MG FF: The Innocent - Chapters 20-27 on p. 41 - Complete - Page 36

Chapter 23

Magnificent update..... splendidly written

well Geet is stunned seeing them

seems like Maan had not slept in three days

can understand Geet's emotions

of cos Maan its simple for Maan to find her

at least she assures Neil that she will never forget him

Neil is happy seeing her

adore his gift

great that Maan was firm that he speak to her

as expected he confronts for leaving

Maan's outburst was reasonable

not surprised that he was worried about her

well she assumes he is lying

liked that she revealed why she feels that

great that Maan cleared her doubts

Maan's question is justified

she is angry hearing this

loved that told her that his feelings are true

Chapter 24

Pleasant update.... remarkably written

nice that Geet was upfront with Maan

great that Maan set her straight

well there is much that Geet is unaware of

glad that Maan revealed why his attitude towards her changed

so he was falling for at first sight

no wonder he did not straight away tell her about her brother

what he feared came true

Geet feels he is lying

liked that Maan was honest about his feelings

Geet is confused

so he gave Geet the file to read and she will get all her answers

loved that Maan told her to come home and he will be waiting for her

not surprised that Geet questioned Maan about the background check

she reveals what happened

she is surprised with his response

as expected Maan knew she was not at fault

of cos Maan dealt with the man and the headmistress

Geet is amazed....

Maan indeed knows she was innocent

Chapter 25

outstanding update.... nicely written

Geet thinks of all what happened

now she wonders why Rocky never came to look for her

finally she read the file and gets all the answers

Rocky had a tumultuous life and run-ins with the law

Gosh he was taking drugs and three failed suicide attempts

Geet is shocked.........

oh no Rocky shot himself that night in the alley

Geet's reaction is understandable

liked that she knows that Rocky did shoot himself considering his past antics

she knows Maan is telling the truth

Chapter 26

Dynamic update..... fabulously written

great that Geet went to meet Maan

she is restless to apologise to Maan and tell him that she wants to give them a chance

she is shocked seeing an ambulance outside the house

of cos she is worried about Maan

Pinky reveals that Maan is hurt

glad that Maan is at the hospital and receiving treatment

Geet is tensed and refuses to eat

Thank God Maan will be fine

Geet is relieved

at least Geet was allowed to meet him

liked that she assures him that she is there for him

Maan is ecstatic that his Angel is there

so she apologises

Maan reassures her that whatever happened was the truth

he did not want to shatter her illusions about Rocky

loved that he is protective of her

adore when she called Maan as sweetheart

Chapter 27

Sensational update.... Beautifully written

glad that Maan got his investigator to find out who attacked him

so it was Sameera and Monty who hired that man to attack Maan

liked how smartly Maan handled everything

he compromised - he would not press charges and Monty would take over the gang

well in return Asha got full custody of Neil

happy for Neil and Asha

of cos Adi stepped down and is now with Maan

great that Geet moved back to Maan's place

at least Geet has decided to move on..... and hopes Rocky would be happy for her

the dream was an indication to her to give love a chance

pleased that Geet is also doing well in her job and was promoted

she is doing some amazing work

nice that Maan bought Asha and Neil and house

not surprised that Geet and Asha are good friends and Geet still babysits Neil

liked that Maan is now fully concentrating on running Khurana Shipping with Adi as the VP.

as expected business is going well

loved that Maan took Geet to a tropical island

wow he proposed and she said yes

beautiful moments

perfect end

please post an epilogue

Thanks for sharing this spectacular story with us.

sad that it has ended....

enjoyed reading it

hope you do post another story soon

take care and be safe 😃

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Thank you for the lovely story.

Enjoyed all the remaining parts.

Alls well that ends well. Happiness to all the characters.

They got what they wanted. More glad for Neil cutie.

Maan and Geet happily ever after 😍

Thank you once again.

wow wow

all chapters at the same time to finish the story...and what a finish really!!!

starting off with pinky telling about her brother, maan not denying it but geet not letting him clarifying

....then geet going away not wanting to be in the same house as her brother's killer (like she thinks from mind but heart saying somethign different)

-- missing neil and maan but she had to do this....

--finding a job thank god for that...she has food and shelter but no relief or happiness...

... of course maan finding her aloign with neil....yes way to go hero

....geet not being able to listen to him or deny him

.... reading the notes and realising her mistake...

...coming back tohim like he said but what a shock to find maan hurt..

...so so glad maan is out of this business in many ways....his brother can deal with this underworld stuff...maan was never into it anyway...

... he has his shipping business.

... now with geet alongside him who needs that right....he can be on a straight path and let geet help other women who are helpless..

So glad they are back together....good for them both...but she needed this temporary separation to make things all fall in place for both of them

15-27

sorry for late commenting as i was hospitalized for 25 days

lovely ed of amazing & painful story