MG FF - Mujhse Shadhi Karoge? Updt pt 87 pg 97 Oct 10 - Page 84

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Posted: 1 years ago

Geet is not totally stupid. She got Vicky hidden in the perfect spot. Even Maan has to admit that.

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Posted: 1 years ago

If only he had shared his plans with Geet, she didn't have to resort to her plans.

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Posted: 1 years ago

He went to save her. She went to save him. Both think the other is hopeless. If they team up, they could do wonders.

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Posted: 1 years ago

Part 70


Fabulous Update


Finally Tara and her gang is caught

hopefully now both Maan and Geet can take Vicky home safely

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Posted: 1 years ago

Part – 71

At the hotel room where Geet and Maan are stuck together …

Geet: you went to the police? And they found Tara and Vicky?

Maan: off course Geet

Géet: then what am I doing here?

Maan: misdirecting me, aur kya?

Geet: what?

Maan: anyways we have saved Vicky and that Tara will go to jail, where she belongs

Geet: what? I did all the hardwork and you are taking the credits? That’s not fair Mr.Khurana, whatever it is, I only saved bro, now don’t boast to your sister Annie that you did it

Maan is like, ye ladhki phir se shuru ho gayi? Babaji, please save me….

Maan: first let’s leave from this place Geet

Now that Geet’s drama is over they are back to their own selves, Maan can’t keep fooling Geet and specially himself that it’s all Geet’s script and they are acting, Maan can’t keep denying that Geet’s presence in his life doesn’t affect him…..

The sooner he gets out of this drama, the better….

Maan goes towards the door…

Geet stands there, watches him and starts laughing….

Imagine the scene when Maan gets in the car at the dhaba and Geet is outside laughing looking at the missing tyres …

Maan turns and stares her for laughing like that unnecessarily…

Maan then tries to open the door...

Geet then starts laughing more…

Maan turns back and stares her angrily….

What’s there to laugh?

Maan tries all the tricks thinking that the door must be struck…b

Geet: it will not open

Maan: what? Do you have the keys?

Geet: no, Tara has

Maan: what?

Geet: she thought she was locking me up but she didn’t know that you were here, then she wouldn’t have locked the door

Geet is still jealous…. She thinks about what happened in the party….

Maan: what are you talking Geet?

Geet: call Tara, she will come and rescue you Maan

Maan: are you crazy or what?

Maan is still trying hard to open the door somehow…

Geet: I am not crazy, you are only, try kicking the door like you do at your taichi work outs

How does she know? Maan doesn’t know that Geet has been stalking him secretly….

Maan: Geeeeeet, give me your mobile, there is no battery in mine

Geet: very good, we got to spend sometime alone after a long time

Maan: what?

Geet: I lost my mobile

Maan looks for the room telephone, but this room is the extra room and so the phone must be in the other room only…

Geet then sits on the bed and switches on the TV…

The police should have rescued Vicky by now, Pari would have taken him home….

Lucky must have gone with Vicky too…

Now they might think that Maan and Geet had gone home only..

After reaching home, they will try calling Maan’s number….

But Maan’s mobile is dead…

Maan has no escape….

Maan gets agitated….

Maan; what do you think you are doing? Have you forget Vicky?

Geet: don’t worry Maan, Pari would have taken him home

Maan: I can’t believe you Geet, have you ever been serious about anything at all Geet?

Geet: see, I give things their due respect and am serious when it’s required, but you should never miss the small joys of life that come your way by being serious about everything

Maan: seriously I haven’t seen anyone like you Geet

Geet: that’s because there is one and only Geet Khurana

Geet waits for Maan’s reaction… but there is none from Maan….

Geet: Mr. Khurana, I am talking to you only

Geet: but there is a problem with my nature, people never take me seriously even when they know that I am particularly serious about something

Maan ignores her and turns his back towards her ..

Geet: Mr. Khurana, I am talking to you only and not your back

Maan turns back….

Geet looks into his eyes….

Geet: now that bro is going to the Handa house to be with his beloved wife and daughter, no one can stop me from going to my sasural, the KM, what do you think Maan?

Maan is like, why did I get into this mess? When will I get back to my life?

