CAPTIVE 2 UPDATED LAST PART ON PG 55 / 11-7-2021 - Page 43

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Posted: 4 years ago

Originally posted by: cutical

Removed pms di waiting for pw di thanks😊

Pw send sweety....

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Posted: 4 years ago

Commented on the blog baby 😉

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Posted: 4 years ago

Last Part


Shocking and Captivating Part


Maan doubted Rohan and thankfully Maan found out

who the culprit was

he got Rohan to confess and finally Avantika comes to

speak to Rohan one last time

but she had no idea that Maan and her family will also be there

when she confesses , that Geet is not her daughter but an orphan

Rudr is furious and tells her that Geet is only their daughter

but Geet is hurt by the fact that her mother always raised her as a charity

both Avantika and Rohan are arrested

while Maan now tells Geet his work is done and she pays him

telling him he is free


Thank you for this Amazing story


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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice update....

So Geet’s mom was Rohan’s crime partner and both had different reason. Rohan don't want to marry Geet bcoz he love somebody else and Avantika wants to kill her bcoz she thought Geet is not her daughter and all are shocked with this revelations. Geet don't want to call Avantika her mom after her deeds. Maan caught them with his intelligence and proved himself innocent. Maan did his job and now wants to go to his life and Geet released him from his duty.....

Wanted to Maaneet with each other but it's ok I think it was story concept....

Thanks for the pm dear

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Posted: 4 years ago

Surprising update Geet mother the culprit along with Rohan wanted to kill her thinking she's an orphan. Maan did his job and left.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hi Richa... how are you?

thanks for sharing this marvelous story...


Last Part

Dramatic and tremendous update..... eloquently written

of cos Maan doubted Rohan

Omg it was Geet's mom and Rohan together

this was unexpected

glad that the entire Handa family know everything

they were indeed stunned

Rudr's questions are justified

Kudos to Maan for finding the culprit

Avantika thought that Geet was not her biological daughter

but Rudr explains that Geet is their daughter

Geet's reaction is understandable

sad that Avantika never loved her and treated her as a charity case

hate Avantika....

dismayed with her actions

even Aakash was upset that his mom unknowingly involved him

great that Rohan and Avantika are arrested

not surprised that Maan leaves as his job is finished

well Geet pays him and he leaves


hoping for Captive Season 3?

or a new story from you?

take care and be safe

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Posted: 4 years ago

Last part

Shocking twist !! 😲

Geet’s own mom was the mastermind behind trying to kill her daughter .... WOW ...,. I was left speechless, that took me completely by suprise .

Rohan was her pawn but I think a lot of us suspected that he was not a good character

Maan was ingenious how he figured out the real culprit

Whole family was shocked especially geet ......, she must be so hurt

So maan has been granted freedom from his contract but as a free man he could possibly develop romantic feelings for his ex-boss ??? 😉

Thank you di for another captivating story but sad that it ended 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Last part

Wait...! what......? Geet ki apni hi Maa ne yeh sab kiya....aur sath me woh langoor Rohan bhi isme shamil the.... Akhir hummari super intelligent hot bodyguard ne khooni ko pehchanaya sab ko.... But it all got ended so suddenly ki maaneet they just remain and behave as if nothing happened between them.... Didi yaar yeh kya hua hai..... I'm so sad two things first this story had come to an end second I was hoping ki dono ki shadi whadi hojai lekin nahi sab casual hogaya..... She just set free her watch eagle.... Over All I loved it through out the storyline.... this is one of my dynamic list favorite.... Hope to see you with another interesting storyline... Thank you for the wonderful work.... 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Ops shocking update soo geet mom behind all thisi thinking geet as a orphan she broke all people trust avantika didint even think geet as a human she is really selfish for property she fell down so much now it will be regret that she harmed her real Daughter maan also left but wat shivani told in maan ear still a mystry but wat ever may be geet lost her trust from her mom it will so heart wrenching for her😭

Enjoyed the story never expect it will end soon

Thnks for pw di😊

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Posted: 4 years ago

The real killer is always a surprise. Never imagined that her own mother would be behind it. Always doubted Rohan and Akash. Maan planned well to expose the reality in front of everyone. Otherwise, no one would have believed it. Avantika turned out to be such a fool. She never checked the facts.

Nothing further happening between Maan and Geet. He will go away and tend to his grandfather. There was attraction towards Maan from Geet. We don't know if he ever felt that way or not.

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