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Posted: 7 months ago

Originally posted by: aparna3011

10

maan with his all force make vickram shah powerless n open

geet is strong support to him

Yes, absolutely now the bond will only strengthen.

Thank you so much.

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Posted: 7 months ago

11 & 12

maan is scare to accept feelings for geet

but geet can see n encourage to break wall build around maan

maan is not ready to give control over him to other which can break him n left alone

geet with patience slowly breaking walls around maan with little crakes

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Posted: 7 months ago

Originally posted by: maangeet.gmmg

Great update Love to see maaneet together in each fight simply amazing 🤩

Thanks a lot for loving the update.

It means a lot.

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Posted: 7 months ago

Originally posted by: aparna3011

11 & 12

maan is scare to accept feelings for geet

but geet can see n encourage to break wall build around maan

maan is not ready to give control over him to other which can break him n left alone

geet with patience slowly breaking walls around maan with little crakes

Thanks a lot for giving your detailed feedback.

I am glad you are loving the updates.

Yes, now they are bound together.

Let’s see what is in hold of their future….

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Posted: 7 months ago

Chapter 10

at least Maan's instinct warned him that the war is far from over

Geet was clearly proud of Maan

of cos he told her that they did everything together

Gosh Adi uncovered information that points to the Khurana Group

Maan was indeed shocked

great that he is determined to find out the who is behind all this

glad that Geet felt that something was amiss and eventually uncovered some information

as expected she shared it with Maan

pleased that Rahul managed to find out who the account belongs to

Maan's reaction was justified

so he knows Rajveer Singh

liked that Maan is willing to fight head on

despite the danger and threats, they soldier on

not surprised that Rajveer's operations were exposed and he was arrested

nice that Maan and Geet support each other in this

Gosh the danger is still there

good that Maan makes all arrangements

loved Geet taking charge

pleased seeing Maan and Geet's courage

at least Maan got an ally who helped him

appreciate Geet's concern for Maan

admire how Maan handled the situation

Vikram took the bait

Maan's anger was justified after what happened at the warehouse

Maan ensured that Vikram was dealt with

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Posted: 7 months ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Chapter 10

at least Maan's instinct warned him that the war is far from over

Geet was clearly proud of Maan

of cos he told her that they did everything together

Gosh Adi uncovered information that points to the Khurana Group

Maan was indeed shocked

great that he is determined to find out the who is behind all this

glad that Geet felt that something was amiss and eventually uncovered some information

as expected she shared it with Maan

pleased that Rahul managed to find out who the account belongs to

Maan's reaction was justified

so he knows Rajveer Singh

liked that Maan is willing to fight head on

despite the danger and threats, they soldier on

not surprised that Rajveer's operations were exposed and he was arrested

nice that Maan and Geet support each other in this

Gosh the danger is still there

good that Maan makes all arrangements

loved Geet taking charge

pleased seeing Maan and Geet's courage

at least Maan got an ally who helped him

appreciate Geet's concern for Maan

admire how Maan handled the situation

Vikram took the bait

Maan's anger was justified after what happened at the warehouse

Maan ensured that Vikram was dealt with

Thank you so much for loving the update.

Loved your detailed comments on the chapter.

Yes, the enemies are there to create obstacles.

But our protagonists are stronger than ever.

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Posted: 7 months ago

Chapter 11

glad that the battle was won

liked Geet's concern for Maan

Maan's response was justified

of cos Geet told that they can face everything together

agree with Maan that Geet is stronger than she thinks

Geet had a valid point

Maan's question and Geet's response was reasonable

adore Geet teasing Maan

Geet was correct that Maan needed a break

at least she managed to get Maan to relax

so Maan thanked Geet

as expected Maan was adamant that Geet dance with him

she was initially hesitant

loved their conversation

not surprised that Maan trusts Geet more than anyone else

pleased seeing Maan and Geet getting closer

wonderful that he appreciated Geet

enjoyed their banter

nice that Maan took Geet out

wonderful that they are spending time together and getting to know each other

Geet did assure Maan that he is not alone

well Maan takes advice from Geet for business decisions

Geet taking care of Maan was understandable

Maan's thoughts well portrayed

one thing for certain is that they both understand each other

Maan's fears were anticipated

yet again she assured him

ahh they are similar tastes

they clearly have feelings for each other

Geet noticed a different side of Maan

wonder who will confess??

