Sairat os- Kya Aap Sirf mere ho? Updated pg 2

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This is from the current track and how i want it to play out. Here mohit has told to the family everything what he has seen in the hotel.

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Kaku - virat kya hai yeh sab , kon hai Shruti tera usse kya rishta hai.

Pakhi- Virat tum sachme ek besharam insaan ho , logo ki feelings ke sath khelna tumhara shauk hai, pehle kisi ki jindagi barbaad ki fir sai ki ab yeh Shruti, sach mai tum jaise ladkon ka koi bharosa nahi hai.

Sai- virat sir bataiye yeh Shruti konse friend ki bibi hai?

Virat- Mai filhal tumhe kuch nhi bata skta sai, na hi kisi aur ko kuch bata skta hu.

Pulkit- virat tum sach kyu nhi batate ki shruti ke bache ko tumne apna naam diya hai hospital mai.( Shruti doctor was friend of pulkit so he got to knew by chance from her).

Everyone were shocked by this turn of events, virat not willing to tell the truth, sai fearing the worst and pakhi yet again heartbroken.

Pakhi- virat khi tumhara affair to nhi chal rha shruti ke sath aur bacha tumhara najjaish bacha to nhi. Dekha badi mami is sai ki wjh se virat ne bahar gulcharee udane chalu kar diya, sai ise patni ka such nhi de ski to isne shruti ke sath sambhand banane laga. Kab se chal rha hai virat yeh sab batao.

Virat- enough pakhi, kuch bhi anap shanap mat bolo, aisa kuch bhi nhi hai, aur mai abhi filhal kisi ko kuch nhi bata skta. Mera yakeen mano maine kch galat nhi kiya sai.

Sai- thik hai virat sir , agar aap yhi chahte hai to yhi sahi, mai apse kuch nhi puchungi

Virat- thankyou sai mujhe samajhne ke liye.

Sai- lekin mai ab apke sath rahungi bhi mhi, aap apni shruti ke sath rahiye aur uske bache ke sath, mai is ghar ko chor ke jaa rhi hu, waise bhi mai bhoop gyi thi ki yeh shadi ek deal hai aur mai koi nhi hoti apko kuch puchne wali. Mai abhi hostel ke liye shift ho rhi hu( while both crying)

Ninad- ruk jaon sai tum kahi nhi jaogi yeh ghar tumhara hai aur hamesha tumhara hi rahega, tumhe maine aur aishwini ne apni bahu nhi beti mana hai isliye tum yha se khi nhi jaogi. Aur virat agar tumne hame Shruti ka sach nhi bataya to tum yeh ghar chor ke jaa skte ho, aaj se hamara koi beta nhi hoga yeh ham mann lenge.

Although virat was happy sai was not leaving the house, he was sad as due to shruti and her child's safety he can't disclose the truth and hurt that no family member was understanding him. Only two where having feelings that he can't do anything wrong one his wife but sai was hurt with his ignorance and not able to process what is happening, and other being his mom, who knew virat can't cheat sai, but she also can't process anything out .

Kaku- mujhe yakin nhi ho rha ki mera virat aisa kar skta hai, virat nikal ja is ghar se ( virat left the house with the belief of not returning in the house as nobody trusted him).

After he left sonali , omi and pakhi taunted sai and blamed her for virat's ema with sai, but ninad , samrat and kaku strongly opposed them and sended sai to her room. Pakhi was heartbroken again she worked super hard to not allow sairat to have that physical relationship but virat had it with other lady, but not herself.

After a week sada returned to shruti to take her and his child back, but virat came to know about it and confronted him, shruti was shock to know sada is alive and it was hai plan for their safety. Virat who was hell angry at his betrayal that due to him he has lost his love. And wanted to kill him but due to sahas future he didn't killed him. At last virat explained both sada and shruti to surrender themselves for their child's safety and future and become government vitness and tell everything about their gang to the police.

