Star Commentor Award (Part 12)
Winner: Taahir004, UmaDevi97
Runner-ups: Almelu, Neenad
Special mention: ferdouz
EarlyBird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): coderlady, Taahir004, UmaDevi97
Congratulations to the winner and the runner-up’s 👏









































Note:
Let’s continue the guessing game &song game to double the fun
Guessing game: After reading the parts, please add a guess that what do you think will happen in the next part. Let’s see, who gets it most right
Song game: So, for each part suggest a song you think goes with it. I base each part or story with a song on my mind. Let’s see part padhke sabke mann mein kaunsa song aata hai
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Part 13
Geet drops Maan
G- This was bad sense of judgement from my side. Don’t cross my path ever and I will do the same. Even if we meet by chance, we pretend not to know each other
Maan was already guilty about what happened so he agrees
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Weeks pass by and usual life takes over
Abhi aise hi Friday night ko coincidentally Geet ke friends free the toh they thought ki long time let's meet up
Geet goes out with her friends to hand out
Geet and friends Truth, Dare or Drink khel rahe the...kha pii rahe the… normal masti in a pub/restaurant
Toh Geet ka turn aaya...
Geet ka plan tha ki drive par jaungi to no drink
Truth choose karegi toh kamine dost Maan ka number maang kar usko harass karege.. prank call karenge aur single log uspar line marenge
Toh Geet chooses Dare
Friends ne Geet ke phone par dating app (jo mostly hook upke liye use hoti hai) install karke kaha ki talk to a guy and agree to meet him here
Phir plan tha ki wo log Geet aur uss anjaan admi ki photo fb par daal kar tag karenge then maybe rich guy Maan will show up and publicly kiss Geet again ki "mine!"
Kaafi dost log drunk the toh such vivid imagination...
Geet said ok and starts swiping left right... Koi theek thak dikh jaaye...
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Wahan paas mei 5-star hotel mein Maan ki meeting khatam hui thi and he was free now.
Usko laga ki colleagues ke saath dinner hoga but they ditched him ki
‘I have plans to hook up with his girl on the app I am leaving...’
Toh Maan ko yaad ki Geet se milne ke baad... He really hasn't gotten lucky...
He looks around ki jagah bhi convenient hai
He messages his on/ off girl
Wo mana kar deti hai ki main busy hoon
Maan soch raha hai ki kya karu... Ghar jau... yahan dinner karu…
He feels like having some company... but whom to call...
Geet flashed for a mili second in his brain...
But after wedding disaster he thought ki thoda durr rehna chahiye...
Toh he thought ki he will also try this app, uska colleague jo bola
He randomly selects the first pick from his gallery as profile pic
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Geet ne dekha profile pop up with a car similar to hers facing a gorgeous sunrise
She swipes to make contact
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Maan sees invite
Checks out the profile picture to see a table and girl’s face covered with huge beer mug... her hair casually strewn around her
He likes the pic and accepts
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Geet ke sab dost are like:
‘Ohhhh!!!!! So, fast you picked huh!’
‘No loyalty to Maan tch tch’
She usually ignores all their jabs around Maan coz even after telling them zillionth time that there is nothing between her and Maan, her friends don’t believe her
Geet casually chats with the user-MSK123 for a while
While continuing to play and talk to her friends
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Maan also goes off to hotel ka bar area and sits with some snacks and drinks and causally chats with the user-girl123
It's not something he usually does... but he has nothing else... and he just feels bored and unsettled, toh chatting is good; also, the girl was way more interesting that he expected, he was impressed with the app
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Geet ko laga ki ‘hi’ ‘bye’ karke ho jayega
But she didn't realize when she started paying more attention to the chat than to her friends around her
Friends also noticed and so disturbed her more
Geet saw ki uska turn phir se aane wala hai truth dare mein
She thought ki ab nikal lena chahiye
Tabhi User-MSK123 ka bhi message aaya
User-MSK123: Wanna meet for a drink? (As app was location based so they knew ki other person is nearby)
She replied
User-girl123: No, I am driving
User-MSK123: Coffee?
Geet typed: “some other time...” Then erased the message
Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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