MG - FF HUM TUM..... updated epilogue on pg 120 May 8 - Page 67

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Beautiful update n thnxx for pm me

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Part - 96



Next morning.....


Geet is fast asleep when someone comes and kisses her forehead....


It's Maan, Geet thinks it's her dream and is like there is no harm in enjoying it as long as it is a dream....


Geet half opens her eyes and sees Maan... She thinks she is still in her dream....


She smiles to herself, pulls her quilt closer and continues to sleep as she doesn't want her beautiful dream to end so soon.....


Maan takes out her quilt and wants her to wake....


They have got this precious time to themselves till Aditi wakes....


Maan: Good morning Geet


Geet then realises that it's Maan only standing there and not her dream....


Geet: mujhe sona hai


Maan: utjao Geet, humme jog pe jaana haina? mein kab se tera intezaar kar raha tha, jaldhi utto Geet


Maan pulls her legs and gets her out of the bed....


Geet: subhe subhe aapko kya hogaya?


Maan: Aditi ke saath sokke, uske saath late utne ki aadat ho gayi hai tumme


Geet: aap thode der asaram se sone bhi nahi denge kya?


Maan: aaise kaathe peethe soothe rahogi toh aur moti ho jaoge Geet


Geet: aap mere peeche kyun pade ho?


Maan: yahan hum dono hi hai, warna mein akhele baitke bore ho jaoonga Geet


Geet: teek hai, jao mein fresh hokar aati hoon


Geet gets ready and goes out.....


Maan has made her tea....


Maan: chai?


Geet takes the cup from him and drinks it....


Maan then gets her shoes...


Geet: do din ke liye shoes ki kya zaroorat hai?


Maan: exercise karthe hai toh proper karna chahiye Geet, warna there is no point in doing it the wrong way


Geet puts on her shoes and hopes Aditi wakes up early and saves her...


They start jogging around the farm...


Geet is happy to be among the fields after a long time....


She enjoys the early morning scent of fresh air with the earthy touch....


It's good to be back in Hoshiarpur..


She is reminded of her childhood when she went to the fields with Ranno....


Ranno would be busy milking the cows while Geet will happily plucking the marigold and eating the chikoos and guavas straight from the trees...


Geet looks for any fruit trees.... There is one Mango tree nearby....


Geet looks at it fondly remembering the days when her ultimate desire was the first fruit from the tree she grew by planting a sapling....


Her mother got it from a neighbour...


Geet waited for years until one day the tree bore a fruit...


How she wishes that she never grew old and remained the same Geet who was always happy with the tiny joys of life....


As we grow up our desires grow faster than us....


Maan: Geet, kahan kho gayi ho?


Geet tells him her story of how she used to play in the fields without any worries....


Maan: ur so lucky Geet


Geet: you would have had better life, you grew up in Canada


Maan: aaise nahi hotha Geet, hum kahan bhi ho humnara kismat achcha hona chahiye


Geet: everyone is fond of their childhood, you are not?


Maan: I grew up with my maa, papa rarely visited us, he was busy making money, it was for is but still


Maan pauses as he thinks about his childhood....


Geet: did you miss your papa?


Maan: I never did, but maa missed him so much, I was happy with my maa, she was my mother father everything, a mother can easily fill a father's place but not the other way


Geet is surprised to see Maan open up.... He didn't have the opportunity earlier....


Geet had her own problems in the past, Maan actually wanted to live life again only after he met Geet... Maan was in a happy space whenever he was with her....


Geet: I'm also attached more to maa


Maan: I know you miss her a lot, no matter how old you are, you always miss your mother


Geet: aap bhi miss karthe honge?


Maan: kabhi kabhi, I thought I lost my life when I lost her, I was only 14 then, I lost interest in everything, I lost the desire to live, that's my weakness Geet, it always happens with me, Iife has taken away everyone I love, including you Geet


Maan is overwhelmed with emotion, he controls himself.....


Maan: hummare taqdeer hi kuch ajeeb hai Geet, jab tum mere paas aana chathi thi tab mein tumse bhaag raha tha, ab jab mein tummare paas aana chahtha tum mujse bhaagne ki koshish kar rahi hai


Geet remains silent....


Maan: hummare taqdeer shayad hummare haath mein nahi tha, lekhin Aditi ki taqdeer hummare haath mein hai Geet, hum chahte toh usko badal sakte, she deserves to be with her mother and father


Maan looks at Geet with determination....


Maan: but this time I'll not lose, I'll get what I deserve


Geet feels bad for Maan....


Maan doesn't want to ruin such a lovely morning....


Maan: Geet, tumme ye Mango khana haina?


Geet: woh.....nahi....


Geet is still thinking about Maan's pain.... He always keeps his pain within, unlike Geet who shows it through her anger.....


Maan tries to jump and reach the fruit, but it's out of his reach....


