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Posted: 4 years ago
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Some relations are so pure, yet have so much to be explored ❤️

Thanks for this wonderful tale, enjoying the transition 👍🏼

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Hey guys! Hope everyone is doing well. I never expected to continue this story. It was just a spur of the moment when I wrote the first part, but since some of you guys are actually reading it and liking it, I thought I will try to continue. But I must say I never expected it to be so taxing, especially if you are not at good at writing lol... but here is the next part! Please leave your feedback as it is the only driving force for me to continue.


Also, let's see who can guess the person standing at the door.


Part 7


“Sai!?” Malini and Mann uttered simultaneously. Mann quickly bent down and scooped her in his arms and took her to the couch. Everyone followed him. “Quick Malini, go get my medical case from the car. Can someone give me water?” He said in his calm yet unsettling voice. Karishma rushed to the t-table to pour water in a glass. Virat hung up his phone when he heard Ashwini’s scream and to find everyone in the living room. He saw everyone gathered around the couch and when he made his way, he saw Sai laying on the couch senseless. In a state of shock, he bent on his knee, sat beside her, and called her name. Karishma hands the glass of water to Mann and he sprinkles it on her face. He calls her name and pats her face to awaken her. He checks her pulse and notices it to be elevated. Malini rushes back with the case and hands it to Mann. He takes out his stethoscope to listen to her chest and hears crackling noises in the lungs. She was wheezing through her every breath. Ashwini was in tears while the rest of the family looked concerned.

“Quick Malini call an ambulance. This girl is burning up with fever and is wheezing. Her lungs don’t sound clear either. We need to take her to the hospital ASAP. Sai, Sai, can you hear me, Sai!” Mann calls out her name.

Virat trembled from what the man next to him was saying. He looked at her and saw how pale she looked. How could he have not noticed it earlier? His anger had blinded him from seeing how weak she was. He held onto her warm hand and felt a weak squeeze. Virat called out her name once more as he gently put his palm on her head and softly stroked her hair. Sai slowly opened her eyes and saw a blur of people around her. Her head felt heavy as a rock and she had difficulty breathing. She felt chills in her body and coughed from thirst. Mann asked everyone to stand clear to give her some space to breath. Virat, unaware of what Mann had told, just held on to her hand and gazed at her with his concerned eyes. As her vision slowly got clear, she held her head with one hand and tried to sit up. Virat helped her by putting his arm around her shoulder, sitting her up, and setting cushions behind her to rest her back.

“Water” She asked in her soft, shaky voice. Mann gave her the glass of water in his hand while Virat helped her drink it. Mann wondered for an instant about the guy next to Sai who was showing such caring gestures to her but got distracted when Sai let out a cough.

Sai’s head was throbbing loudly behind her right ear, and she barely got a sense of her surroundings. She was surprised to see both of her professors next to her. She looked around to see where she was. She saw the Chavan family and then looked at her professors again. She winced; brows furrowed tight in pain. Mann looked at Sai and asked her if she could hear him. Sai slowly nodded her head in the immense pain. Mann asked her to look at his finger pointing up and follow it with her eyes. She slowly moved her eyes in the direction of the moving finger. Then Mann asked her some questions, “Sai, can you tell me your full name?”

“sa--Sai Joshi,” said in her dreadful state.

“Do you know where you are?”

“In the Chavan mansion?”

“yes”

“Do you know who these people are?”

She looked up to see their faces and replied, “Yes, Aai, baba, Samrat dada, Karishma, Sonali kaku, and…” Sai paused when she saw Virat beside her. For a moment she forgot about the throbbing head pain as she kept looking into the depth of his dark brown eyes, the eyes that she felt was calling her. She stared at him and thought how pale he looked. He looked like a body without a soul except for the eyes that barely held onto a tiny piece of his fleeting soul. His eyes were red and barely holding onto the tears from passing through his cheeks. She wanted to know the reason behind that pain in those intoxicating eyes and wanted to get rid of them, hoping that will bring back his missing soul and make him alive again.

“And?” Mann asked. “do you know his name?”

“Yes, Virat sir.” She replied not taking her eyes off him.

Mann and Malini let out a sigh of relief. “Looks like her neural and motor functions are normal.” Malini added.

She looked away from those hypnotizing eyes when she heard Malini’s voice, “But sir, mam, what are you doing here?” Sai gave a confused look at them.

“Well, we came here for dinner and we are equally surprised to see you here.” Mann replied.

“Dinner? What dinner?” Sai tried to make sense of what Mann had just said, and everything came back to her. Her face turned grim when she remembered last night’s incident. She looked at Virat again and thought to herself that the soothing eyes that she felt was calling her had fits of rage and scrutiny towards her just yesterday. She took her hand away from Virat’s grasp when she noticed him holding. “Oh okay, I remember. We were supposed to have guests at our house tonight, and I didn’t know it was you and your family.”

