OS : Beetee na Bitaye Raina - Page 2

I rarely comment on posts but couldn't move ahead without commenting on yours.

This piece of write up was sheer brilliance, through and through. You have a way with your words which can ignite the imagination of the reader's mind.I could totally relate to and empathize with Virat's point of view, his inner conflict and how his heart is unknowingly warming towards Sai.

I would love to read more of Sairat from you. You should definitely write more !

That was so amazing ..

Loved it...

Originally posted by: bones123

You are too kind. Thankyou for reading and leaving such a lovely comment. Glad you liked the little details..it makes the story for me..

Ha I'm totally incapable of writing beyond this length! Even this one I was losing the grip on what I wanted to say :) I'd love to write more, so will wait for inspiration to strike!

@bold plz do the honours soon

P.S. you deserve all the appreciation😊

Originally posted by: Infinities

I rarely comment on posts but couldn't move ahead without commenting on yours.

This piece of write up was sheer brilliance, through and through. You have a way with your words which can ignite the imagination of the reader's mind.I could totally relate to and empathize with Virat's point of view, his inner conflict and how his heart is unknowingly warming towards Sai.

I would love to read more of Sairat from you. You should definitely write more !

Thank you so much for your kind words. I’m glad that my story evoked enough of an emotion for you to comment :)

I look forward to writing more, hopefully when the plot provides the right inspiration.

Originally posted by: Angel_Diya

That was so amazing ..

Loved it...

Thank you so much! Glad you liked it.

This is an absolutely lovely piece. I like your Virat. He has depth and care. The way you described his relationship with Paakhi as an extension of Samrat is something I am hoping happens in the show as well.

You transported me to Virat's world. Thank you for this amazing piece.

You totally nailed it!!

It is so well written and graceful. I could feel the flow of his confusion and the sequence of events. This OS makes me look forward to SaiRat chemistry.

Beautiful, just like the previous one! Even better!

I like the idea of writing a perspective instead of one event, it captures the mind of the character and gives a sense of development.... you captured it beautifully! Take a bow, maam!

But if you would just write something later on this timeline with cute interactions of sairat, please just please, for the love of fanfics, it would be the best treat ever!!! Can't say no, thank you so much!!!

Originally posted by: CookiesNCream

You are such a good story teller!! Your choice of words and your writing style keeps me hooked onto your work!!

I love how rich the character of Virat is in your story. The way that Virat and Sai are both trying to understand eachother personally and professionally and how they find eachother as a source of comfort!!

Also I loved how you left their conversation upto one's imagination. Thanks for a great One Shot :)

Thankyou so much for reading and leaving such a great comment. I'm glad you liked the story and the portrayals of Virat and Sai. Hopefully this sort of behaviour we see soon in the show.

Originally posted by: Eternized_Blues

This is an absolutely lovely piece. I like your Virat. He has depth and care. The way you described his relationship with Paakhi as an extension of Samrat is something I am hoping happens in the show as well.

You transported me to Virat's world. Thank you for this amazing piece.

Aah, thankyou so much for reading! I'm so glad you liked it and I've managed to make a version of Virat that is endearing to you :) I wish the same for the show!! Pakhi and Virat if not for her obsession, have the ability to have a beautiful friendship.

Originally posted by: AK_2010

You totally nailed it!!

It is so well written and graceful. I could feel the flow of his confusion and the sequence of events. This OS makes me look forward to SaiRat chemistry.

Thankyou!! I do think he was in a very confused position when he took the decision and it'll take time for him to piece what's actually happening and how that impacts his life deeper! Looking forward to their chemistry as well.

Originally posted by: MissPrakash

Beautiful, just like the previous one! Even better!

I like the idea of writing a perspective instead of one event, it captures the mind of the character and gives a sense of development.... you captured it beautifully! Take a bow, maam!

But if you would just write something later on this timeline with cute interactions of sairat, please just please, for the love of fanfics, it would be the best treat ever!!! Can't say no, thank you so much!!!

Thankyou so much for reading both stories and liking them :) Hehe i can't write in active voice or with dialogue generally, so perspectives, inner turmoil, angst etc. are my favourite devices to explore the nuances of a character.

I will fail horribly if I ever write cute interactions, so will probably refrain from spoiling the magic that's being created by the actors. However, I do think there's room for lots of angsty ruminations, so will try and write on those lines. Thanks again for reading, much appreciated.