Short Story ~ Objection, Your Honor! It’s Love ~ Completed - Page 7

Originally posted by: aparna3011

SUPERB STORY

enjoy reading very much

read all parts in one go

both maan n geet always ready to teaseeach other but admire each other

Khup khup aabhar

glad you liked it

Originally posted by: dellzcreationz

Part 3

Like the way Geet acts like she isnt bothered by him, and awaits for him to enter her cabin, and their nok jhok ...and like the detail of Geet's glasses it reminded me of Madhu and RK's daughter .

As Geet and Maan are trying to unmask the complexities of the case, their bond starts to develop, love this slow burn thats goes between them though Maan is coming off and on in regards to work related, but the more time they spend, the more they feel a connection , a unsaid bond between them thats creating feelings, Maan's determination in wanting to crack the case and Geet's curiosity is like a taal se taal milana.Geet finding about Rajveer (her own client) being linked to the case of Maan's has aroused varous questions in her mind, that they are actually playing with fire, and that they have to be careful, am really looking forward to the future chaps to really get to the depts of the case , of the shady illegal things that Rajveer is behind of that ties both Geet and Maan in this mess.

Ayyyooo thank you so much re I appreciate you taking out time to comment

Part 4

Omg finally a lead ...yay that to by ACP Maan skill's of managing to get a breakthrough

Love their banter yaar, their growing fondness for each other...

Loved Maan's protective side for Geet and Geet showing him that how much of a badass girl she is by knocking off a goon...

The warehouse has alot of hidden secrets which am sure they will get to its depths soon enough..

But each passing moment ...that nervousness that they are feeling , sher ke gufa ke andar jaana ke kabil hai what they are going through by taking such a risk of entering rajveer 's den

But whats comforting is Maan Geet's bond is growing stronger as they unravel the mystery that's around them..

Awesome update Anu, can't wait to read the next chaps ..

Originally posted by: dellzcreationz

Part 4

Omg finally a lead ...yay that to by ACP Maan skill's of managing to get a breakthrough

Love their banter yaar, their growing fondness for each other...

Loved Maan's protective side for Geet and Geet showing him that how much of a badass girl she is by knocking off a goon...

The warehouse has alot of hidden secrets which am sure they will get to its depths soon enough..

But each passing moment ...that nervousness that they are feeling , sher ke gufa ke andar jaana ke kabil hai what they are going through by taking such a risk of entering rajveer 's den

But whats comforting is Maan Geet's bond is growing stronger as they unravel the mystery that's around them..

Awesome update Anu, can't wait to read the next chaps ..

Thanks a ton

@B : Just to let you know I have already completed this one. No need to "wait" to read next chaps dear you just have to click "next" and read

Originally posted by: nushhkiee

Thanks a ton

@B : Just to let you know I have already completed this one. No need to "wait" to read next chaps dear you just have to click "next" and read

Mein apne baare mein baat kar rahi thi

Ki mujhe time lagega padhne mein toh I can't ki kab next padoon

Part 5

Geet and Maan managed to take down Rajveer's business but Geet ki smart intel led her to crack the biggest puzzle and thats a Arjun's involvement of covering up Rajveer ke karamat.Loved their banter and their team work, specially that line that defines them that the brainy work is Geet and the muscle power in Maan

Their growing bond over the case, and them just not knowing how they go ahead with their lives after this...haaye they will miss each other's nok jhok and presence which in these so many days they grown over each other, there is a different sort of bond that grows when you are stuck with a person on something, and their growing feelings just adds another level of warmth which rightly said by you, like they are each other's safe place in all of this mess.

When Geet realized that Arjun was the one whom she trying to defend all this while, she felt like pang on her chest for trying to side with the wrong.

The confrontation with Arjun omg it gave me so much chills....like wow...

Them feeling the brush of their skin and dil mein laado phoota yaar am in love with them...

cant wait to read the next one.

Originally posted by: dellzcreationz

Part 5

Geet and Maan managed to take down Rajveer's business but Geet ki smart intel led her to crack the biggest puzzle and thats a Arjun's involvement of covering up Rajveer ke karamat.Loved their banter and their team work, specially that line that defines them that the brainy work is Geet and the muscle power in Maan

Their growing bond over the case, and them just not knowing how they go ahead with their lives after this...haaye they will miss each other's nok jhok and presence which in these so many days they grown over each other, there is a different sort of bond that grows when you are stuck with a person on something, and their growing feelings just adds another level of warmth which rightly said by you, like they are each other's safe place in all of this mess.

When Geet realized that Arjun was the one whom she trying to defend all this while, she felt like pang on her chest for trying to side with the wrong.

The confrontation with Arjun omg it gave me so much chills....like wow...

Them feeling the brush of their skin and dil mein laado phoota yaar am in love with them...

cant wait to read the next one.

Part 6

Anuuuu just love your writing, the way Geet wanted to confess her feelings but Maan kabhi keh nahi paa raha tha, because men generally need that push to convey their feelings and she did absoutely, unki beech mein woh joh tension thi...she couldnt bare it to confess her feelings, and she confessed loved the way she said there shouldnt be a reason for her to bring sweets,

"You’re the most infuriating person I’ve ever met. And the most brilliant. And...."

This line so romantically amusing

just love their nok jhok wali pyaar of teasing each other, them being stuck with each other...

and he clearly doesnt mind it

Just loved this super cute confession between the duo...

ahhhh finally now epilogue itna jaldi yeh short story complete hone chala hai...

OMG this is soooo romantically, sweet, cute, funny walla epilogue , they are happily married and in all of that loved the way Maan teases her about her cooking , and Geets says to him "You’re lucky you look good, or I would’ve divorced you by now”

And gasped when Maan was like “Well, we could’ve skipped the wedding altogether and just gone straight to the honeymoon”

My Geetu loves Maan so much ki had written his name on his case files, Geet is so mee in this...

Trullyy love the end when their cute banter continues...thats the beauty of their bond, which makes them strong, being irresistable .

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Originally posted by: dellzcreationz

Part 6

Anuuuu just love your writing, the way Geet wanted to confess her feelings but Maan kabhi keh nahi paa raha tha, because men generally need that push to convey their feelings and she did absoutely, unki beech mein woh joh tension thi...she couldnt bare it to confess her feelings, and she confessed loved the way she said there shouldnt be a reason for her to bring sweets,

You’re absolutely right ... sometimes men need that little push to let out their feelings, and Geet was definitely the one to do it 😆

"You’re the most infuriating person I’ve ever met. And the most brilliant. And...."

This line so romantically amusing

I intended to make it sound like that. Glad you noticed

just love their nok jhok wali pyaar of teasing each other, them being stuck with each other...

and he clearly doesnt mind it

It’s the kind of love that keeps things fun and exciting

Just loved this super cute confession between the duo...

ahhhh finally now epilogue itna jaldi yeh short story complete hone chala hai...

Ahhh, thank you so much for such a sweet comment You made my day