Originally posted by: luvzindagi
Amazing OS 😃
Thank you 😊
I love your stories Nikki ❤️
Tumhara Saath is my fav ❤️❤️
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Originally posted by: luvzindagi
Amazing OS 😃
Thank you 😊
I love your stories Nikki ❤️
Tumhara Saath is my fav ❤️❤️
Originally posted by: nautankitadka
Awesomeeee!! Love how you wrote them all as realistoic characters exploring their own journey and future. Keep writing! 👏
The fact that you find the concept realistic is a great compliment, Thank you so much ❤️
Originally posted by: XxSicMNDVSxX
This was beautiful ❤️
For a change it was good to hear Pakhi’s turmoil and her acknowledgment towards her feelings and marriage.
Glad Samrat is giving her cold shoulder, atleast it’s pushing her.
Sai and Virat toh hai hi cute
Do write more 😳
Pakhi's betrayal is too deep to be forgiven very easily. I feel she should have been honest about her 'heartbreak' since the beginning.
I will definitely write more. SaiRat are too inspiring
Originally posted by: CheerlessIM
Nice os ❤
Ashwini's advice for her was genuine if she will not try to do something for her relationship than how will she get happiness
It might be not that easy , but it isn't impossible.
Every relationship needs 100% willingness to survive. If Pakhi won't make an effort no one else will either.
Thank you ❤️
Originally posted by: Deekshub
Super os and i like it so much
Thank you Deekshu 😛
It was very very good. Loved Pakhi Ashwini conversation.
Please write more. Please please please.
Thank you so much for this beautiful comment.
I will definitely write more soon 😊
Thank you dear ☺
This story was also very nice
Please write more
For me, the core part of the story was Ashwini-Pakhi conversation. It was a tremendously plotted conversation that hold so much meaning. You conveyed a lot bigger message with concise words. Pat on your back for that.
The almighty has created both you and your fate, that is true. But he gave you hands, feet and brain to use. You need to work to set your pife direction. You can not sit down and wait for Almighty to take your decision. It was her decision to marry another guy just becaz her crush didn't save her number. She has no one to blame. She need to move on not because Virat has moved on but because she was the one who decided to move on first.
I genuinely feel bad for Samrat. Among all these, he is the most deprived one.
Moreover, I really really liked your way of expressing a different point of view which showed Pakhi's inner turmoil, her sufferings, her tear stained pillow cover, her sleepless nights.
Please, do gift us more of your writings! Would love to read from you!
Happy writing!
Cheers♥
Originally posted by: ByunBaekhyun
For me, the core part of the story was Ashwini-Pakhi conversation. It was a tremendously plotted conversation that hold so much meaning. You conveyed a lot bigger message with concise words. Pat on your back for that.
The almighty has created both you and your fate, that is true. But he gave you hands, feet and brain to use. You need to work to set your pife direction. You can not sit down and wait for Almighty to take your decision. It was her decision to marry another guy just becaz her crush didn't save her number. She has no one to blame. She need to move on not because Virat has moved on but because she was the one who decided to move on first.
I genuinely feel bad for Samrat. Among all these, he is the most deprived one.
Moreover, I really really liked your way of expressing a different point of view which showed Pakhi's inner turmoil, her sufferings, her tear stained pillow cover, her sleepless nights.
Please, do gift us more of your writings! Would love to read from you!
Happy writing!
Cheers♥
Wow. Thanks alot for such appreciation. I am glad that I could put forward my imagination in front of you guys and you have perceived my words well.
Sometimes I feel Samrat is just as weak as Virat. Virat said he 'loved' Pakhi but didn't fight for her, it is obvious that Pakhi is jealous because of that since Virat never fails to fight for Sai. Anyways, it is understandable that he needed time to heal and recover from the shock he received from Pakhi and Virat but he shouldn't have run. Forget Pakhi, at least he should have confronted Virat.
In my version Pakhi is slightly different. She is a hurt woman who is reflecting it on others. I didn't want to make her the vamo she is in the show.
Thank you for your kind words 🤗
Amazing
Loved Sairat & Pakhi here
But ashwini Stole the show 😳
Samrat exploding infront of family would’ve been so cool , ppl would’ve seen their mature bahu 😆 but at same time it would’ve been very painful and humiliating for pp