Realisation & Redemption Sequel of "My Feelings" Part 4Page 13 upda - Page 4

Originally posted by: KashishSingh27

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Arre yaar ... Ye sab show mein kab hoga ...

Hmmmm... Shayad kabhi nahi ... Show wala Viraat itna seedha sachcha nahi hai ...

Lekin I love your Viraat

Thank u so much dear for tagging me😊😊

Let me give u a virtual hug for this outstanding update🤗🤗🤗

Finally raja babu realized the truth of that vile woman 😡 yayyyy 💃💃💃💃💃

N his mistakes too. He told everything to family members..👏🥳

I m glad that aai smacked him for giving that stupid vadaa ... 🤣

Sam deserves a better life partner In his life

Eagerly waiting for next part 😊😊

I won't be able to watch the serial anymore because after reading this I don't think I can tolerate show wala virat.

Awesome.

Please update soon . Wait mat karwana humse wait ni ho payega🥺.

I want a lei angsty realisation . Like a proper deeep conversation between sairat

I just feel so heartbroken to see sai like this 🥺

loved both the parts keep writing

This is lovely I like how Virat took charge and told the truth after Sai knocked some sense in him. Can’t wait for his realisation

Thanks for the tag sweets❤️

Awesome sequel!!! I liked how you have weaved these stories in sequence, meticulously bringing out the issues in phases and addressing them in the right order. Very well thought through and adds the maturity that unfortunately “Sairat” lack. Making this more organic and believable.

Hoping there is another sequel and you will have confession planned too. Excited for it!! Keep writing ❤️😇

Yeh poori story ek forum fiction hai.!!

No baat serial de nahi rahi... Woh hum ne idhar bana di!!!

Kash jalebi boy, koi aur cheez mein interest leta..... May be even potato chips...seedha seedha baat karo and close the topic.....

Happy writing!!! ❤️❤️

Superb story

Finally virat has realized somewhere he is wrong too

Please update soon

Originally posted by: KashishSingh27

Part - 2

Virat came downstairs and sees his wifey arranging dinner on dining table along with Karishma and Aai. Seeing there are few minutes left for dinner he sat on the sofa beside Shivani bua and started his " let's stare at my baiko and admire her " job. He noticed her face missing her usual mischievous smile , her lips into a frown , her eyes missing their twinkle. He also noticed her eyes are little red from crying during her emotional outburst and felt his heart clench. His Sai who's always smiling , whose eyes always twinkle with mischief , who is always found giggling at something or even enraged at his family or with angry pout on her lips today looks so emotionless. He has always seem his Sai full of different emotions but today she looks so empty and he's the main cause of it. I will set everything right............I won't let Sai lose herself...her fire like this !!! Virat swore to himself.

Not being able to see her like this anymore Virat turned his head to concentrate on what the elders are talking about. His Baba and Omi Kaka are talking about politics , Kaku and Mansi Bua are talking about some religious rituals , Shivani bua is bickering with Sonali Kaku and them his sight fell on Patralekha who's giving him those disgusting longing looks. Feeling very uncomfortable and weird he turned his sight away from her at lightening speed and shuddered in repulsion. How did I ever ignored these looks from her even a blind person could see that............Sai must have noticed them too and she might have thought I did too and................I really hope she doesn't think that I like these looks from Patralekha he thinks aghast but can you really blame her a little part of his subconscious replied and Virat flinched , as much as he wants he can't ignore it. Before he could think anything else Shivani bua shook his arm and told him that dinner is set.

Virat stood up and went to the dining table and sat on his usual place. His Sai , Aai and Patralekha are serving the food and Virat thanked the God that Sai is on his side of table and not Patralekha. He really don't want to be near Patralekha right now specially after her maniac talk at the cafe and shuddered again. Dinner is a quiet affair today , after Samrat's return and the following commotion everyone is keeping mum as to not disturb the fragile peace. He looked at Sai beside him and saw her half heartedly munching on the food. Her plate have half of the food she usually eats , concerned about her health he quietly served a little more to her plate.

Sai looked up at her husband and saw him serving her more food and looking at her pleadingly. Sai wait for her surge of anger but nothing came , she feels empty and tired so deciding against arguing she just started eating quietly.

Virat was surprised when Sai didn't argue with him about adding food on her plate but one look on her empty eyes he understood. She's tired , she's tired of everything and don't even have energy to fight with him like always. His eyes teared up seeing her so apathetic. Sighing sadly he finished his food when his eyes fell on his Jeeva and his heart clenched again , he has wronged him too. He always wanted his Jeeva to be happy and thought his happiness lies with Patralekha when he saw him being so happy on his phone talk and during Haldi function. But after today's meeting at cafe he realised that Patralekha is not good for his Jeeva , this vile woman doesn't deserve his Jeeva and from her talks today he realised that she will never accept her marriage with Jeeva.

Making up his mind he discreetly took out his phone and messaged Shivani bua to secretly gather all elders and Samrat in Kaku's room when everyone will retire to their rooms. He also messaged Mohit to keep an eye on Patralekha today and make sure she doesn't come near Kaku's room.

