One Shot - Reverie - Page 2

fantastic

loved it

however i hope virat will not be so confused and fall first for sai in the show

Originally posted by: neeraja91

This was great....poor Sai! She fell in love with a confused man. Hope theres a sequel to this where Virat introspects on his feelings for his wife and confesses.

Feels good to know you liked it. Thank you. I do plan on writing this from Virat's perspective. Hopeful for it to come out better😃

Originally posted by: minamma

Why such a beautiful piece of work lest incomplete

It is so good to read such pretty good works

Please continue this

Thank you so much for your encouraging words!😳 Yes, I do intend on completing this work.

Originally posted by: XxSicMNDVSxX

🤗Hey!

This was really beautiful.

The flashback was just ❤️

Aai is Sai’s forever supporter ⭐️

Do write more 🤗

Thanks a lot for your comments! 🤗 I am glad you liked the flashback, coz I was not satisfied! 😆

I like to think Aai loves her DIL more than her own son.😳

Originally posted by: StarryStarryNyt

Welcome back! Love this! So realistic! Can't wait to read more.

Thanks a lot!😳 Hoping to complete this soon.😃

Originally posted by: notaquitter

The angst was so beautifully expressed. I hope there is a follow up :)

@bold - Glad that you liked it! 😊 yes...I do intend on writing it from Virat's perspective

Originally posted by: njain16385

Hey that was really beautiful write up. I really like how you described Sai feelings. You ace at it 👍🏼

Kindly write a sequel to it.Awaiting to read more.

@bold - I am happy that you liked it. Thanks a lot for your encouraging words😳

yes...I am planning to write from Virat's perspective as well.

Originally posted by: sukri

Aww.. poor girl. You have described her feelings so beautifully including her past memories.

So Virat didn't try to meet her or his mom even once in the year she left Chavan madhouse!

She deserves love even if its from a different person and hope you would continue this story.

Glad you liked it. Thank you! 🤗

Well, I do hope on clearing your doubts about Virat in my next update, whenever I complete it, that is...😆 @bold - that she does

Originally posted by: fkhr30

Great job

Thanks a lot! :)

Originally posted by: sid__005

Great lines!!

it would be great to know if virat will come and get her back

please continue

Thanks a lot! Glad you liked it. I do plan on finishing it. Lets see how it pans out.