Due to their child's safety they agree for it and surrender to DIG. DIG was happy that a lot of vital information against the naxalist was provided, but was super angry at virat for hiding any thing, he gave a strict warning and said he would ahve been suspended if sada would have not surrendered. Virat was happy that atleast the Shruti was now not his zimmedari, he asked DIG for a quick transfer to a remote place. He was granted a transfer a temporary one for some months.

After 1 week

In cn everything was normal now that nobody was talking about virat and were hurt except sonkar who kept taunting sai. Shruti came to cn with DIG and sada.

Pakhi- tum yha kya kar rhi ho sharam nhi aayi tumhe ek shadishuda mard ke sath affair karte hue. Aur is nazaish bache ko yha layi bhi kaise tum.

Shruti- aap kon hai mai yha , sirf sai se milne ayi hu aur Sara sach batane ayi hu .

Kaku- suna nhi tune patralekha ne kya kaha, chali jaa yha se , ek ladki ki pati ko usse dur kardiya aur fir tu usse tang karne ayi hai.

DIG- bhavani ji ek baar shruti ki baat sun lijiye aap sab ka sach janna bahut jaroori hai. Ha to bolo shruti.

Shruti- mera naam hai Shruti pawde, shruti sandanad pawde , sada pawde ki wife, jab virat mission pe gya tha uska smana mere pati se hua aur usne sada ko goli maar di, aur sada ne usse promise liya ki woh meri madad kare mere bache ko is duniya mai lane mai. Sada ne marne ka natak kiya aur fir sab ko chakma de ke gayab hogya, usne yeh isliye kiya taki woh janta tha ki virat apni zimmedari ache se nibhayega. Us din se virat ne mere bache ki zimmedari uthali aur isliye usne aap sab ko sach nhi bataya kunki use darr tha ki khi koi mujhe pakad na le aur mere bache ko kuch ho na jaye.

Everyone was shocked with the truth, all felt guilty for not trusting virat. Sai was guilty as well as happy that virat dont love shruti, but their was a question in her mind did he love her?

Sai - (while sobbing) wher-where isse vi- virat sir ?

DIG- he has taken transfer to a remote palce and has taken a promised from me to not tell me about his location.

Everyone wher hurt with this, they wanted to apologise to virat , but sai wanted to confess her feelings, within next 24 hours as it was his birthday tomorrow. But where was he.

Sada- DIG sir if you don't mind can i talk to sai for two minutes in private then you can take me with yourself.

Dig nodded , Shruti and sada went to a corner with sai.

Sada- well i wanted to tell you just one thing that i know my friend virat for more than 6 years and has never seen him being in live with anyone else except you, i saw the happiness in his face, the proud feeling he has whenever he talks about you, he lives you a lot.

Shruti- yes sai he always was in thoughts of you whenever he was with me , once he asked me does it hurt a lot when you delivered the baby, he said " if it would hurt how would my sai bear this pain, she is too small." And then he started crying saying, " she left me , why i cant have love to my life forever in my arms".

Sai was crying with tears of happiness, that her modak loves his crispy mirchi.

Sai- thanks a lot for clearing every thing to me, do you have an idea where is virat sir?

Shruti- i dont know the name of the palce but he told that this place is closest to his heart, he got the most precious gift of his life here.

To be continued , with second/last part when i would be free.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Loved this… really well written

Looking forward to part 2

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Wow loved it

Virat transfer GC😃

Waiting for next part

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Thoda whitewash hogaya ....but koi na. I hope when Sai locates Virat n they talk, she mentions that she didn't doubt his integrity but was hurt by his ignorance and his lies and that he IS wrong for sheltering a naxalite. What if Sada hadnt retuned and what if they didnt surrender.....then what?

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Like the 1st part, guess Virat moved to GC?

Why do I feel like this is what is going to happen in the show?

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Originally posted by: Nini123ve

Like the 1st part, guess Virat moved to GC?

Why do I feel like this is what is going to happen in the show?

i want this to happen but with makers capability almost no hope😅
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Update the next part soon

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Nice one...