“Mann, Malini, do you know her?” Mrs. Deshmukh asked them both.

“Yes mom, she is one of bhai’s student and also our research assistant in college.”

“Oh, she is a medical student at our college? Vahini, yeh kon hay?” Mrs. Deshmukh asks. TMK was dumbfounded by the entire situation. “Ha, yeh woh hamari-” TMK was stuttering when Ashwini interrupted.

“Ha, yeh ghar ki choti bahu hay. Meri Virat ki patni, Sai.” Ashwini replies to Mrs. Deshmukh. Hearing that Malina and Mann were in a state to shock. Finally, they noticed the mangalsutra on her neck and the green bangles on her wrists. She looked completely different from how she normally looks in college in her tied up hair, big glasses, and blue scrubs under her white coat. Sai would always take her bangles off on campus as they would interrupt with her lab activities, and her mangalsutra would remain under her white coat. So, there was no way for anyone to know she was married unless she had told them herself. She looked like a normal medical student like everyone else. Mann and Malini was a bit taken aback in her different attire and her new identity.

“Sai, you are married?” Malini asks Sai in her confused and surprised state.

“Now is not the time for this, Malini. We need to get her to the hospital.” Mann replied as he took a glance at Sai and then at Virat.

“Hospital? I don’t need to go to the hospital. I am fine now. I just got a little lightheaded. Mam, please cancel the ambulance and sorry again for causing trouble to you both.” Sai replied earnestly in her shaky voice.

“No Sai look at you. You cannot even speak without breaking your voice. Your fever is so high that your face is all red, and looks like you have a bruise on the right side of your face. Plus, this is your second time fainting in less than 48 hours. We need to get you checked and get tests done to make sure it is nothing serious.”

“Wait second time?” Virat asked in shock.

“Yeah. Yesterday she was working with us in the research lab and suddenly dropped to the floor like today. We tried to reach her family, but the contact information she had on file was not updated so we could not contact anyone. We were going to inform the police, but she just woke up and left without telling us.” Malini replied in surprise that nobody had any idea about it. “You know we were so concerned for you and have been trying to reach you all day today? I texted your phone countless times before coming here today. Even Usha was worried for you.” Malini sighs and shakes her head.

“Sorry mam, I didn’t get time to look at my phone today, but I texted in the group chat earlier.” Sai replied.

“Well, you said you were doing fine, but clearly you are worse than yesterday.” Malini rebukes her.

“So, you are Virat sir. You called her phone yesterday, right? I had to answer the call to inform you about her, but her phone died and got disconnected.” Mann replied. This was the first time when both Virat and Mann carefully looked at each other. Virat has finally found the face of the man he unknowingly despised and knew soon enough that it was unjustified. As the misunderstanding finally unfolds, his heart fills with guilt and his unwitting hatred for this man turns into heartfelt gratitude for saving his wife.

“Thank you for taking care of her yesterday and today also.” Virat replied with his eyes looking down. He was not able to meet the eyes of the man whom he wrongfully despised. He could not meet the eyes of his wife whom he wrongfully blamed. How is he ever going to make it up to Sai after this? If he could only turn back time and listen to her just once. If he had only brushed off his ego and stood by Sai yesterday, then maybe she would not be in dire state today. He was responsible for her health today; he is responsible for all her suffering and pain. His mind and heart were filled with so much remorse that he could not look up. The Chavan family was ashamed of their wrongdoings and lowered their gaze in shame.

“Sai, you didn’t inform your family? How can you be so irres-” Mann was getting angry at Sai for her recklessness and soon got distracted by the ambulance siren outside the house. “The ambulance is here.” Mann said in relief.

“Mom, dad, you guys go home now. Bhai and I will go to the hospital.” Malini said to her parents.

“Okay beta. Keep us updated. I hope you have a fast recovery, Sai.” Mrs. Deshmukh replied.

“Okay Ninaad, we will see you another time. Take care and let us know if you need anything.” Mr. Deshmukh says to Ninaad.

“Thank you for coming, Siddharth, and I apologize for tonight,” says Ninaad apologetically.

“Oh no! there is nothing to apologize for.” Mr. Deshmukh pats his shoulder. He looks at Sai and says, “and Sai, hope you get well soon. We will come visit you at the hospital later.” Sai slightly nods at the couple who she didn’t get to formally meet.

