CAPTIVE 2 UPDATED LAST PART ON PG 55 / 11-7-2021 - Page 24

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Posted: 4 years ago

Amazing update.

Maan was very much alert n active.

Geet is quite jealous n not able to control her emotions.

Geet is quite possessive of maan.

I think it was another trap for geet but other girl was trapped in it.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice update...

Geet entered into her friend’s place with Maan and as expected her friends goes gaga over him, and obviously Geet didn’t like it. Later Maan saved one girl from drowning. Geet was angry with Maan and challenged Maan for strip dance, Geet thought Maan will not agree for that but Geet don’t know about Maan. In club Geet's friends were excited when Maan started to strip and Geet got super angry I think she is getting possessive for Maan and Geet took Maan away from there. And told them Maan is her's... And Maaneet leave from party......

Thanks for the pm dear

Waiting for next update.....

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice update. Geet didn't like Maan saving the girl as she feels she did on purpose to get his attention. She's so angry that she asked Maan to strip and take the Male dancers place where she dug her own grave as he became the center of attraction amongst her friends. In anger she left the party half way. Waiting for the next update.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice part 7, some one really wants to kill Geet. Maan knows that real attack. I think Geet can’t handle Maan’s hotness. Let see now she can spend good time with friends.

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 8

Whao Geet ne khud ki pairon pe kuladi maar liya hai... Usse laga ki woh smarty pants business woman hai toh sab uski baat maan jai lekin Maan ne uski plan chuopat kardiya....

Haye haye Geet is really ignorant to the fact that she's openly placing her claim on Maan being only hers... But could it be that Geet was targeted again in the party... Was that trap set for her....? Aise kaun hai jo Geet ko itna shiddat se maarna chate hai....? And Maan apne zid pe adik raha hai he literally just stripped of his clothes in front of the whole crowd.... Iske ghor paap Geet ko lagega ki woh Maan ki vastra haran rachai thi....🤣🤣🤣....phir khud dhushasan se bhagwan Krsna ban gai thi..... 😆😛 aur chali gai Maan ko leke wahan se...

But ek question mark reh gaya ki kaise aur kaun hai woh shaks jo pool me trap banvaye hai..... 🤔 hope Geet will be safe.... 🤗

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Posted: 4 years ago

Commented on blog baby 😃

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Posted: 4 years ago

Geet not liking maan getting that much attention of her friends

And maan might right about trap in pool but in her jealousy she can't thinking properly

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Posted: 4 years ago

hi hope you are well. thanks for updating

Chapter 7

Tremendous update.... well written

Maan is good at his job and his only priority is Geet

of cos Geet's friends want Maan but he is oblivious

great that he saved her friend but Geet chatises him

she is jealous seeing those girls close to Maan

sad that she accuses and taunts Maan

oh no she challenges him

as expected Maan does not back off

he is forced to be join the male dancers

she indeed realises too late what she did

Maan is the centre of attraction

at least she stops Maan

the girls are peeved

liked this possessive Geet

she says Maan is hers

great she took him away

update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 8


An Extravagant and Possessive Update


All Geet's friends were going crazy seeing Maan

drooling over him and this fact actually made Geet

dislike that her friends fantasizing about Maan

they even want to hire him

one of Geet's friends get caught in the pool and Maan

saves her making Geet furious at the fact that he always

is there to rescue

but she failed to listen to Maan's words which were there was a trap

in the pool which means someone has done that intentionally

Geet telling Maan only to obey her orders and nothing else

while she takes him to the party and challenge him to strip before all

only Geet still does not know Maan , he scares about nothing

and can surely do whatever she says

but he truly shocked her been on stage while all the girls screaming

for him to strip making Geet feel the possessiveness

and finally she had to tell Maan she takes back her challenge

her words too were possessive " he is mine"


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Posted: 4 years ago

Comment on blog

Will be waiting for next part

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