Never Mr. Khurana, now Geet is your life, you better accept that, for this girl has taken over your life ……

Now, imagine the situation at KC, the “HumTum Ek Kamre Mein Band Ho” night, with Geet and Maan in the opposite mindset, this Geet going uncontrollable while our MSK who is still in the denial mode trying to escape….

Maan: I am only thinking about getting out of here

Maan tries to look for help going to the window and seeing to find someone out there….

Geet puts some music channel…

“Kehna hai kya” is playing….

Geet turns the volume up….

Maan: Geet, can’t you see that I am trying to get some help

Maan turns and finds Geet looking lost in Maan completely…

Maan moves forward towards Geet….

Geet has her eyes perched on Maan….

“Inn hontho ne manga sargam sargam

tu aur tera hi pyar hai

Aankhe dhundhe hai jisko hardam hardam

tu aur tera hi pyar hai

Mehfil me bhi tanha hai dil aise dil aise

Tujhko kho naa de darta hai ye aise, ye aise

Aaj mili aisi khushi jhum uthi duniya ye meri

Tumko paya to payi zindagi”

Maan: Geeeet

Geet gets back to her senses….

Maan: Geet, We are not guests who have come to stay here

Geet: Maan, fortunately (for Geet) or unfortunately (for Maan) it seems like we have to stay here tonight

Maan: what?

Maan is not ready for anything like that….

Geet: come on Maan, it’s not like we are sharing a room for the first time

Maan thinks…. Then things were different Geet, but now everything has changed, you won’t understand Geet….

Maan stares Geet…..

Geet: we are going to be together again Maan, so, don’t think too much about what you want and enjoy what you have got

Geet winks … .

Maan: Geet, ye koi mazak karne ka waqt nahi hai, we have to go, it’s not yet over

Geet: Maan, just forget about why we are here for a moment and only about us, you have to be selfish at times Maan

Geet jumps over, catches hold of Maan’s hand and pulls him…

Maan who wasn’t expecting that, falls on the bed alongside Geet…

Their eyes meet… Maneet eye lock…

The song changes …

“Baahar se koi andar na aa sake

Andar se koi baahar na jaa sake

Socho kabhi aisa ho to kya ho

Socho kabhi aisa ho to kya ho

Ham tum ik kamre me band ho aur chabhi kho jaaye

Ham tum ik kamre me band ho aur chabhi kho jaaye

Tere naino ke bhul bhulaiyya me baabi kho jaaye

Ham tum ik kamre me band ho aur chabhi kho jaaye”

The song stops…

Maan has taken the remote from Geet and switched off the TV…

Geet comes out of her dream….

By then the housekeeping staff has come in search of his keys and he opens the door to save MSKs’s honor for the time being….

Maan: what’s all this? Who locked us in? What were you people doing?

That poor guy is looking at them with the same question, what were these people doing?

But he is just a staff and they are their valuable guests ….

Housekeeper: sorry sir, some strangers entered our premises in disguise and were trying to harm some of our guests, but unusually the police arrived at the right time and saved us, maybe it’s them, but don’t worry sir, the situation is under control now, enjoy your stay with us sir, we are offering a day’s free stay for the guests as a compensation for their inconvenience

The man gives the suit keys….

Geet takes them happily…

Maan: Geet, what are you doing?

Geet: I have accomplished the mission successfully, now I deserve some rewards, haina?

Maan: don’t you think you should be with Vicky right now

Geet: bro doesn’t even recognizes me in this condition, and his Mumbai friends failed their duty, let them take care of him for one day

Geet is referring to Lucky and Pari…

Maan: how does your brain always come up with these crazy thoughts?

Geet: Maan, we won’t get any privacy at Pari’s place

Maan: why do we need privacy Geet?

Geet: Maan, we are still Mr and Mrs Khurana and they don’t know about our marriage

Maan: not anymore Geet, Vicky is back and so the act is over

Geet: no so quickly beloved hubby, you know that bro is still under the influence of substance, he has to recover and come back to normalcy, don’t you think Riya deserves to meet her father in this condition for the first time?

