MG FF - For One Night - 12/03/2025 - chapter 12 updated Pg 24 - Page 12

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Posted: 8 months ago

Originally posted by: muskanp


This scene is laden with palpable tension and heartbreak. Maan’s parting words, “You’re free to leave,” carry a haunting finality that lingers long after reading. His actions reflect a quiet turmoil, while Geet’s unspoken emotions make the moment even more gripping. A masterfully crafted moment of emotional depth and contrast! Their earlier togetherness was written beautifully, creating a sharp contrast to the emotional rift now.

Thank you Muskan ... for reading and commenting .. means a lot smiley9

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Posted: 8 months ago

Originally posted by: maangeet.gmmg

Wonderful update 💝 so it's done and dusted from maan s side but it's getting difficult for geet to pretend that all is over and all is ok 💖 waiting for next to see wat happens.

Thanks for your feedback ... stay tuned ... will update soon smiley2

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Posted: 8 months ago

Very nice prologue. Interesting start

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Posted: 8 months ago

Originally posted by: Annupreet

Very nice prologue. Interesting start

Thank you! I've uploaded the first three chapters and I'm looking forward to your feedback and reviewsmiley9

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Posted: 8 months ago

Nice prologue different concept

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Posted: 8 months ago

How he knew her?and the family is there any past relationship with his family or vice versa

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Posted: 8 months ago

I don't know what maan wants her submission or anything else he is hiding

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Posted: 8 months ago

Maan has feelings for geet and he don't want to accept it

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Posted: 8 months ago

Geet also known what is going on between them and how maan is reacting will mann even admit of his feelings towards geet

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Posted: 8 months ago

Originally posted by: Mouser1

Nice prologue different concept

Thankss...I'm glad you liked it smiley9

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