Shot 2: Late night text, New update, 17 march

Hey maaneetian! How have you been?

Just hope all of you are safe and sound and happy...

Months ago, i wrote a short story on yourqoute on collab challenge but the characters in my mind maaneet only so i modified it a bit and posting here...if you enjoy please comment or like and encourage me to post more...

The late night text

It was few days left to the exam geet had been burning the mid night oil diligently, her mobile beeped signalling the incoming text which said Apologies accepted from unknown number. "I didn't asked for your forgiveness" she replied haughtily. Then it intsantly struck her. What if it could be shenanigans trying to hit for innocent girls. She picked up her mobile to block that forgiving stranger. But another message popped up. " hey! You didn't ask who am I" She realised yes she didn't. Her heart and mind in duel. One said don't you stupid girl and other what he is someone i know and hurts him or her unintentionally. "Who?" She asked. No reply came. She tossed and turned entire night thinking about the strange stranger. Why didn't he reply?. Why?

In morning she woke up with a headache. She checked for the messages. There was one. A smile broke on her face. She opened it restively. " today its aloo ka paratha...and you are officially invited to have it not to rob it...as you have done all these days...so ma'am the guy whose tiffin you have been eating for a week now without eating a humble pie so I thought to forgive you and please do come...if you accept my buddy resquest"

She hurried toward the bathroom thinking what to wear today. As it was her first meeting with the person whose tiffin she had been hijacking from college parking consecutively for days.

Red crept her face as she looked at the mirror...duffer you aren't going to a date she wiped her face with her discarded duppatta How did he got my number .?Myriad thoughts kept popping in her mind.

But the joy mixed with little but guilt...first day he must have forgotten his lunch box but what about the other day...she stepped out...

To be continued...

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Thats for the smile on my face..

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Congrats on the SS

awesome start....

so the text gets Geet thinking

at least her curiosity came to and end with another text

so he invited her for lunch

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Nice update 👍

Nice concept waiting for next part please update soon 🙂

Shot 2

She looked around the college parking lot. His black stunning bike stood proudly among others but as usual, he wasn't there.

She cautiously moved towards it, feeling like a fool to come on first call. When he is himself not here after inviting her. Then decided to return back to the hostel. Ekdum jhalli hain tu geet….mana ki tune uski lunch khaya toh kya jaha buleyega chal degi muh utha ke she reprimanded herself. Toh muh kaha chod ke agogi woh toh sath hi rahega na...ab jab aa hi gayi ho, wait for sometimes.

"but I will hide and wait...safety is more important geet". She decided to wait for him sitting at the farthest parked scooty.

After about 10 minutes she saw Maan Singh Khurana, her senior coming toward the same bike babaji yeh hain Akshaypatra, whom she has been using to rejuvenate her palette which were in dire need of Homemade food plus it was fun having the stolen food...she did this back in school days too. But now she felt like crying...he must have poisoned the aloo ka paratha...kitna gussa ata hain unhe she vividly remembered his famous fight at basketball court.

He was holding the milton's approx 3 container lunch box. He came and stood near his bike looking at his watch.

She instantly regretted her earlier decision to stay and wait.

What was the need to eat your senior's lunch? geet...She looked up seeking her babaji's help and pulled her scarf out, covered her face and was about to walk past him stealthily, when he held her wrist thwarting her movement.

…..to be continued

Congratulations on yet another story

Shot 1

Fascinating Start

Wow Geet has been hijacking a lunch box

the whole week

and now she gets a text from the guy

is it Maan ?

Shot 2

Fantastic

Geet comes and sees the beautiful black bike

but decides to hide and wait when she sees

Maan coming towards the bike

now she is very much regretting stealing his lunch

seems like Maan knows her well as she covers herself

but he still stops her

waiting now to see what will happen

2

fantastic update

knowing that she stole her seniors tiffin geet decide to leave slowly n quietly n also regret but maan hold her hand n stop her

but how maan find out geet is the person who stole his tiffin