All the elders and Samrat are gathered in Kaku's room , everyone is tensed thinking about what Virat wants to talk about. After 5 mins Virat entered the room along with Sunny and closed the door. Virat looked at everyone tensed face and said Aap log phle baith jaiye kyuki meri baat kafi lambi hogi aur please bina kuch kuch kuch kiye shanti se meri baat suneyaga !! Omi Kaka opened his mouth to deliever a sarcastic comment but closed his mouth abruptly when Virat glared at him.

Virat took a deep breath and said Aaj mein aur Patralekha bahar ek cafe mein mile the............ Everyone gasped in sync at that and opened their mouths to start usual drama when Virat suddenly says Sshhhh!!!! Chup ekdam chup , mein apni marzi se usse milne nahi gaya tha balki usne mujhe bulaya tha ............mein janta hu mujhe nahi jana chahiye tha aur mene usse mana bhi kiya tha par usne mujhe Jeeva ka naam leke manipulate kia ke voh Jeeva ke baare mein baat karna chati h !!! Samrat raised his eyebrows at him and says Mera naam leke manipulate kia.......... matlab usne jhoot bola aur kisi aur baare mein baat ki !!!! Virat looked at Samrat and nod at him and says Yes!!!

Virat looks at everyone straight in eyes and says Aaj mein aap sabko Patralekha aur mere past ke baare mein sab kuch clear clear batana chahta hu taaki sabke maan mein jo bhi sawal.................looks at Samrat jo bhi galatfehmi h voh sab clear ho jaye Sunny ko bhi mein isiliye laya hu taki voh meri madad kare !!!

Virat took a deep breath and starts his tale about meeting Patralekha in Yoga camp , their 2 day meeting , attraction between them and his early posting in Gadchiroli Patralekha aur mere beech jo bhi tha voh sirf ek infatuation tha attraction tha jise mene pyaar samajh liya tha , hum bas do din ke liye mile the ek dusre se are humne toh ek dusre ko I Love You vaghera bhi nahi bola tha........agar aapko lagta hai ki Patralekha aur mere beech shaadi se phle koi relationship tha toh nahi aap galat soch rahe h mere aur Patralekha ke beech koi rishta shuru he nahi hua and again start talking how his phone broke and he lost Patralekha's no. , his meeting with Sai , efforts to find Patralekha no. , her calling him and him not recognising her voice , her blocking his no. by thinking that he cheated her just because he didn't recognise her voice which earned weird and WTF !! looks from everyone Mujhe nahi pata tha ki jis ladki ki shaadi Jeeva se ho rhi h voh Patralekha h , mujhe toh ye baat Haldi vale din pata chali he then told them how he confronted Patralekha , how she called him dhokebazz , how he showed msgs on his phone to her , how she begged him to cancel the wedding and marry her at which everyone gasped again. He told them how he told her that he won't snatch his brother's happiness like this that Jeeva has saved his life once he can't betray him like that Samrat who got angry now says Tu mera bhai h teri jaan bachake maine tujhpe koi ehsaan nhi kia tu aaisa soch nhi kaise sakta h !!!! and punched 👊👊 him hard on his arm.

Virat winced Ouch !!! rubs his arm , mumbles a apology and continues talking maine usse kaha ke uski shaadi Jeeva se ho ya na ho ab mein usse shaadi nhi kar sakta !! Aur ki use Jeeva se shaadi kar leni chahiye voh mujhse lakh guna accha insaan h !!

Remembering how Vaada incident is coming he gulped and starts talking hesitatingly phir sangeet ke din Patralekha mere kamre mein aayi aur mujhse khne lagi ki tum mujhe abhi Samrat ke saath nhi dekh pa rahe aage kaise dekhoge vagerah vagerah.........mene usse kaha ke voh vaha se chali jaye par voh nhi gayi aur bolti rahi toh mene emotional hoke use ek.....e..ek vada de diya !!!!

At hearing vada words everyone leaned forward excited to listen what vaada he gave to Patralekha. Bappa !!! Ye toh kisi hindi tv serial se bhi jyada fun , exciting , mazedaar h !! thinks Sonali Kaku looking like a teenage girl listening to latest gossip.

Virat says Vo.......voh mene usse ka.... kaha ki uskealawameinapnizindagiaurdilmeinkisikojagahnhidunga!!!!!!!

Everyone says in sync KYA !!! SAAF SAAF BOL !!

Virat gulped and says mene usse kaha ke mein apni zindagi aur dil mein kisi aur ko jagah nhi dunga par use Jeeva ko apna pati manna hoga!!!

SMACK ! SMACK ! 👋👋 Ashwini smacked Virat twice on his head HARD !! Furiously Ashwini twist Virat's ear and says Tu pagal h kya ek do din mili hui ladki ko aaisa vada dia ki tu zindagi bhar kunwara rahega Hmmmm...... Humare bare mein nhi socha ki humari bhi iccha hogi teri shaadi , tere baccho ko dekhne ki !!! Are buddhu apni hone vali vahini ko aaisa vada kon deta h !! Tabhi Sai tera pyaar nhi dekh pati BAPPA !! Ye kaise beta diya h Mujhe ........ tujhe akal vakal kuch h !! Ashwini twist his ear more. Everyone just nod their heads like obedient puppies shocked at Virat's vaada and Ashwini's furious side.

