SAIRAT FF - GHKKPM another version chap 9 - page 21 - Page 7

Originally posted by: Tasu06

Update next part please cant wait dear🥺

😍❤ that is so sweet

I was drafting it today, haven't been able to finish, will probably update in a couple of hours.

Okk will wait thank you😇

wow beautiful ff dear

just loved it

waiseh i hope pyarosti yaham zyada nahi hoga nah

well love to see jealous and possessive virat and how they will get married

waiting for ur next update

Yaar this is amazing. The true parallel to story where Sai would have come with Virat unmarried and they would have actually developed a relationship with each other.

I am so glad she was strong and refused to marry Virat. I didn't really understand why the show Sai married him.

Love that his aai is so cute and accepting of her immediately. Story Virat seems sensible so far, with a minor pull towards Sai. He is already comparing his Aai with Sai and love how his aai teases him with Sai. Abhi tak show me kisi ne Virat ko tease nahi kiya hain.

Can you make it such that Ninad is actually nice but pretends to be bad to stay in Vahini's good books?

I am actually curious to see how this Virat will handle Aniket, bechara handle nahi kar paayega.

And shameless Pakhi, wouldn't she have married Samrat if Virat never made it to Haldi and other functions? She would not have known about Virat at all until after gruhpravesh when she sees his photo. I want someone either Virat or Sunny to mention it to her straight on her face to stop blaming Virat for her decision to marry Samrat. It was her own free will, which suddenly changed coz she saw a different option.

I wonder kya chal chalegi Kaku and Pakhi? At this point Pakaku are not a team in your story, so what if you will add any twist .

Waiting for next update.

Originally posted by: linakusharberry

wow beautiful ff dear

just loved it

waiseh i hope pyarosti yaham zyada nahi hoga nah

well love to see jealous and possessive virat and how they will get married

waiting for ur next update

Thank you 😊

Lol, pyarosti 😂😂

Nahi, one good thing about FF that I realised was that I get to write what a person thinks, can add monologues and so even when the friends talk, I have tried to cover Virat's thoughts.

Serial mein toh we only get to see his expressions 😂😂. Can't completely change the Virat in the FF, but will try to show some qualities in him which is lacking or they are failing to show in our show.

Possessive Virat, probably after a few more chapters or may be even before 😂😂

Shaadi toh abhi nahi 😂😂

Have added the next part in page 10.

Lovely update. I think I hate Pakhi even in fanfics. Lol. Well written .

get them married get them married 😂

Shaadi karna hai

Ji haan ji

Nice. So pp has planted shaadi idea! Hahaha. Match maker nikli ye toh! 😂 Thank you for the update. Look forward to more

Hehehe loved seeing Virat being desperate for one glance of Sai...Aai-Sai bonding always rock!!Chalo kam se kam Pakhi ne kuch idea toh diya...to ask him to marry her😂..Now tell Pakhi not to get angry when he obeys her order!

Heyy plz plz plz update soon !!!!💜💜💜

Originally posted by: sukri

Yaar this is amazing. The true parallel to story where Sai would have come with Virat unmarried and they would have actually developed a relationship with each other.

Thank you 😊

I am so glad she was strong and refused to marry Virat. I didn't really understand why the show Sai married him.

I know. It is better this way and especially not with his terms.

Love that his aai is so cute and accepting of her immediately. Story Virat seems sensible so far, with a minor pull towards Sai. He is already comparing his Aai with Sai and love how his aai teases him with Sai. Abhi tak show me kisi ne Virat ko tease nahi kiya hain.

I added the teasing part in a flow and it felt right and good too. Aai used to tease Virat in the show too, she does it even before he left to Gadchirolli leaving Samrat's wedding in between. Not sure, why they stopped it later. May be they wanted to show him realising his feelings on his own and not due to anyone's influence.

Can you make it such that Ninad is actually nice but pretends to be bad to stay in Vahini's good books?

Done. So far, have added him as a strict guy who follows his Vahini but I don't plan to make anyone too vile. They will be mean and strict but not vile.

I am actually curious to see how this Virat will handle Aniket, bechara handle nahi kar paayega.

Lol

And shameless Pakhi, wouldn't she have married Samrat if Virat never made it to Haldi and other functions? She would not have known about Virat at all until after gruhpravesh when she sees his photo. I want someone either Virat or Sunny to mention it to her straight on her face to stop blaming Virat for her decision to marry Samrat. It was her own free will, which suddenly changed coz she saw a different option.

Exactly. It was her decision to get married and is emotionally trying to trick Virat. She bad an option to back off too as you have said; when she found another option got married to Samrat. Sick.

I wonder kya chal chalegi Kaku and Pakhi? At this point Pakaku are not a team in your story, so what if you will add any twist .

Ha ha, at the moment they won't be a team, also it is easy to throw out Sai in my story because she is not married to Virat.

Waiting for next update.

Thank you 😊 for your comments.

Next part is in page 10.

I was typing in the reply to your comments abd ny phone got switched off 🙈🙈

Have replied in green.