Please update and tag if possible

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Part 2

Shruti and sada left the house leaving sai with different range of emotions from being happy, that her love doesn't love anyone else, sad that she didn't supported her husband, hurt that he didn't trusted her. She was now able to see clearly the hurt , those eyes have when his whole family didn't supported him , including her., His helplessness when he was not able to come out clean and clear the claims by pakhi of having an ema. She herself never doubted her husband to impregnate a woman and hide to her, but she was hurt with him giving more importance to shruti then her and was insecure of her future that's why to don't break her heart she started maintaining distance from him once again and waited till he clears the truth or not himself. Truth came out from the others but it came out , she was angry with herself that she could not understand his feelings for her, when he goes out of way to make her happy, or when she realised his feelings this shruti came in between and she again went to her cocoon. But what can she do she never had seen or understood the love between husband and wife from her childhood, she was motherless, her aaba gave her everything, pampered her , taught her everything except the love between husband and wife. Then when she married to her love although in unconventional circumstances, she came to her in laws, here also she never saw the love between spouses. Her aai baba where not in good terms, kaku and mansi bua where widowed, shivani bua was divorced, devi tai and pulkit where good couples but due to devi tais mental issues she can't see the ideal couple. Mohit and karishma despite being having love marriage where not ideal from what she knew, for sai sonali kaku and omi kaka where good couples but they just can't tolerate her , that why she tried to have safe distance from them and their life, now the couple left was Sam dada and pakhi didi, what can she learn from their, she knew that her and virat sir relationship was far better than Samrat and pakhi one, as atleast they were real self to each other unlike faking it with pakhi didi. But finally when she came to knew about her feelings from her all in one aaba's guidance.

Now she wants to confess to her love her husband that she wants to be for forever Mrs Sai Virat Chavan. She was smiling like a teenager to first time confess to her own husband, oh wait isn't she a teenager only, who has grown up early due to the unfavourable circumstances. But where was her husband, shruti said that he is in the place where he received his life's most precious thing, where would he be .

Sai - where would virat sir would be? Where are u my gabbar? (Listening gabbar from her mouth she went to the time when she first time called him gabbar). Is virat sir in Gadchiroli, is his most precious item isn't me?

She called kale kaka and confirmed her doubts that virat sir is indeed their only. She planned to suprise him tomorrow and confess him, she wanted to run away to him right now. She wanted to go alone to her home town,but she knew her Gabbar will get angry if she goes to GC alone, she knew her Gabbar is possessive for her , and jagtap threat is still their. So she decided that she will take samrat dada with her.

Next day she informed samrat dada, and he agreed to accompany him, she lied to the family that she wants to go to GC for one day for some document related purpose, knowing if she says something about virat sir pakhi didi will follow her and try to ruin her confession. Although aai and Baba first denied due to her safety and that too in the absence of virat but at later agreed. She reached Gadchiroli after few hours and straight away went to ACP house. Here the constable was new one.

Sai- Virat sir where are you , come out please.

Samrat- sai what are you saying? Is virat living here?

Sai- hn dada modak yhi par hai.

Co- ae mulgi, chila kaiko rhi hai aur kisse milna hai.

Sai- mujhe virat sir se milna hai bhai.

Co- appointment hai tere pass, nhi to tu nhi mil skti.

Sai- unse to mai aaj hi milungi woh bhi abhi kaha hai woh, mai unki wife hu aap batao. (Sai joshi normal tone- means angry one)😅

Co- tu unki wife hai to mai sachin Tendulkar hu?

Sai- bhau majjak nako kara( rudely)

Kale- sai tu kab aayi, kya kar rhi hai idhar tu? Aur tune chavan sir ko bataya kyun nhi tu aa rhi hai.

Sai- kaka mai unse hi milne ayi thi par yeh bhai ander hi nhi ane de rhe the. Aap bataon na mere pati virat sir kaha hai.( Said pati looking at the constable).

Kale- are woh yha nhi rehte woh to tere ghar mai rehte hai jaha tu rehti thi kamal sir ke sath. Kehte hai waha us ghar mai unhe apnapan sa lagta hai . Teri maushi bhi udhar hi hai.

