Short Story ~ Objection, Your Honor! It’s Love ~ Completed - Page 6

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Posted: 6 months ago
#51

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Part 5

glad that they cracked the case wide open

at least Rajveer's Malhotras operations were exposed

of cos Geet got to know that a lawyer was involved, that is Rajveer's cousin Arjun

well Geet was one step ahead of Maan

liked Geet's response

they are indeed make a great team

Maan's thoughts were understandable

Geet had a good point

the plan of action was clearly the same

Geet's question was reasonable

Maan did not expect this

his response was anticipated

loved that Maan was ready to take the next step with Geet

as expected Geet had all the information about Arjun

certainly an irony for Geet

pleased that they have all the evidence to nail him

Geet's comments were justified

at least Maan assured her

not surprised that they confronted Arjun and arrested him

Thank you ... thank you so much smiley27

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Posted: 6 months ago
#52

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Part 6

Geet's nervousness was justified

so she gave Maan a peace offering

Maan was indeed confused

liked that she praised Maan

Maan's reaction was reasonable

finally she confessed that she likes him

Maan was certainly shocked

as expected he reciprocated

aww Maan was blushing

of cos she teased him

he was astounded when she pecked him on his cheek

not surprised that he is happy to be stuck with her

loved writing this part...am glad you liked it smiley9

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Posted: 6 months ago
#53

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Epilogue

wonderful that Maaneet are happily married

Gosh Geet is a hopeless cook

of cos Maan teased her

Maan was hilarious

enjoyed their banter!

beautiful moments

amazing end

Thanks so much for all your comments, Chetnasmiley31

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Posted: 6 months ago
#54

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

thanks for sharing this fabulous SS

hope to read more stories from yousmiley1

Haha more? Hopefully. Let's see smiley10 thanks again!!

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Posted: 6 months ago
#55

Its give me feeling like

Serious 😮 case ongoing

And both solving together

Intense 🫣

Hota nhi hai CID wali feeling 🤣

Superb

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Posted: 6 months ago
#56

Originally posted by: priya_21

Its give me feeling like

Serious 😮 case ongoing

And both solving together

Intense 🫣

Hota nhi hai CID wali feeling 🤣

Superb

Haha...thank you so much <3

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Posted: 6 months ago
#57

Loveddd part 2

Its like stepping stone for Geet where she is placed in a do and die situation.Where there is risks , Geet has a stature for risk bearing cases, but Maan's request seemed personal, for which he directly approrached Geet to handle it and was willing to take all the risks if it goes down south, which meant ki he was dead serious of getting Geet, a woman known for her ability to crack tough cases and for a ACP to approach her meant something serious.Geet's contemplations, her delimma its understandable when Maan gives her the folder and she sees for herself that her job might be in risk in exposing such a case, since it involved people of influential status.Now that Geet has agreed to get her hands dirted in this chaos that Maan has given his word for, am really very intrigued Anu what is in store.

Loved the conversation between Sanya and Geet it kinda reminded me of Sanaya and Dhrasti in IRL, their dynamics.

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Posted: 6 months ago
#58

Originally posted by: dellzcreationz

Loveddd part 2

Its like stepping stone for Geet where she is placed in a do and die situation.Where there is risks , Geet has a stature for risk bearing cases, but Maan's request seemed personal, for which he directly approrached Geet to handle it and was willing to take all the risks if it goes down south, which meant ki he was dead serious of getting Geet, a woman known for her ability to crack tough cases and for a ACP to approach her meant something serious.Geet's contemplations, her delimma its understandable when Maan gives her the folder and she sees for herself that her job might be in risk in exposing such a case, since it involved people of influential status.Now that Geet has agreed to get her hands dirted in this chaos that Maan has given his word for, am really very intrigued Anu what is in store.

Loved the conversation between Sanya and Geet it kinda reminded me of Sanaya and Dhrasti in IRL, their dynamics.

Glad to know you liked it ❤️

Stay tuned 😉

Thank you so much for the feedback 😍🥰

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Posted: 6 months ago
#59

SUPERB STORY

enjoy reading very much

read all parts in one go

both maan n geet always ready to teaseeach other but admire each other

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Posted: 6 months ago
#60

Part 3

Like the way Geet acts like she isnt bothered by him, and awaits for him to enter her cabin, and their nok jhok ...and like the detail of Geet's glasses it reminded me of Madhu and RK's daughter smiley42.

As Geet and Maan are trying to unmask the complexities of the case, their bond starts to develop, love this slow burn thats goes between them though Maan is coming off and on in regards to work related, but the more time they spend, the more they feel a connection , a unsaid bond between them thats creating feelings, Maan's determination in wanting to crack the case and Geet's curiosity is like a taal se taal milana.Geet finding about Rajveer (her own client) being linked to the case of Maan's has aroused varous questions in her mind, that they are actually playing with fire, and that they have to be careful, am really looking forward to the future chaps to really get to the depts of the case , of the shady illegal things that Rajveer is behind of that ties both Geet and Maan in this mess.

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