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Posted: 7 months ago

Chapter 12

of cos Geet was worried about Maan

glad that Maan confided in Geet

he indeed vulnerable

liked that she assured him

she was right that he needs to change

his question was anticipated

great that she admitted that he matters to her

will they ever act on their feelings?

as expected Maan was mesmerised seeing Geet

pleased that Maan was direct with Geet

at least they indirectly conceded that there is something between them

well they did not address what happened

loved Geet teasing Maan

enjoyed their banter

Maan is certainly a tough no nonsense boss

he demands perfection

however he does trust Geet

Thank God Maan saved Geet from falling

Maan's concern for Geet was justified

pleased that Maan was honest with Geet

good that she assured him

the tension between them is simmering

so Geet confronted Maan

well she told him not to fight it and let it happen

Gosh that kiss said everything

Maan's fears were understandable

nice that she assured him

agree with her that he just has to be himself

at least he opens up to her

their conversation was gripping

they are together and that what matters


update soon

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Posted: 7 months ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Chapter 11

glad that the battle was won

liked Geet's concern for Maan

Maan's response was justified

of cos Geet told that they can face everything together

agree with Maan that Geet is stronger than she thinks

Geet had a valid point

Maan's question and Geet's response was reasonable

adore Geet teasing Maan

Geet was correct that Maan needed a break

at least she managed to get Maan to relax

so Maan thanked Geet

as expected Maan was adamant that Geet dance with him

she was initially hesitant

loved their conversation

not surprised that Maan trusts Geet more than anyone else

pleased seeing Maan and Geet getting closer

wonderful that he appreciated Geet

enjoyed their banter

nice that Maan took Geet out

wonderful that they are spending time together and getting to know each other

Geet did assure Maan that he is not alone

well Maan takes advice from Geet for business decisions

Geet taking care of Maan was understandable

Maan's thoughts well portrayed

one thing for certain is that they both understand each other

Maan's fears were anticipated

yet again she assured him

ahh they are similar tastes

they clearly have feelings for each other

Geet noticed a different side of Maan

wonder who will confess??

Thank you so much for your detailed comment.

Absolutely both are now pillar of strength for each other, of course with feelings involved as well.

Trust & understanding is the core of their relationship.

I love reading your long comments.

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Posted: 7 months ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

Chapter 12

of cos Geet was worried about Maan

glad that Maan confided in Geet

he indeed vulnerable

liked that she assured him

she was right that he needs to change

his question was anticipated

great that she admitted that he matters to her

will they ever act on their feelings?

as expected Maan was mesmerised seeing Geet

pleased that Maan was direct with Geet

at least they indirectly conceded that there is something between them

well they did not address what happened

loved Geet teasing Maan

enjoyed their banter

Maan is certainly a tough no nonsense boss

he demands perfection

however he does trust Geet

Thank God Maan saved Geet from falling

Maan's concern for Geet was justified

pleased that Maan was honest with Geet

good that she assured him

the tension between them is simmering

so Geet confronted Maan

well she told him not to fight it and let it happen

Gosh that kiss said everything

Maan's fears were understandable

nice that she assured him

agree with her that he just has to be himself

at least he opens up to her

their conversation was gripping

they are together and that what matters


update soon

Thanks a ton for your amazing detailed comments on the chapter.

Yes, their relationship is getting more intimate & stronger.

Hopefully they will be together for long.

Will be updating tomorrow.

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