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Posted: 3 years ago
#21

Really good chapter. I find bk n pp as annoying and ever though. But i like Sairat ♥️

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Posted: 3 years ago
#22

The beginning was 🥳🥳

The mid was 😕😕

The ending was😆😆

And when Virat took Sai’s side, it was

Hope you understood.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#23

Amazing. I would love for Vankar to copy this episode 😍 ❤. So nicely written and is a total possibility.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#24

So they are enjoying conjugal married life, it seems. Nice. New normal is nice. Karishma and Sai becoming friends is cool. Nice update. waiting for more. Thanks for the tag

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Posted: 3 years ago
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For once zillath seems good, very nice 🙂🙂🙂🙂

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hi firstly sorry for the late reply. Had a really busy day. Now lemme come to the point. I love the way u write. Especially the mundane and normal things. The first part where u have written about Virat being reckless with the condom cover and all the family members walking over it is so relatable. I think many of us have faced such situations. And often it's the women who try to take care of it and men are soo not bothered about it. I like the fact that u incorporated this for Sairat and that gives the feel that now they are a normal couple like any other.

And Sai warning Virat not to discuss to Kaku. That's something every woman does. I really liked the way she tries to assert that she will take care of it and then when later Virat talks to Kaku with that finality and tone, she gets happy despite her warning him not to talk. They have progressed a lot.

Also thank u for making the other people of Chavan Nivas relatable. If all of them loved Sai , it wouldn't do justice to their characters. Pakhi has progressed and moved forward, but to Sai she's still the same. I don't think that she can ever be nice to Sai ever. For her Sai will always be the thorn that pricks her unhealable wound. Despite Samrats acceptance for her , she wouldn't let the wound heal.

And Kaku version is a better one than the show one. There is a kind of sportsmanspirit or healthy competition between Kaku and Sai which I enjoyed.

But the best thing is Virat. He has changed a lot . He with finality and decisiveness showed when it comes to his wife, who is the boss. And the cherry was giving the option for Kaku to decide the color. I laughed out there at the smartness of the ACP.

It was a good read dear . The new normal but the best normal. Loved it so much. Waiting for more stories from u . Thank u

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Posted: 3 years ago
#27

Hey thanks for the reply.


Yes you got the Kaku part right. She might be outdated but she has skills to manage the family and kept it together. She knows Sai holds the family going forward but doesnt want to make enemies with Pakhi either. The more taunts she gives Sai, the more closer she feels to her. And Sai understands that in my story so she doesnt fight with her all the time, but chooses her battels.


Yes Virat thinks a lot before taking a decision and he cherishes is own little family where he absolutely takes control of. So I wanted to show that.


Thanks for your detailed comments.

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Posted: 3 years ago
#28

That was a cute OS!

Good to see character progressions, specially Sai, Virat and Karishma. Good to know that the rich family finally has servants and the DIL's have the brains to bond where required. You balanced Zillat and bedroom conversation pretty well👍🏼😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
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forgot to tag you. sorry

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Posted: 3 years ago
#30

No problem. I look forward to your writing anyway.

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