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Originally posted by: Creampuff

Not too sure , but if you want the story to linger around the misconception of their feelings you could have geet receive a call & walk away & the confrontation with maan could be avoided . And perhaps dev takes geet on a date but maan finds out & joins their date in restaurant ?? & turn it into a comical date?? However your ideas are always fantastic, I am sure whatever you write , it will be entertaining! 👍🏼

Thanks dear will definitely take ur suggestion into consideration 😃

Haha I myself don't know what I'm writing till I sit before the lappy and start typing... I don't even know if I'm expressing the Feelings of Maaneet perfectly through my writing...sometimes I feel like I lack as I'm new! These days I'm getting a less response !! but I'm glad some of you're So encouraging for me to write 🤗

Originally posted by: Tatianabhardwaj

Amazing update. So Dev is her father's bestfriend's son.

Loved the little convo between Geet and her father. They have already fixed her alliance, dint even asked her🥺

Dev made an entry😡

Geet ignored Maan but she is right at her place. Maan will surely win her back😃

Dev embarrassed😆. Loved Maan's reaction on seeing Dev with Maan😆

Sruthi no matter how long you update. I never feel satisfied😆. So, update soon

Thank you dear ❤️

@Bold lol ...im not getting any ideas of what to write next... Can you suggest me !?

Originally posted by: taahir004

Part 14

Fabulous Update

Geet has always just wanted to hear the words from Maan "Be Mine"

but now she is aware that her father's best friend's son is coming to meet her

her father wants her to marry Dev

though Geet agreed with her parents , she is heart broken it would be obvious

she has loved Maan for the longest time .

been outside in the garden Dev and Geet meet , his touch his meeting Geet seems to be

uncomfortable with it , all she is thinking about is Maan

and he too arrives to see Dev close to Geet with his arm around her shoulder

Maan is furious yes his possessiveness and jealousy comes out as anger

Dev had left only for Maan to grab at Geet's waist while her hands are on his shoulders

Maan will surely not take this lightly , and I'm wondering when he finds out that

Dev is interested in Geet what will he do then

Thank you so much for long comment Taahir ...you make me feel encouraged 😃

Originally posted by: Kuttisri

Thank you dear ❤️

@Bold lol ...im not getting any ideas of what to write next... Can you suggest me !?

Sent you a pm. Do share your views🤗

Great part

Dev met Geet and Maan saw them

Wonder how will he react

Cont soon

Thanks for pm

Maan is so angry. He doesn't even know yet that Dev is supposed to be her fiancee. what will be his reaction when he finds that out?

Read all the update togather. Very beautiful story. Geet loves Maan since teen age. Now she met him after ten years at Meea's engagement. Their relation is progressing firmly when Geet's parents fixed her marriage with Dev. Dev came to Simla to see Geet. Maan is furious to see Geet with Dev.

Waiting for next part.

Please send me pm.

Originally posted by: i rok

hey,

thanks for the update and pm...

shocking update...

geets parents have chosen dev for geet...she being obedient has agreed...its sad how she couldnt tell them about her feelings but i feel most girls cannot...they try to make their parents happy...

loved Maans reaction...

lets see how he is gonna tell about his love and how is geet gonna handle the situation...

Thanks

@Bold : Yes Most of the girls really fear to share their feelings to their parents.... And some of them even loose their love before the love and respect they had for their parents!!

And here Geet didn't even Knew that Maan had feelings for her ND she thinks it's better to Move on!

Originally posted by: kabslocks

Read all the update togather. Very beautiful story. Geet loves Maan since teen age. Now she met him after ten years at Meea's engagement. Their relation is progressing firmly when Geet's parents fixed her marriage with Dev. Dev came to Simla to see Geet. Maan is furious to see Geet with Dev.

Waiting for next part.

Please send me pm.

Thank you so much.... Glad you liked it 😊 .. I hope you got all the links of the parts as I didn't share the links from 11-14 in the index will post that soon

Will send u PM 👍🏼

When are you going to update?? 😃