OS: Committed! - Page 2

Absolutely wonderful!!!👏

How much I wish we get to hear Virat's monologues!

Anyways loved this ... SS toh lagega! Why don't u continue this! Or any talented writers over here😳

Thanks for tagging!🤗

Originally posted by: sadiltl

Aap log phir se padna. THere were glaring mistakes in the beginning. I am so sorry. I did not save my last edit. bummer

Hum bhavnao mei beh gaye

Originally posted by: nutmeg7

Hum bhavnao mei beh gaye

Sairat ko sikha do thoda yeh skill. ☺️

Darling forgot to tag you with your complicated username

Jab mein ID banye uthna pata nahi tha ke koi Nick name se banate hai mera real name se banayi thi wohi hai...change nahi kari ab soch rahi hu kar lo.

Aadat pad gayi humko. change mat karna 👍🏼

Wow at least viru ne mun se Kuch phota to Sahi...very emotional one...

Wonderful 😘

Beautiful sai ne jo bhi bola dil khul kar rakh diya 🤩

Aisa hi show mein hona chahiye as par sairat story hai vanku ko hum fans se kay problem hai pata nahi.

Virat action par yaqeen rakta hai isliye kiss kar ke apni feelings ka izhar kiya ☺️😳

Loved it 🤩❤️

Thanks ❤️❤️

Virat and Sai are playing real time hide and seek in this.

Beautifully penned down conflict and play of emotions and expressions.

If and only if I could write like this. 👏

It’s a good one .. but hoga Kuch nahi