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In this whole nonsensical and highly incredible Story track , they can still add some novel angle and capture our interest by showing a falling out between Saraswati and Shitij over the Kiran issue .
They can show that Shitij is furious that Kiran was kept hungry and wud have been starved . They can show a dialogue where Shitij erupts and tells Saraswati that he feels like smacking her for letting this go this far . He can say that till today I loved u selflessly , supported ur family , went twice to jail for its sake , bore untold humiliation first from ur dad when he was a boor andnow from the whore who is ur bhabhi ..........but i cannot and will not adjust anything for our daughter Kiran's sake . I respect ur grandma and ur love for her but which book in the world tells that love for ur maayka means starving or sacrificing ur children ? Now u go and give her any excuse but I am walking off with Kiran outside this hell hole , U can come and join me when this situation resolves ! Why shud our child suffer for ur spoilt brother's mistakes ?
Now this wud add sum flavour to the story . This will make Shitij seem more human , more of a man and not such a complete clay doll in Saraswati's hands . He is the perfect candidate to give Saraswati a well desrved bashing . And most of all , he wud be right .
In short , show us that although Shitij the husband is a wuss , Shitij the father is a man !
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