|| Of Confrontations and Revelations || *Imp. Note - PG 8* [On-Hold] - Page 2

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Posted: 4 years ago
#11

Lovely start!!!!


The info/ hints with taunt from sai was amazing.... He really dsnt see anything clearly when it comes to family..... It's understandable to some extent but sad.....


Like mahashivratri wala Pura scene hi bhul Gaya ACP Bhai.... And that looks like split personality


This fiction is great.... Please continue with the logic stories!!!


Happy writing!!!

❤️❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
#12

Hi Niya.

Take a big🤗 from me for writing such a beautiful piece. This is what the confrontation seen should be.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#13

Bang on👏 its everything we all would want to see at this point of time👍🏼 but alas, its hopeless to hope🤢 it is just a plain simple logic which the makers aren't able to execute👎🏼

Anyways, it was nice imagining something real😳 which the show clearly lacks😕... looking forward for the next one

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Posted: 4 years ago
#14

Wow.. simply amazing.

Your take on the entire plot is truly amazing.

Loved every single word of Sai.

She rebuked him in a gentle way but also motivated him to get to know the REAL TRUTH.

I was also highly disappointed when the whole blame was put on Omi,whereas it was the joint effort of PATRALEKHA, Ninaad, Masta Masta Kaku and Omi.

I m hoping against hope that the story turns out like this.

Continue soooonish.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#15

Loved it. Virat is going to find the truth

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Posted: 4 years ago
#16

Wow, this was spot on and I loved it. Absolutely amazing.❤

I am actually not afraid of his pakki zabaan for a change over here....

Pls continue soon 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#17

Love it♥️ please write a sequel where virat learns the truth and arrests all 4 scoundrels. Ninad, omi, bk n pp.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#18

Originally posted by: notaquitter

Loved every word Sai said. The writers should visit forum to get some inspiration. I am really looking forward to they next part.


Thank you so much babe🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago
#19

Originally posted by: sadiltl

Loved it! I hope they use the dialogues as strong as yours. Wife and hubby should be honest with each other. And sai pointed all the right things to her husband!! Good writing 👍🏼


Thank you so much for the encouragement 🤗

I'm so happy that you liked it!

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Posted: 4 years ago
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