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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 100

Geet worries me with her irrational thinking at times

I hope she does not do anything impulsive to screw up the case again

Maan is so sweet how he magnofies geet

He even gave into the pakodas😆

Thank you

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Posted: 3 years ago

Congratulations for new milestone with story

Beautiful part

Love the way maan pampers Geet

Cont soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Wow... Mansi came for geet's godhbharai.. She was so happy with geet...


Hope that this time they get the custody of mansi

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Congratulations for ur 100 updates...

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Posted: 3 years ago

awesome update...............


loved it..............

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abb mujhe bhi positive answer chahiye..........babaji bahut hogaya..........


sad update..........

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Hope this time Maan get Mansi's custody

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part – 101

That morning….

Geet is in the garden for her morning walk with Maan…

Geet: Maan, sab teek ho jayega na?

Maan: Haan, abhi tum uske barein mat socho, bathao, baby ka naam decide hua ki nahi?

Geet: kaise hoga? Mansi aake hi baby ka naam decide karegi

Maan kuch bhi karein, par Geet Mansi ke barein mein hi sochthe rehti hai…

Maan: mujhe nahi poochoge ki mujhe kaunsa naam pasand hai?

Geet: aap ne koi naam socha hai kya?

Maan starts thinking….

Geet: nahi na? Aap rehne do, hum haina

Maan: mujhe Maneet pasand hai

Geet: ye kaisa naam hai Maan?

Maan: Maan aur Geet, Maneet

Geet: nahi, Mansi aur Manav, mera beta Manav hoga

Maan: that’s really good Geet

Geet: haina? Mansi ko bhi pasand aayega

Suddenly Mansi comes running towards Geet…

Mansi: mujhe pasand hai, Manav baby

Maan: dekho Geet, Mansi ko bhi pasand hai

Geet couldn’t believe it…

Geet hugs Mansi and kisses her…

Maan lifts Mansi so that Geet need not bend too much to reach her….

Geet: Mansi beta, aap aagaye?

Mansi: Haan

Geet: kaise?

Mansi: baby ne bhulaya toh mein aagayi

Geet: achcha? Baby aap ko bahut miss karta tha, aur mumma ne bhi app ko bahut miss kiya

Mansi: I missed you too mumma

Geet: I love you darling

Geet takes Mansi from Maan…

Mansi kisses Geet…. : Love you mumma

Maan: Geet, Geeeeet

Geet: Mansi, Mansi kahan hai Maan

Maan: Mansi?

Geet: Haan, Hummari Mansi aagayi, kahan hai woh?

Geet was dreaming….

Geet: Mansiiiii Mansiiiii

Maan: Geet, utjao, Geeeet

Geet wakes up and looks at Maan…

Geet: Maan, aap ne Mansi ko nahi dekha?

Maan: Geet, Mansi aajaayegi, tum pani peelo

Maan gives her some water…

Geet drinks it and keeps staring the door…

Maan doesn’t know how to console her ..

Maan holds her in his arms…

Maan: Geet, mujhe dekho

Geet looks at him…

Maan: meine kaha na? Mein Mansi ko lekhe aaoonga, mein tumme kaise samjaoon Geet

Geet: Maansi aayegi na?

Maan: Haan, kyun nahi aayegi?

Geet: mujhe bahut dar lagta hai Maan

Maan: chalo, hum neeche jaathe hai, tabhi tumme achcha lagega

Maan takes Geet down…

Dadi is there…

Dadi: good morning Geet

Geet: morning Dadima

Dadi: kya hua bete? Aap teek toh haina? Maan, what’s wrong? Sab teek haina beta

Dadi is worried looking at Geet…

Maan: kuch nahi hai Dadi, koi sapna dekh ke pareshan ho gayi

Dadi: achcha? Koi bhura sapna hai kya bete?

Geet: nahi Dadima, sapne mein meine dekha ki hummari Mansi wapas aagayi

Dadi: ye toh bahut achchi baat hai bete, aap ne suna hoga ki subhe ka sapna pura hotha hai

Geet gets excited hearing that…

Geet: aaisa hotha hai kya Dadima?

Dadi: Haan bete, aap dekho, Mansi jaldh hi aap ke paas aayegi

Geet: thanks Dadima, aap ka aashirwad hai toh Mansi zaroor aayegi

Maan gets the tea for dadi…

Dadi: thanks bete

Maan: Geet, ye lo

Geet: chai?

Maan: dhoodh

Geet: subhe subhe dhoodh peene ke liye mein kya bachi hoon? dekha Dadima, ye mujhe chai bhi nahi dethe

Dadima: Maan, let her have tea

Maan: nahi dadi, aap nahi jaanthe, ye abhi bhi bachi hi hai, isse dhoondh hi peena chahiye

Dadi gives her tea to Geet…

Geet: thank you Dadima

Maan: dadi, ye aap ne kya kiya?

Dadi: dhoodh kaun peetha hai bete?

Maan: aap

Maan gives the milk to Dadi…

Dadi: what?

Maan: Haan, aap ne apne tea ko kurban Kiya haina?

