TS maaneet part 6 updated n PartB half update - Page 2

Thanks for PM.

Nice start. Congrats on new story.

Loved the character sketch & regarding the story, I am but confused. Though I loved the update and could see my future in it. Is this married couple Maaneet? If they are Maaneet then why are they discussing forum and Maaneet stories and most importantly, the way the girl behaved, it doesn’t match with the character sketch of Geet. But the way guy behaved completely matches Maan’s character.

So I am very confused right now.

Will the girl discuss how Maaneet played a role in her love story?

Waiting for next. Hope my confusions get cleared in next. Update soon.

Awesome update l like it very much maan is very good and he did not shout on geet for ruining his file and now geet is very guilty and she want to say sorry to maan

i like it ... this is something different or else ... ignoring ka theka tu maan nai hi liya hua hai har ff mai... is geet love him or not... would like to read more ... update ur all stories as i like all.

Beautiful start...

Loved it...

Geet is crazy...

But in end felt guilty to damage his file...

Excited for next part...

Thanks for the pm...

Nice update. So it's love marriage for maan? And geet? Waiting for more of maan geet.

wonderful update.... thanks for the pm!

liked Geet's cribbing....

Maan loves her so much...

Geet's dilemma well portrayed.

she did go a bit far

how will she manofy Maan?

update soon

Geet is not getting what she wants from him. He doesn't know what she wants.

I ask for a name also

Congratulations on your story

Character Sketch

Maan only loves his Misty and wants one glance from her

while Geet does not want to marry Maan

this already is Interesting

Part 1

Interesting and Fascinating Start

Maan wants to spend some time with his wife and there is no fault

she is busy on GF with her friends , she should at least be considerate

to his feelings , she can obviously be on for some time and then be with her

husband .

because Maan said out of frustration his wife's friends are stupid she went and ruined

his file now that is not about leisure that is his career , his business

and it seems Geet is pampered

she feels guilty which is good but now she is waiting for him instead of trying to help him

she is mean