Sai now was not not able to control her emotions and ran to her house leaving a chasing samrat. She entered in the house and saw her husband in the garden talking to someone in mobile. She ran to him and gave him a bone crushing hug. Virat was startled and suprised then for a moment was immersed into the hug , seeing his love in his arms he was emotional. When he realised about the past incident and his family's behaviour he parted back and asked

Virat - sai tum yha kya kar rhi ho , kisne bataya tumhe ki mai yha hu, aur sabse badi baat tum yeh akele kyu aayi , tum janti nhi ho tumhari jaan ko kitna khatra( he stopped when he saw samrat coming and realised that sai didn't come alone, but with jeeva.)

Sai- bas gabbar kitna bolte hai aap.( Turning to samrat) dada aap aram se beithiya mere ghar mai tab tak mai kuch baat karke aati hu apne pati se.

She dragged virat to her room where he was living.

Virat - sai tumne mujhe jabardasti yha kyu laya.

Sai didn't replied as she was emotional to come to her home back after many months. Seeing her crying virat come forward and wiped her tears. He was angry with her and everyone else but he can't see her crying like this. He asked softly "kya hua".

Seeing the soft voice of her husband back again she just hugged him again, sobbing for almost 10 minutes. Virat consoling her. Then when she was back to her original self. She asked.

Sai- virat sir aap yha kyun aye ho? Aapka acp wala quarter to yha par hai?

Virat- kyu mai mai ? Kya mai ? Yha nhi ruk skta . Akhir yhe bhi mere kisi apne ka hi to ghar hai.

Sai- kis apne ka, jise aap chor aye the waha . ( Teasingly)

Virat- hn yeh ghar hai mere apne ka, mere guru mere kamal sir ka, jo khuskismat se mere father in law bhi hai.( Sai was happy and emotional remembering her father). Waise sai yeh mere kisi aur apne ka bhi ghar hai.( Now he said teasingly).

Sai - kiska( happily)

Virat- Usha maushi ka .

With the answer she was annoyed and slapped his wrist few times, then

Sai- mere paas aapke faltu bato ke liye time nhi hai, mai bas apse kuch kehne chahti hu jo mere liye bahut jaruri hai.

Virat- hn kaho

Sai - mai nhi janti mai aapse kaise kahu , kyunki mai janti hu yeh shadi hamare liye deal thi.( He was annoyed at first listening deal) lekin dhire dhire aap mere dil mai aisi chao chorte gaye jo mere dil se kabhi utri hi nhi , aapki care, aapki mere prati woh sari zimmedariyan uthana , mera khyal rakhna woh sabkuch karna jo shayad mere aaba karte the. Mai kahi nhi kahi aapko apni jindagi mai woh jagah dene lagi jo mere aaba ki hai. Mai apse pyaar nhi kar skti thi kyunki mujhe lagta tha aap pakhi didi se pyaar karte hai , isliye maine apke sath bura bartav kiya anniversary ke din, mai galat thi uske liye mai apse jindagi bhar mafi mangne ki tyaar hu lekin apne bhi mere sath uske baad jaise bartav kiya mujhe bilkul acha nhi laga isliye mai apse dur jana chahati thi taki aap khus rhe, lekin Jab mera accident hua aur tab aapki parvah dekhne ke baad hamari dosti ke baad mujhe realise hua ki aap meri itni parvah kyun karte hai, kyunki aap mujhse pyaar karte hai, mai aap se yhi puchna chahti thi lekin tabhi hamari life mai Shruti aa gyi, maine aap par kabhi bhi shak nhi kiya tha ki aapka shruti ke sath chakkar hai, lekin mai gussa thi, hurt thi, insecure thi ki aap mujhse jyada fikar shruti ki karte hai, aur inhi sab mai mujhe realise hua ki mai aappse bahut pyaar karti hu , aur shruti ne jab sab sach bataya to muje pata chala ki aap sirf mere ho sirf mere . Will you make me mrs Virat Chavan fore--

Before sai can say anything thing else her mouth was sealed by virat's lips and then he deepend the kiss and sai learned the art of kissing. Then after kissing session

Virat- yes you would always be mine only. My barbad devi.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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So sweet... Do write more 😊

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