Virat Aaahh!!! Aai......Aai chodo mein manta hu ki meri galti h Mujhe voh vaada use nahi dena chahiye tha mera use iss tarah ka vaada dena galat tha............pa.....par Aai mein uss samay hosh mein nahi tha mein bohot jyada emotional tha ek toh Patralekha ke vajah se hurt tha , uske mujhe dhokebazz vagareh khne ke vajah se gussa tha , Jeeva ki vajah se dara hua tha ki kahi voh mujhse naraz na ho jaye , upar se Sai ki chinta ho rhi thi use vaha akela chodke aaya tha darr tha kahi voh jagtap kuch na kar de...........aap ko pata h mein jyada emotional ho jata hu toh mein kuch samajh nahi pata.........he looks at Samrat and says par meine usse kaha tha voh mere dil mein ya zindagi mein ek dost banke rahegi Jeeva bas ek dost jis din se mujhe pata chala ki voh teri patni banne vali h mene use kisi aur najar se nahi dekha...........aur mein usse pyaar nhi karta Jeeva na ab aur na tab......agar karta toh ladta nhi kya uske liye..........mene uss infatuation ko pyaar samjha aur ye baat mein Patralekha ko hazar baar bata chuka hu ki mein usse pyaar nhi karta , mere dil mein uske liye koi feelings nahi , voh sirf mere bade bhai ki biwi h mere liye..............mein usse pyaar nhi karta......nahi karta...........MEIN SAI SE PYAAR KARTA HU JEEVA SIRF AUR SIRF SAI SE USKE ALAWA MEIN KISI AUR KE BAARE MEIN SOCH BHI NAHI SAKTA !!!! By now Virat was breathing heavily. Ashwini , Shivani , Mansi and Ninad are happy at his confession of love for Sai , even Samrat though still somewhat angry at him is happy for his Shiva. Kaku , Omi Kaka and Sonali Kaku have a pinched look but didn't say anything , they have long ago accepted that Virat will never let Sai go and also have developed a little soft spot for her and hearing about Patralekha their dislike for her is somewhat diminishing.

Mein sirf ye batana chahta hu ki mere dil mein Patralekha ko koi jagah nhi h voh toh ab mere liye dost bhi nhi h aur voh vaada........voh vaada toh mein kabka tod chuka hu !!! Aur rhi baat aaj cafe mein milne ki toh usne sirf idhar udhar ki baat ki aur mein bas ye kehna chahta hu ki uska iss shaadi mein koi interest nhi h aur na hi move on karne mein.......par maine usse aakhri baar kh dia ki mein sirf aur sirf Sai se pyaar karta hu aur use kai baar bata chuka hu ki mere dil mein uske liye koi feelings nahi h....ab jo faisla lena h voh Jeeva le meine apni taraf se sab clear kar dia h.....Virat told everyone though he also wanted to tell them the whole conversation but he knew his family will create a ruckus and degrade Patralekha's character. A vindictive part of Virat wants that to happen , to make her face the same humiliation , feel the same pain his Sai faced but decided he won't sink to her level. Also his Sai would never want that , she would be disappointed if he intentionally do that. However he decided to tell Samrat the whole conversation later alone. His brother is cool headed and will think ten times before doing anything.

Mein bad aapko ye sab batana chahta tha , ab aap chahe to ja sakte h says Virat , he signalled Samrat through his eyes and left the room , towards the terrace.

After few minutes Samrat reached there too and raised a single eyebrow at him telling him to speak up. Virat told him the whole conversation word by word. Samrat has a disgusted look on his face at the end. Koi itna.......itna delusional kaise ho sakta h.......itna niche kaise gir sakta h says Samrat. Vishwas toh mujhe bhi nhi hua Jeeva par yahi saach h...........mein tujhe ek salah dunga , tu Patralekha ke baba se baat kar voh ek samajhdar insaan h humesha Patralekha ko sahi salah dete h aur galti batane se bhi nahi hichkichate , uski Aai toh uska he saath deti h humesha..........kabhi kabhi to mujhe lagta h jaise mujhe apna imaginary daamad manti ho said Virat with a repulsed look on his face and shuddered. Samrat snorted at Virat's reaction and says Mein uncle ko abhi call karunga aur kal milne ko kahunga akele aur ki Patralekha aur Aunty ko na bataye.................... Good night........Shiva Samrat said softly and left.

Good night Jeeva muttered Virat and looks at the moon as if praying God to give him more strength and thanking him to make him realise his mistakes through Sai Jeeva ka matter toh clear hua !! he sighed and looked at the armchair on terrace and thinks that he should continue his thinking session.

I loved it so much !!!! 😍

Hey dear author promise me you are gonna do full on Beizzati of didi, episode ne to hui nhi yaha kara do please🙏