Maaneet ss- pehle pyaar ka pehla gum! Part 22- pg 20 / march 23. - Page 9

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Posted: 4 years ago
#81

Part-13



Her feelings were getting more deeper day by day. She was changing without even her own knowledge. Her days starts with excitement to meet him. And then she would get ready fast & run out of the house..hoping to have another walk with him.

But it was not possible. That day was just a co-incidence...and co-incidence do not happens all the times.


All the way till school, she would pray to god to grant her wish...she would keep her fingers crossed...expecting him to come & walk with her...and make it special.
When he would not come to join her...she would try to reason herself...that may be he went early today or may be he was late.


Wish.. she could know which one was the correct reason. Her heart would feel restless to see him as soon as possible.
She was going insane with all these emotions & this strange kind of desperation to see him.


After reaching her class...she would first look for him or check his seat for his bag to know if he had come or not.

Even in class, her whole concentration will be on him only. She would look at him whenever got any chance...and would think about him, when she was supposed to concentrate on teacher's words.


She would recall each & every moment..she had spent with him...his teasing..his talks...each word he had spoken to her. She can think about him 24*7 without getting bored.


And if he said or did something, which will show even a little bit of his concern & interest for her...she wont be able to ignore that. She would think about "that" again n again...as if memorising each n every thing about him. And the feeling that he did care for her or was giving importance to her...would make her heart to dance in joy.


When he would talk to her or spent time with her in break or share lunch with her...she would feel really special..that out of whole class..she was the one, he has chosen to be with.


At the last period...she would get upset that now she had to go away from him. She would look at him while getting out of the school gates...wishing to go with him..sharing that special walk. But seeing his friends with him...she would feel awkward n drop that idea...and would go alone.


Reaching home, she would wait for clock to move fast..so that she could go for tutions. She would be the first one to reach most of the time...and then curse her self for coming early. Waiting for him was becoming tough with each passing moment...but then she didnt have any complains with him...it was her own fault.

Again she would be tempted to concentrate on him instead of studying.


Sometimes, she would be lucky to go back with him. But most of the time, to her bad luck...pinky & meera would stop her and she would have to go with them.


And then, coming back home...she would be busy/lost in her own world. To be honest...her thoughts would be filled with him, him & only him. She didnt had anything else to do...other than thinking about him.


She did not liked this period from evening till morning...when she could not see him. So she would pass her time thinking about him...re-living each & every memories of him.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#82

Part 12


An Adorable and Sweet Update


Geet having the feelings of love yet they all

mixed up as its her first time

she enjoys walking with Maan more

and she seems to always want to stare at him

when caught she does those cute silly gestures

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Posted: 4 years ago
#83

Part 13


A Lovely Update


Geet's feelings for Maan is surely increasing

but it seems like he is only treating her as a friend

he cares for her sure , spend time when he can

share lunch with her

I'm actually hoping for Geet's sake that Maan

would feel the same way as she does , otherwise Geet

will be deeply hurt for a very long time

she only thinks about Maan all the time its cute as its

the first feelings of love

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Posted: 4 years ago
#84

Part 13

amazing update....

Geet is irrevocably in love with Maan.

but what does Maan feel for her?

update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
#85

13

geet's feeling becoming more n more deep to be with maan n she start to ignore other things around her

geet trying to safe guard her moments with maan

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Posted: 4 years ago
#86

Part-14



She was doing her homework in her room.. But her thoughts were filled with him. She was remembering his attempts to irritate her at tution class that day.


She was already finding it difficult to concentrate & trying to solve those questions...which their teacher had given them, before going out of the room.


They had 15 minutes to solve it...she had already lost first 5 minutes to her staring session.. And when she realised what she was doing.. She tried to focus her attention back on her book.


But thats become impossible for her when he decide to do some "time pass" as he was done with his questions. He kept irritating her...taunting her that why it was taking her so long to solve them...or telling her that her answer was wrong... And when she didnt reacted the way he wanted.. He tried to take her note book..but she didnt let him..giving him an irritated glare..she again got busy in her book...


She was too lost in herself to notice anything around her... Just then, she felt a hand snatching her book. She was ready to shout in irritation.."Maaa..."


but She stoped suddenly..looking around, she realised that she was in her room, not at tutions. What she was about to do? She looked at her younger sister...who was standing few steps away from her with that book in her hands..making faces. Uff..one more person to trouble her..


She shouted at her faking anger to hide her real emotions..

"maaarr khayegi tu..rukk!" and ran behind her to teach her a lesson!


Though, she very successfully covered up & hided her real state from her sister..that incident had shocked her so much. She was scared with...what was happening to her and a fear always lingered in her mind & heart...that what if someone realised her changed behaviour? or find out about her feelings for him?


Everything was same..yet it felt totally new & different. Her relation with him was always special...but now it felt more special...more deep. She looked at it differently...with different emotions now. As if searching a new meaning of it..didnt know what was she actually searching for...but now his simple talks felt more special.

She started to search something more in their usual talks..something more in his words.


There was always a carving in her to hear something from him about herself. She wanted to know what was she for him...was she also special for him..like he was for her?


Whenever, he would talk about her...taunt her or even comment on her habits...instead of getting angry...she would feel thrilled with the realisation that he observed her...that he noticed those little details & habits of hers!


He had many times complimented her for her intelligence...but now it felt so good to hear that from him! That apriciation from him...was really special for her!


She didnt know when & how...but he has become very important for her...his view...his thoughts..his opinion...matters to her so much.


With these feelings...there was always a wish/carving in heart to get his attention. She wanted to be the center of his attention like he was for her.


She didnt know how to do that? What should she do for that? She wanted to be in his thoughts..just like he used to be in hers all the time...she wanted to be the most important person for him...someone more than a best friend!


She didnt realised when her heart started to expect sooo much more from him!

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Posted: 4 years ago
#87

Part 14

Geet cannot help but think of Maan

of cos its affecting her studies

at least she realised when she sister took her book

well she wants to know what Maan thinks of her

she has started to expect too much from him

update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago
#88

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geet is scare what will happened if others come to know about her change feeling for maan

geet wanted to be surrounded with maan's thoughts n become center of attraction of maan's life like he is for her

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Posted: 4 years ago
#89

Part 14


A Sweet and Cute Update


Geet seems to be lost in Maan more

as the days are passing

hope she does well in her exams as she always did

Maan irritates Geet but she now enjoys that

his compliments are what makes her long and crave for

more praises

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Posted: 4 years ago
#90

Geet start feeling about Maan and he was normal with her she can't stop thinking about him 24/7

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