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Posted: 4 years ago

So loved geets attitude. She had to leave himTo let himknow he can’t do something and not pay for it

GoodFor her

But then again she realized it wasa half baked plan to begin with. Also she felt safe with him

But then what did she mean by ignore each other if they see again

Maan agrees because he is guilty

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Posted: 4 years ago

Will he explain to her wt happend although she had an idea about the matter,They both r feeling something new towards each other, looking forward to further...

Really loving this story,ur way of saying a story is way different from others,keep up the good work...❤😍

Happy new year ❣️

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Posted: 4 years ago

Happy new year .... Lovely update waiting for maaneet scene

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Posted: 4 years ago

They end up like stranger's

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice update..

Waiting for next update..

Thank you for pm..

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 11 and 12

I am in awe with Geet. Such a strong willed person. No situation can bog her down. Hail to girl power 😁

She walks out with her head held high.

Maan guilty for his act. He needs to clarify his stand.

Now both back to square one.

Waiting to see how their relationship proceeds from here.

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Posted: 4 years ago

12

nice update

geet ask maan not to cross her road for which maan agree as he is in guilt

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Posted: 4 years ago

Happy New Year to you and your family!

Congrats to all the winners on Part 11


Part 12

Spectacular update.... amazingly written....

Geet's anger is justified

at least she realized that Maan felt guilty

well she went back as she saw that something was blocking the road

of cos she wanted to sneak into the room but Maan was outside

I do not think she intended to go and get back....

great she feels safe with Maan

glad she thinks life is exciting after meeting Maan

not surprised that he is intrigued by her

oh she does not want to meet Maan ever again

as expected he agrees as feels guily

I guess destiny has other plans and they will defn meet again


update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Star Commentor Award (Part 12)

Winner: Taahir004, UmaDevi97

Runner-ups: Almelu, Neenad

Special mention: ferdouz

EarlyBird Award (For readers having first 3 comments): coderlady, Taahir004, UmaDevi97

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Note:

Let’s continue the guessing game &song game to double the fun

Guessing game: After reading the parts, please add a guess that what do you think will happen in the next part. Let’s see, who gets it most right

Song game: So, for each part suggest a song you think goes with it. I base each part or story with a song on my mind. Let’s see part padhke sabke mann mein kaunsa song aata hai

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Part 13

Geet drops Maan

G- This was bad sense of judgement from my side. Don’t cross my path ever and I will do the same. Even if we meet by chance, we pretend not to know each other

Maan was already guilty about what happened so he agrees

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Weeks pass by and usual life takes over

Abhi aise hi Friday night ko coincidentally Geet ke friends free the toh they thought ki long time let's meet up

Geet goes out with her friends to hand out

Geet and friends Truth, Dare or Drink khel rahe the...kha pii rahe the… normal masti in a pub/restaurant

Toh Geet ka turn aaya...

Geet ka plan tha ki drive par jaungi to no drink

Truth choose karegi toh kamine dost Maan ka number maang kar usko harass karege.. prank call karenge aur single log uspar line marenge

Toh Geet chooses Dare

Friends ne Geet ke phone par dating app (jo mostly hook upke liye use hoti hai) install karke kaha ki talk to a guy and agree to meet him here

Phir plan tha ki wo log Geet aur uss anjaan admi ki photo fb par daal kar tag karenge then maybe rich guy Maan will show up and publicly kiss Geet again ki "mine!"

Kaafi dost log drunk the toh such vivid imagination...

Geet said ok and starts swiping left right... Koi theek thak dikh jaaye...

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Wahan paas mei 5-star hotel mein Maan ki meeting khatam hui thi and he was free now.

Usko laga ki colleagues ke saath dinner hoga but they ditched him ki

I have plans to hook up with his girl on the app I am leaving...

Toh Maan ko yaad ki Geet se milne ke baad... He really hasn't gotten lucky...

He looks around ki jagah bhi convenient hai

He messages his on/ off girl

Wo mana kar deti hai ki main busy hoon

Maan soch raha hai ki kya karu... Ghar jau... yahan dinner karu…

He feels like having some company... but whom to call...

Geet flashed for a mili second in his brain...

But after wedding disaster he thought ki thoda durr rehna chahiye...

Toh he thought ki he will also try this app, uska colleague jo bola

He randomly selects the first pick from his gallery as profile pic

+++++++++

Geet ne dekha profile pop up with a car similar to hers facing a gorgeous sunrise

She swipes to make contact

+++++++++

Maan sees invite

Checks out the profile picture to see a table and girl’s face covered with huge beer mug... her hair casually strewn around her

He likes the pic and accepts

+++++++++++

Geet ke sab dost are like:

‘Ohhhh!!!!! So, fast you picked huh!’


‘No loyalty to Maan tch tch’

She usually ignores all their jabs around Maan coz even after telling them zillionth time that there is nothing between her and Maan, her friends don’t believe her

Geet casually chats with the user-MSK123 for a while

While continuing to play and talk to her friends

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Maan also goes off to hotel ka bar area and sits with some snacks and drinks and causally chats with the user-girl123

It's not something he usually does... but he has nothing else... and he just feels bored and unsettled, toh chatting is good; also, the girl was way more interesting that he expected, he was impressed with the app

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Geet ko laga ki ‘hi’ ‘bye’ karke ho jayega

But she didn't realize when she started paying more attention to the chat than to her friends around her

Friends also noticed and so disturbed her more

Geet saw ki uska turn phir se aane wala hai truth dare mein

She thought ki ab nikal lena chahiye

Tabhi User-MSK123 ka bhi message aaya

User-MSK123: Wanna meet for a drink? (As app was location based so they knew ki other person is nearby)

She replied

User-girl123: No, I am driving

User-MSK123: Coffee?

Geet typed: “some other time...” Then erased the message

Edited by NilzStorywriter - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Love the updates! Thanks for the PM

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