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Posted: 3 years ago

Part – 95

Maan is worried looking at Geet…

Poor Maan, he has no time to worry about the delay in getting his daughter back and on top of it he has to take care of his pregnant wife…

Right now Maan should first console Geet and for that he has to be strong enough to hide his own worries…

Maan puts up a brave face for Geet as he approaches her..

Maan: Geet, ye kya ho raha hai?

Geet: kuch nahi, mujhe neendh aarahi thi

Maan: tum itne jaldhi sonewali nahi ho Geet, mujhe sab patha hai

Maan goes and sits beside her..

Geet too get up and sits near him…

Maan holds her and makes her rest on his shoulder…

Maan: Geet, aaise karthi toh baby ko takleef hoga na? Tum bhooke rek sakti ho par baby kaise bhooke rahega?

Geet: I’m sorry Maan

Geet sobs…

Maan immediately wipes off her tears…

Maan: nahi Geet, tum kamzor nahi ho sakti, tum hi meri taakat ho

Geet: nahi, mein aapki kamzori ban gayi hoon

Maan closes her mouth with his fingers…

Maan: chup bilkul chup, ek sabt aur nahi

Maan turns her towards him…

Maan: Geet, agar tum nahi hothi toh patha nahi mein kya kartha? Tummare bina mein adhura hoon Geet, tum saath ho toh mein koi bhi mushkil ko asaani se par kartha, tum fikar mat karo Geet, Mansi hummari beti hai, usko koi bhi humse dhoor nahi kar sakta, chahe uss Tara jitna bhi koshsih jo karein, par mujhe yakheen hai ki jeet toh hummari hi hogi Geet, kyunki sachayi hummare saath hai

Geet: hum jeet jayenge na?

Maan: tumme apne Maan pe viswas nahi hai kya?

Geet: hai, bahut hai

Maan: phir aaise kaise udhaas ho sakti, chalo, pehle jaake kuch khathe hai

Geet gets up to leave…

Maan: hare, àaise kaise? Fresh hoke kuch achche kapde pehenke aao

Geet: par Maan, iss waqt hum kahan jaathe

Maan: tum aao toh sahi

Maan takes her out for a long drive….

Geet needed that outing badly…

Geet: Maan, aap bahut achche ho

Maan: tumne abhi patha chala?

Geet: aaise hi aap ko dekhti hoon toh mujhe aapse aur zyada pyar ho jaatha hai

Maan: achcha?

Geet: aaise kya jaadu karte ho aap?

Geet keeps looking at him with love…

Maan: tum aaise hi mujhe dekhogi toh mujhe patha nahi mein kya karta, jadoo toh teri iss shatir aankhon mein hai Geet jo mujhe apne isharon se mazboor karte hai

Geet: Maan

Maan: haan Geet

Maan becomes romantic…

Geet: meine subhe se kuch nahi khaya

Maan: haan, hum pohunch gaye

Geet: kahan?

Maan: ye koi nayi dabha hai, meine aathe waqt issko dekha tha aur mujhe tummari hi yaad aaya

Geet: Maan, ye toh bahut badhiya hai

Geet jumps off from her seat before Maan could come…

Maan: hare, sambalke Geet

Maan catches hold of her…

He takes her in holding her hand…

A young lad comes running…

Y.lad: aayiye aayiye didi, aap hi hummare pehle pregnant customer ho, humme bahut kushi hai ki aap yahan aaye

Maan: teek hai teek hai, pehle humme ek achcha table dikhao

Y.lad: yahan aao sirji, ye didi ke liye comfortable hoga

Geet likes that boy ..

Geet: chotu, tummara naam kya hai?

Y.lad: Monty

Geet: Monty, tum bahut pyare ho

Maan: Geet, ye bahut achcha marketing kar raha hai

Geet: jo bhi ho, achcha bacha hai

Monty: didi, app ko lassi lekhe aatha hoon

He runs off and comes back with lassi…

Geet was waiting for it.

Geet: thanks Monty

Monty: sirji, aap kya kaoge? Chilly chicken, chicken harimirch, spicy chicken tikka?

Maan: ye didi hai aur mein sirji hoon? Kyun?

Monty: aap ko dekhke thoda dar lagta hai sirji, par didi toh bahut achchi hai

Geet bursts out laughing…

Maan stares Monty… bechara aur dar jaatha…

Geet: Monty, tum lacha paratha aur chicken makhni lekhe aao pehle

Monty leaves in a hurry before Maan could scold him…

Geet: Maan, aap iss bechare ko kamakaam kyun darathe ho, kitna bola bala hai

Maan: haan, haan, didi bhulaya na?

Maan is trying hard to get Geet out of her guilt and has succeeded to a great extent…

Apne liye toh nahi par Geet ke liye toh Maan ko Mansi ko jaldh hi wapas lana padega .

For the next two weeks Maan faces a setback in the case owing to that incident..

But Maan keeps it a secret to himself…

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Posted: 3 years ago

thanks you for the pm


Part 95

Emotional update..... nicely written

Feeling for Maan as he has to be strong for Geet

he is worried about Geet and their baby

he was correct

of cos Geet is upset and apologises to Maan

she is indeed his strength

as expected Maan assures her that they will get Mansi back

liked that Geet trusts Maan

great that Maan took Geet out

loved their convo

ha ha Mointy is amusing

at least Geet was distracted

dismayed that Maan suffered a set back in the case

not surprised that he did not tell Geet

hope Maan manages to get Mansi back


update soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Maan was able to pacify Geet but this is not over yet. They will have to take a tough stand with Tara.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Cute Monty and his didi and sirji. Maan scared the poor kid off.

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Posted: 3 years ago

95

very emotional update

maan is trying his best to settle everything

he need to look after geet n mansi's case

hope he finds some way to make everythig ormal

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Posted: 3 years ago

Maan try to cheer up geet mood so he keep strong face in front of Geet and took her to dhaba geet liked dhaba

Maan trying best to take his daughter custody be

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Posted: 3 years ago

Part 95


Fabulous and Heart Felt


Geet feeling guilty that Maansi cannot come to her and Maan

but now Maan has to work very hard to get his daughter

away from Tara

the drive with Maan and Geet as usual its awesome

Maan takes Geet to the Dhaba and wow even the young guy there

likes her and calls her Didi

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Posted: 3 years ago

oh no abb mansi kahan gayi.........yahin toh the...........plz maan geet per maat chillana...............


scary update.............

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Posted: 3 years ago

wow........mrs. msk bhi kam nehi hai............


lovely update...............


loved it...............

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Posted: 3 years ago

aur kitna sahna padega maan aur geet ko.........tara kyun aisi hai..........jaldi se maansi wapas ajaye...................


awesome update.................


loved it................

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