Sai was put inside the ambulance with Virat sitting by her. Malini and Mann followed the ambulance in their car, while Samrat, Pakhi, and Ashwini followed them in another car. The ambulance ride was filled with silence until the paramedic tried to insert a needle on Sai’s arm for the IV fluid. “Ahh” Sai called out from the unexpected poke to which Virat replied, “samhalke” to the paramedic and instinctively grasped Sai’s hand. Their eyes met once again, but Sai looked away and removed her hand from his. Virat knew he deserved that rejection. In fact, he deserved much worse. He not only hurt her self-respect, but her entire upbringing. Sai always praised to Virat how her Aaba raised her single handedly despite all the scrutiny he got from others for being a single father and managed to work as a full-time police officer as well. He never lacked in his duty as a father or as an officer. He had always wanted to raise Sai as an honest, loving, and strong woman who would be his pride. He never wanted others to raise questions on her manners and her character just because she didn’t have a mother to raise her. He tried his utmost best with his love, affection, and discipline to fulfill a mother’s duty; however, last night, they were all put on a scale for questioning. Sai was ordered to prove her innocence to validate her father’s morals and teachings. That too from the people she had thought as her own. Her Aaba entrusted Virat with Sai’s responsibility in hopes that he will shield her like how he had always shielded her. However, Virat had failed his guru. He could not live up to Kamal’s hopes and expectations. He was supposed to shield her from his family’s accusations last night but rather became the arrow to their bows that struck her deeply. Virat desperately wished to turn back time and make everything right again. However, the damage was done, and now it was up to him to fix it. How he will do that? Will Sai even give him a second chance to redeem himself to her? He knew the journey to her forgiveness was not easy, but he is ready to bet his life on the slightest chance he has. As he watched her laying down beside her, he took an oath to himself that he will be by her side and be the shield that he was meant to be. He will give her all the happiness and love that she was deserving of.

Chavan Mansion

Everyone was quiet and left with uncertainty in their faces. Nobody had the words to utter anything until Shivani broke the silence, “Dekha! Uss bechari ki koi galti nehi thi, aur aap log uski charitra pe kitna ghatiya ilzam laga diya? Sai ke ma baap iss duniya me nehi hay to uss bechari ke upar kitna zulum kiya aap logo neh, kuch malum hay?” Shivani yelled in disgust.

“Toh, woh humko bata sakti thi na who uski professor and colleagues ki saath thi?” TMK tried to justify her misdeeds.

“She tried to! But you guys cut her off like always and thought otherwise when you found out it was a male professor and just went off on her because of that. You didn’t even want to hear her side of the story. Before she could even explain anything, you had already announced your final judgement on her!” Shivani kept yelling as she was not going to let them go off the hook tonight. “Vahini, aap abhi bhi aapki galti nehi manengi? She fell sick yesterday, and nobody gave her the chance to tell us, and today her health got much worse because of that. Why do you guys have so much problem with her? Is it just because she refuses to be your puppet? Is it because she speaks out against the wrongdoings in this house? Is it because she challenges the outdated rules and tradition of this house?” See glanced at everyone with fiery eyes. Nobody had any answers, and Shivani kept on going because she had enough of everyone. He was ready to them a mirror with their real faces. “How can you guys be so ungrateful to her? Did you forget that her father took a bullet for Virat and passed away? She was forced to marry Virat under pressure, but still she accepted that marriage and us as her family. In return, she only wanted some love and respect from you guys, but what does she get every day? Aaap logo ki taane aur bezzati? At least Virat used to be by her side, but you guys turned him against her as well?”

“Dekho Shivani, now you are saying too much. We didn’t turn Virat against her.” Omkar replied in defense.

“Your denial will not change the truth dada. We know what had happened last night. This morning, Ashwini vahini was telling me that she slept on the terrace last night and did not even touch her food. And then on the breakfast table you guys went off on her again. Aap sab logo ki insaniath kya mar chuki hay jo ap log abhi bhi galti nehi maan raha hay? Shivani questions in disbelief.

“Dekho aab tum bass karo--” TMK spoke up but stopped when she heard a knock at the entrance. They all looked at the entrance and was surprised to see who was standing at the door.

Edited by by_stander - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago
#93

Loved the update . Please update the next part soon.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#94

Thank you for this wonderful update! So happy that the truth is out. My heart goes out to Sai. Jaldi thik hojaaye humaari baby patakha! And virat has some serious soul searching and apologizing to do.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Superb

Finally truth is out

I hope at door it’s Samrat or mann

Can’t wait for next update

Update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
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👏👏....I got all the feelings you tried to put it in....it was awesome ☺️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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please write a novel..jithna bhi padoon uthna excitement badtha hey..like what next what next?😆

yeh dil maangaen more...❤️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Awesome update 🤗

I just love it... Truth is like sun and doesn't require any help to shine

But who is at the door?

Samrat? Maan??

Please update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: chinnu_kaku

please write a novel..jithna bhi padoon uthna excitement badtha hey..like what next what next?😆

yeh dil maangaen more...❤️


Thank you so much for such a sweet comment <3.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: luvzindagi

Awesome update 🤗

I just love it... Truth is like sun and doesn't require any help to shine

But who is at the door?

Samrat? Maan??

Please update soon


I Will update soon...currently working on writing the next chapter. Thank you for liking it. ❤️

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