|| Of Confrontations and Revelations || *Imp. Note - PG 8* [On-Hold] - Page 3

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Posted: 4 years ago
#21

Originally posted by: tinafans

Loved it but kal Virat Sai ka confrontation ye CVs to khachra dikhayenge......atleast you have written what they should show.


Thanks for the feedback babešŸ¤—

This part focused on SaiRat's confrontation. The next part will focus on Virat finding out the entire truth about the Chavans and confronting them.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#22

Originally posted by: Krishnaravali

The way you have written each and every line worth reading loved it. Will be waiting for next part


Thank you so much babešŸ¤—

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Posted: 4 years ago
#23

Originally posted by: AnjuRish

Tha knGod ..even u am.annoyed that only Om got caught

Most important he did not arrest him ..of course pulkit has to make FIR for kidnapping but for fudging doc he can make sure Omi gets legal punishment ..how can he believe only Omi was involved .

No handwriting analysis to find if Omi has actually written the letter . Shoddy investigation


Thank you so much babešŸ¤—

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Posted: 4 years ago
#24

Originally posted by: Devikadish

Oh I so wish things turn out this way. That would actually help in virat's redemption, But, Alas!!!😫

Sai's each and every word was so true. I could imagine Neil and Ayesha enacting the scene.

Anyways, this was amazingšŸ‘šŸ‘

Do consider writing a continuation to this.šŸ™


Thank you so much for this lovely comment dearšŸ¤—

I am going to write another part where Virat confronts the Makad gang

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Posted: 4 years ago
#25

Originally posted by: KBBofRCIBC

Superbly written ā¤ļø


ā€œYou know what? Accha hua ki yeh Jagtap aur Vitthal aapke bhai ya kaka ya mama nahi hai. Warna kya pata, aap unko bhi shayad giraftaar nahi karte."


The above dialogues were so to the point. After watching today’s episode I just thought the same thing. If the Mane’s were related will he standby Sai?

The show kind of loosing its charm 😢


Thank you so much for the motivation lovešŸ¤—

Even I feel that the show has lost its charm! And Virat's character🤢

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Posted: 4 years ago
#26

Originally posted by: Gurveen

Fantastic update

Love the way Sai made Virat realize his weaknesses šŸ‘..hope Virat now justifies himself, his mother, his guru and his wife 😊

Then only Sai will him back

Make sure Pakhi is also out of their life...

Please update soon


Thank you so much lovešŸ¤—

Glad that you liked it! Will update ASAP!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#27

Originally posted by: HRfan26

Agar ye dikha diya na yelog ne show pe. It would restore my lost hope and interest in the show. The show has become so stupid and so bland. I so wish Virat looks for the whole truth and this is exactly how Sai should react. Bappa ki meherbani hogi.


Thank you so muchšŸ¤—

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Posted: 4 years ago
#28

so amazing! I wish the writers were half as good as Forum writers... honestly, they can take inspiration!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#29

Originally posted by: MSgayatri

Lovely start!!!!


The info/ hints with taunt from sai was amazing.... He really dsnt see anything clearly when it comes to family..... It's understandable to some extent but sad.....


Like mahashivratri wala Pura scene hi bhul Gaya ACP Bhai.... And that looks like split personality


This fiction is great.... Please continue with the logic stories!!!


Happy writing!!!

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Thank you so much babešŸ¤—

I'm glad that you liked it!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#30

Originally posted by: pratikshaa100

Hi Niya.

Take a bigšŸ¤— from me for writing such a beautiful piece. This is what the confrontation seen should be.


Thank you sooooooooo muchšŸ¤—

Another hug back to youšŸ¤—

I'm so glad that you liked it!

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