asks throwing a quick glance towards the door.

Virat whose face falls at the implied jab, gently kisses her hands and replies,

"Only you Sai... main bewakoof tha jo kuch din ke attraction ko kuch aur samajh raha tha... You are my first and only true love"

A smile beaming on her face, Sai continues playing with the buttons,

"Thank you and I love you too Virat Sir... haan usse yaad aaya... aapko pasand nai hai na ye Sir... lets demolish this too... what do you want me to call you?"

Virat, happy to be finally seeing the eagerness in her, replies "Just Virat is fine"

Shaking her head, Sai exclaims a bit loudly and harsher and watching the door from the corner of her eye...

"Nahi nahi... Vo to aapko sab bulate hai... aur khaas karke aapki dost... How about just V... like the alphabet"

"Bas V????"

"ummm... hmmm?"

"Chalega mujhe... tumhare munh se kuch bhi acchha lagega..." and not wasting a moment more, Virat plants a kiss on her cheek.

Chuckling, Sai replies in mock anger,

"Areeee.... rukiye abhi meri list khatam nahi hui hai..."

Irritated, Virat asks,

"Ab kya baki hai?"

"Aapko aisa lagta hai na ki sirf aapko farak padta mujhe nahi padta?"

"Aur nahi to kya... tum to aise hi pretend karti ho!!" Virat huffs

"Then you are mistaken again Mr. Lion... yaad kijiye Holi ke din kya hua tha is kamre main" Sai blushes at the memory.

Virat's eyes go round in surprise when he has a flashback of the day and seeing that Sai has removed herself from his clutches... runs after her...

"Ohhh... meri lioness ... Aaj main tumko nahi chodunga.... aaj tu gelis Sai"

Giggling and running around, Sai shouts loudly...

"Are rukiye.... abhi ye pillow wall ka demolition baki hai..."

"Aaj pillow kya... main sab demolish kar dunga"

The laughter then suddenly dies replaced by much more amorous sounds.


Outside the bedroom, the lone visitor steadfastly doing her job, hears and registers the demolition of all her hopes and dreams, seeing it crumble bit by bit.


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Tried writing a funny one... but alas that's not my forte... pata nahi ye kya bakwas ban gaya...

I hope you all enjoy it though. 😭


Mast a mast! Write an OS on Viru’s fb on Lahu Muu lag gaya🤣


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Posted: 3 years ago
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I have included that in another OS... Search for Khumaar...

I am really pissed off that they have made him forget that yaar...


Ye sab drama hi nahi hota agar usko thoda bhi yaad aata to 🤣

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Mera man tha ki ek baar Didi ki beizzati bhi likhu 🤪

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Posted: 3 years ago
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This was funny, amorous, and satisfying. Kudos!

Also, this line: "main bewakoof tha jo kuch din ke attraction ko kuch aur samajh raha tha... You are my first and only true love" - I really wish ye aisa ho jaye and that too Patralekha sune. This was in my wishlist and you wrote it in OS. Dhanyaaa

Waise, aaj wall ke saath aur bhi kuch demolish ho gaya ☺️

Lovely writing ya. Thanks for the tag ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you so much yaar...🤗

I was thinking about demolishing stuff but then I realised ki door visitor ki armaano se jyada aur kuch demolish karne main utna maja nahi aayega...

Sai knows it too... tabhi to smartly saara conversation door ke paas kiya 🤣


Same thoughts about that line... I wanted him to say it on that proposal day itself...

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Kaash yeh hota, didi ki rotlu shakal ko dekh kar enjoy kar lete 🤣

Amazing OS🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago
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It's quite a cute one😳

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Thank you so much 🤗

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