Coffee X Thunder ☕⚡* Maaneet Short Story * COMPLETED @ Page 1 - Page 3

He may have been a bit edgy but he was kind enough to get a child on his way to a better life. There are not many like him.

shot 2

He doesn't like rains the way she does. He does have a dry sense of humor though.

He loves his camping and outdoors, but no tea for him.

She paints on canvas and his words are his style of poetry. Is sse the muse or he is?

Dhiraj is not just an abuser, he is obsessed and evil. He could not tolerate her leaving so he is out to get revenge. He doesn't care who he hurts in the process.

shot 3

For someone who has only known her for a few hours, he is quite tuned in to who she is. Way more than that scoundrel Dhiraj.

shot 4

Beautiful. They met in the middle of thunder and rain. That will always feature in their story now.

Wow so many updates. Loving it. Congrts on another new story. ☺️ Thanks for pm

It's beautiful....looks like her Amma stood by her in her struggle with dhiraj the monster..

Restraining orders mostly work and it's better to be on guard too ..

For me i came back to the city where i could lose myself easily, has a great support system and decent cops some whom I knew

I am glad she pushed herself and was happy and. Ow she has a second chance at life

Hi Iptida

Congrats on the SS!

apologies for the delay

Shot 1

Amazing update.... wonderfully written

liked that Maan cannot help but be mesmerised by Geet

well he cares of nothing at that moment than Geet

loved that she was managed to capture his heart

Past well incorporated

feeling for Geet

disgusting Dhiraj

upset that he accused and verbally abused Geet

her reaction was justified

good that she spoke up

angry that he slapped Geet

Geet should not have ignored the red flags

glad that she saw Dhiraj's reality

pleased that she ended everything

Present

Geet was surprised seeing the MSK!

Past

that's how they meet for the first time

of cos she drooled on him

at least she managed to speak to him

admire that Maan wanted to get the little boy educated

Geet's thoughts well portrayed

as expected Maan was impatient

oh Maaneet argued

can understand Maan's comments

great that Maan was impressed with Geet

not surprised that the boy was admitted to the school

Shot 2

Majestic update... greatly written

liked Maan's concern for Geet

well she realised that she damaged his shirt

Maan was clearly angry

at least she apologised

oh it started to rain

its definitely not Maan's day

of cos he does not like the rain

great that he assured her

pleased that he helped Geet

so Maan hates tea

nice that he is taking time off to relax

enjoyed their convo

glad that they got to know about each other

both are artistic

loved that she felt safe with him

wow she painted Maan

she was clearly astounded

her reaction was antipcated

his curiosity regarding her painting was justified

as expected she did not want him to see it

aww he called her Ms Cloudy

oh no Dhiraj was there

not surprised that he accused Geet

wonderful that Geet warned him

Gosh Dhiraj had a gun and wanted to shoot Maan

Geet clearly went to save Maan

Shot 3

Fabulous update.... superbly written

Thank God Maan and Geet were safe

Geet's concern for Maan was reasonable

great that Maan tried to distract Dhiraj

admire how Maan handled the situation

so they ran from there

liked Maan's protectiveness for Geet

well Maan assured Geet

glad that they managed to hide

Maan's question was justified

at least Geet opened up to Maan

Maan had a valid point that she may have not experienced true love

loved his explanation of love

pleased that he assured, consoled and motivated her

she indeed feels bad for ruining his weekend

good that he reassured her

admire what Maan is doing for Ajay

he does seem to know about Geet

he was correct that she should get a restraining order

her questions were understandable

nice that he was direct with her