Maan can’t agree more, yes, little princess Riya needs to get back her rightful father…. This Vicky is not even in a condition to acknowledge the existence of his daughter, he is still Tara’s slave, they have to bring back Annie’s Vicky….

Maan has to tolerate Geet’s stupidity until then….

Maan looks at Geet confused… this drama is far from over, now Geet has no plans of ending it at all, the ball is back in Geet’s court…

Maan: Geet, now what do you think you are going to do?

Geet: see, we need to discuss a lot Maan

Maan is like, what’s there to discuss? Geet will never listen to Maan’s inputs, she will only do what her crooked mind says…

Maan: discuss what? It’s all over now, we can go back to our lives peaceful

Maan wants to reclaim his bachelor life which he has lost to Geet, but what he doesn’t know is that he lost his bachelorhood the moment Geet Handa entered his life as Mrs. Khurana, though it’s not real…

Geet: what is there to discuss? How could you be so irresponsible hubby ji? We need to talk about your sister’s life, my brother’s life, our lives, that’s why we need to stay here

Maan: what? What’s there to talk about about us? There is nothing, nothing, do you understand Geet, there is only you and me, no us

Geet: OK OK, it is about you and me only, I know what I want and sadly you don’t know what you want, that’s why I want you to trust me to take care of that too Maan

Maan: I know to take care of myself, you just worry about Vicky

Geet: that I know, but you can’t stop me from worrying about myself

Geet looks into his eyes….

Maan’s efforts to avoid eye contacts with Geet fail miserably once Geet looks into his eyes…

Maan has fallen into the abyss of her intoxicating eyes and has lost himself in them…

His endless mission to rescue himself has been futile…

Maan is surprised not to see the usual playful carelessness in her eyes, they mean serious business this time….

And Maan knows what’s that they want, but will Maan be able to fulfill their wishes?

Maan has been asking this question to himself, for Maan himself doesn’t have a clear answer for that, once he finds the answers, then there will be no stopping the MSK, haina?

MSK always has starting problems when it comes to romance, but once he is committed then no one is a match for the romantic MSK, not even Geet….

As of now Geet has better understanding of Maan’s feelings than himself, so, like always it’s up to Geet Handa, the director to take charge…..

Geet is only waiting for this opportunity, she will not leave MSK that easily….

So, Maan, get ready to face Maan ki Deewani, the real Geet Handa…

Maan knows that it’s nonuse arguing with Geet, the more he argues the more she will succeed, so Maan is resting his case tonight…

Maan is very well aware of the fact that it’s going to be one hell of a sleepless night for him…

But he could at least save himself from the worst by pretending to be asleep….

Maan: ok Geet, let’s assume that you are right, but I know what I need now, a good night’s sleep after all this exhausting drama, thanks to you Geet Handa, do whatever you want, good night

Maan lies down in one side of the bed ..

Maan knows that if he goes to the other room then Geet will follow him, so, to keep the drama out for his own sanity, Maan lies down and closes his eyes….

Geet: good night Maan, letssee how long does your nautanki lasts

Maan pretends to have not heard her….

Geet: don’t worry Geet, babaji is always with the truth, he knows the truth very well, and all this drama is nothing for HIM for he is the ultimate Dramebaaz, babaji you know I am right this time, so you must be with me only, samjhe app?

Maan is already worried about his plight, this girl doesn’t even spare babaji, she threatens evryone…

Maan has no one, not even babaji to defend Maan, he is on his own this time….

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Posted: 1 years ago

Part 71


Amazing Update


Geet wants that both Lucky and Pari take care of Vicky

while Maan and Geet spend time together

but Maan tries his very best to show Geet he is not interested in her

and her talks

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Posted: 1 years ago

71

great update

geet knows maan more than himself

maan trying to be away from geet

maan wants to end all this drama soon n get back his bachelorhood n not ready to read n accept geet's emotion regarding their relation

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Posted: 1 years ago

Part 71

so now Maaneet are stuck in a room!

of cos Maan is peeved

well Geet just is happy

will they be able to get help?


update soon

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Posted: 1 years ago

Locked in a room and no key in sight. Perfect setting if these two had some sense.

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Posted: 1 years ago

Poor girl. She is turning on the seduction and the robot shows no sign of melting.

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