MG : Majili || Part 5 updated @ Pg 14 || 23rd Feb - Page 11

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Posted: 4 years ago

Hey Sruthi..... continue when you can

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Will update This soon

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MAJILI


Part 5



"Yes, it is true Sir.. My daughter would die if she doesn't get married to your Son.... Please accept proposal" Anand Said Making Kiran look at him with shock!! Even after Knowing how His Son was, She wants to marry him??? It will shatter her, she will face so much in future then how could Anand Just give her hand for Maan.



"But..." Kiran tried



"Par Vo kuch nahi Sir, Mai janta Hoon how Maan is And How much a drunkard He is! But my daughter's life is more important to me now" Anand Said Feeling much angry on Geet. She is his darling Daughter and he can do anything for her, and He believed that maybe one day she will change him!!!


Kiran Nodded Feeling So happy after god knows How Many years, Making Geet her DIL itself brings him happiness as he always thought of to get Maan a wife a like geet who is Good at heart and Helpful in person, He sighed not knowing how to convince his son!!



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"How long would you be like this, Look how devasted he looks" Yash Yelled at Maan eyeing kiran who stood far away in defeat.. Kiran tried Many ways for Maan to accept the proposal but he wouldnt budge.



"If you Marry Geet, He can at least Relax that Someone cares about you" Yash tried again. while Maan looked shocked Hearing Geet's Name.



"He will be happy knowing That someone is with you Nahi tho Voh Aisii hii Fikar karte rahenge, Stress lenge.. Which is not good for his health" yash said maan looked anywhere than him, Maan gulped when he felt like His life was struck with deepti, He couldn't think of anything but her, his dream of becoming a crickter was pushed in the far corner of his heart.



"He is Already so devasted, And if this happens anymore he will die of that Grief and Only you will be the reason for that..... Jiteji Mata pita ke liye kuch nahi kar pana aur Agar unke marne ke badh tune kuch kiya bhi tho kya Faida Hai" Yash tried for the Last time Making Maan gulp down, It was true He didn't anything for his parents! He was always be a Carefree chill person! But Now looking at his father standing alone looking at the vast ocean like a defeated personn, he felt like he should do something to make him feel happy, And Without thinking even for a second he said.



"Mai Us se shadi karunga" Maan said Looking at the Vast ocean, his face void of any emotion.... The waves now were crashing wildly just like His inner turmoil, if at all he knew one could face and feel such agony and heartbroken in love, then he could have never loved anyone in his life.



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The Marriage was done within a week, And they got married in temple with just Maan and Geets parents and some relatives.




Geet was arranging some of her clothes in Maan's Closet, she turned around hearing some commotion and Faced a Tipsy Maan stumbling towards her.



"I don't know why you have married me" Maan said Looking at the wall beside her. He never looks at her. Never Makes eye contact with her.



"My father Said That you loved me and That was the reason you wanted to marry me" maan said.



"I don't have anything with me, Na mai koi paisa Valaa hoon, Na koii zimmedar hoon, Naahi mail tume.. Mai tumhe care karne vala hoon"



"I don't know if you are fortunate or unfortunate for me, But I envy you... I envy you that Without even much attempting you married the one you loved.... Varna Koii pyaar karne Vale milna tho bahit mushkil hai, Jaise Maii aur d-deepti.. !!" He Chuckled Bitterly Moving more towards her. Geet gulped looking at the raw emotions crossing his face,



"Or it's just That you never loved me?? Or just took a pity of me and My father!! " Maan said Now inches away from her.



"Nahii Maii.." Geet tried




"Shhhhh....But I want to say or clear few things with you, Maii tume Kabhii bhi pyaar nahii de sakta I can't... never ever, Even if I try to.. This heart of mine" he said pointing his finger towards his heart "will never Accept, Kyunnkein Vaha Par sirf aur sirf Deepti ka Haqq hai" He said now looking directly into her eyes Making Geet shudder in nervousness



"And Get one thing Straight in your Mind Mrs Khurana If at All My Deepti comes back for me then im definitely going to leave you, I don't care who you are... I dont consider you as My wife not Now Not in the future!!! SO STAY AWAY FROM ME, MY THINGS AND MY ROOM " He said In a low dangerous voice clutching her hair Making her whimper in pain!! He then Moved Back fast and Stormed away leaving her standing there looking at him with misery

Edited by Kuttisri - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

5

very emotional update

maan marry geet only for his father but clearly told geet he is not bounded with this marriage so don't expect anything in this relation

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Posted: 4 years ago

gosh!!!! i am feeling sooooo soooo bad for geet yaar!!

and really want to know more abt this deepti!!

when will you make maan understand the all his bad doing!!

thanks for update

waiting for nxt

as cant able to write more !!!

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice update

Waiting for next update..

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Nice update .

Maan geet ki shaadi ho gyi aur maan ne geet ko bol bhi ki wo usse kabhi pyar nhi de payega aur usse dur rehne ko bhi keh diya

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Posted: 4 years ago

Interesting story.

Maan in love with Deepti who has disappeared leaving him heartbroken.

He married Geet for the sake of his father. Geet who is madly in love with Maan.

Really sad to see both suffering.

Have to see when Maan will realize Geet's value.

Don't know how i missed this story.

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Posted: 4 years ago

thanks for the update


Part 14

Impressive painful update.... amazingly written

Geet loves Maan so much.....

her dad can so anything for her happiness.....

despite knowing how Maan is, he is willing to get her married to him as he knows she will die without Maan

Maan's dad is shocked but happy as he feels Geet is perfect for Maan

of cos Maan is adamant and refuses

at least Yash tries to convince Maan

Yash did have a point

Maan fails to think of his dad

so Maan agreed

Maan should try and move on

so they are now married

Hate Maan's attitude

Deepti left him and yet he is still stuck there

glad that was direct with Geet so that she will not have any expectations

did Geet know that she would get nothing but sadness when she married Maan?

Gosh he was harsh with her

feeling for Geet

she may have married her love but he does not accept her

update soon

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Posted: 4 years ago

She placed herself in this situation. Now its time to hold strong and deal with it.

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