Dadi had to drink milk for Geet…. But she is happy…

Geet: Dadima, aap itne saal inko kaise sambalthe the?

Dadi: aaise hi

Dadi sips the milk making a face…

Geet: very bad Dadima, aap ne inko bahut bigaad ke rakha hai, mera beta aake inko teek karega

Maan: Geet, tum bhool gayi ho ki woh MSK ka beta hai

Geet: teek hai, kal Mansi aake aap ko teek karegi

Dadi: Mansi aagayi

Geet thinks that Dadi is kidding….

Geet: dadi, aap bhi?

Maan gets up and moves forward…

Geet turns and she too sees Mansi standing there ….

Geet: Mansi? Ye mera sapna toh nahi

Maan: nahi Geet

Geet: Mansi, aao beta

Rajinder lets Mansi go…

Mansi goes towards Geet…

Geet lifts her…

Geet: aap sach mein aagaye?

Mansi: baby kaisa hai?

Geet: aap hi poocho

They start talking to the baby…

Yes, Rajinder brought Mansi again, but this time she won’t be taking her back along with her when she returns….

Let’s see what happened at Simla…

Rajinder went back to Shimla with Mansi...

She was reminded of Geet’s plight constantly and Geet’s pleas kept haunting her…

She couldn’t sleep for two days…

She felt guilty that they are doing a big mistake by separating Mansi from Geet…

She started to believe strongly that Mansi belonged to Geet and Maan….

Rajinder talked about that with her daughter Tara…

Rajinder: Tara, ye sahi nahi hai

Tara: kya maa?

Rajinder: Mansi ko Maan ji ke paas hona chahiye

Tara: kyun? Mansi hummari nahi hai kya?

Rajinder: ab toh humme usko uske papa ke paas wapas bhejna hai

Tara: kyun?

Rajinder: kyunki Mansi unki beti hai

Tara: maa, kya tum bhool gayi hai ki Mansi hummari Sam ki beti hai

Rajinder: lekhin Sam yahan nahi hai, issiliye Mansi pe pura haq ab Maan ji ko hi hai

Tara: Maan ko ab Mansi ki zaroorat nahi hai, usko ab uss Geet ki zaroorat padgayi hai , aur unka bacha bhi aayega

Rajinder: toh Kya? Mansi bhi unka hi beti hai

Tara: lekhin maa, Sam ke bina Mansi uss ghar mein akhele ho jayegi, aur hummari Mansi uss Geet ke sahare mein rahegi uss ghar pe

Rajinder: ye tum kaise baat kar rahi ho?

Tara: tumme toh patha haina? Hum dadajk ke ghar mein bade papa ke sahare mein unke samne gidgidaake bheek maangthe the

Rajinder: woh meri kamzori thi, mein tummare jaise pade liki nahi thi, aur mein bahut nasamajh aur gawar thi, issiliye mujhe kissi na kissi ki sahare ki zaroorat thi, warna hum log ko unke sahare mein rehna nahi padtha

Tara: issiliye mein kehthi hoon ki abhi Mansi ko uss Geet ki sahare ke koi zaroori nahi hai, hum haina uske liye

Rajinder: Tum galat ho, Mansi ko kissi ka bhi sahare ki zaroorat nahi hai, kyun uske papa abhi Zinda hai aur umke saath uski maa bhi hai

Tara is shocked to hear that…

Tara: maaaaa, tum uss ladhki ko hummari Mansi ki maa kaise keh sakti?

Rajinder: kyun ki mein jab bhi Geet ko dekhti hoon toh mujhe Mansi ki maa hi nazar aathi hai

Tara: wah maa, ek hi din mein tum iss ladhki ko samajh gayi?

Rajinder: Haan, lekhin itne saal saath rehke bhi mein tumme samajh nahi paayi Tara, tum kab se aaise ho gayi ki tum ek masoom jeevan ki jaan lene ke liye tayaar ho gayi thi

Tara: kya?

Rajinder tells her about what happened….

Tara can’t believe it, she is still not convinced…

Rajinder: mein ne kya galti ki ke meri beti aaise pattar dilwali ho gayi? Meri galti ke liye tum uss masoom Geet aur apni Mansi ko saza mat dogi, samjhi tum?

Tara: tum kehna kya chahti ho maa?

Rajinder: ye kehne ka nahi karne ka samay hai, tumse baat karke kuch nahi hoga

Rajinder took Mansi from there and came to Delhi….

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Posted: 3 years ago

Nice update. Tara had a bad childhood where she had to depend on others so when Sam expired she felt Maansi has also to go thru the same. Finally Maansi is back with Geet and Maan.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 101


Surprisingly Awesome Update


Finally Rajinder stood up to her daughter Tara,

its true that Tara had a bitter experience but she cannot

just think that Geet will ill treat Mansi

but glad that Rajinder saw and now know Geet better and her love for Mansi

Mansi finally home with her father and Geet

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Geet only thinking about Mansi Maan try to district her but she missing Mansi

Mansi nani decide Mansi should b with her own family she didn't listen Tara

Tara only thinking whatever she faced in her childhood but Mansi father is their for her

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