Maan suddenly lifts Geet and Geet is taken by surprise.... She is confused.....


She looks at Maan....


Maan: Geet, pluck the mango


Maan takes her near the mango as much as possible.... But Geet has to strech her hands na?


Geet keeps staring Maan.....


Maan: Geet, tum bahut bhari ho, thoda jaldhi karo toh achcha hoga


Geet plucks the fruit and Maan is still holding her....


Geet: Maan


Maan doesn't want to let her go....


Geet: Maan, mujhe neeche utharo


Maan let's her down....


Geet takes a bite and it's so good...


Maan: achcha haina?


Even before Geet could answer Maan catches hold of her hand and takes a bite himself.....


Maan: it's sweet but little sour, just like you, but I love it


Maan pulls her hand closer and takes another bite looking at her juicy lips intently....


Geet tries to hide her feelings but she knows it's not easy to hide it from Maan....


Geet: chalo, Aditi uth jayegi


Geet starts to walk faster....


Maan follows her....


Maan: Geet, you can't keep running away from me always, MSK se bachna itna aasaan nahi hai Geet

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Posted: 4 years ago

Lovely. Maan talking about his past. Geet first time seeing maan open up. She feels for him. But is scared to let herself go

Maan is right Aditi can have both her parents
If geetbis decides

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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 96

thanks for the pm

Magnificent update!

Loved how Maan awakened Geet!

so she thought it was a dream....

glad that Maaneet spend time jogging!

nice that Geet enjoys and recalls her memories.

at least she shared this with Maan.

great that Maan opened up and to Geet.

he went through so much.

liked that he was direct with Geet.

he wants Aditi to have both her parents

hope Maan gets what he deserves!

so he helped her get the mango

awesome moments

loved him teasing her

wish Geet would give me them a chance

update soon

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96

maan utilizing every second to be with geet.

geet feels maan's pain when he share is childhood with her

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Nice update n thnxx for pm me

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Maan first time shared his pain and geet feel bad to know how he want to give every happiness to his daughter

Geet still running from her emotions

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Part - 97


Aditi is ready....


Maan takes her to the pool....


Geet avoids the swimming session saying that she has to wash....


Maan asks her to come and join them later....


Geet wants to see how Aditi is doing... She always wanted Aditi to learn swimming early for she might also follow Geet's footsteps and never learn....


Geet goes to check them.....


Aditi is playing with Maan in her float...


Geet says hai to Aditi....


Maan: tum bhi aao Geet


Geet: nahi, mujhe kaam hai


Maan: tum mere saath swim nahi karogi?


Geet: woh, aaisa kuch nahi, I don't want to get wet


Maan: you sit on the side and watch Aditi swim


Geet wants to see what Aditi does


Geet sits placing her legs in the water....


It's nice to be in the water.....


Maan distracts Geet by bringing her attention to Aditi....


Maan shows Geet how Aditi swims with the help of her swim west...


Geet is happy to see Aditi having so much fun in the water....


How she wishes she could too?


Maan goes and pulls her legs making her fall in the pool....


Geet screams and asks for help....


Geet: bachao, mujhe bachao


Maan rushes to her and brings her to the side....


Geet is so scared that she closes her eyes tight and keeps shouting...


Maan lifts her and puts her on the side....


Maan: Geet, Geet, open your eyes, you are not dead and I'm not the yamraaj


Geet slowly opens her eyes and looks at Maan....


Maan looks hot and sexy in his wet avatar.....


Geet is still hanging on to his shoulder.....


Geet gets her hands off him when she realises that she is safe.....


Maan: lagtha hai ki pani se zyada mujhse darthi ho


Maan adjusts her hair, lifts her chin and looks into her eyes....


Maan: darne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai Geet, tum safe ho


Geet: hmm


Geet gets up and leaves.....


Maan and Aditi come back after a while....


Maan comes to the see Geet in her room....


Geet has just showered as she got wet....


She is drying her hair....


Maan comes and stops when he sees her....


She looks beautiful.... Maan pauses and admires her....


Geet senses his presence and looks up....


Maan starts walking towards her....


Geet doesn't know what to do.... She is standing at the edge of the bed and she can't move any further or she'll only fall on the bed which is not so advisable looking at Maan's greedy eyes....


Geet: Aditi


Great tries to speak but couldn't....


Maan comes and shuts her mouth by placing his finger on her lips....


Maan: chup bilkul chup


Geet freezes.....


Aditi comes running to see Geet....


Geet sees Aditi and tries to say something to Maan....


Maan tries to Stop her again....


Geet: Aditi


Geet asks Maan to turn around and take a look....


Maan understands that Aditi is here...


Maan steps back a little.....


Maan: Geet, you don't know swimming?


Maan asks Geet in a teasing tone...


Geet stares Maan, she doesn't like it when Maan talks about her weakness in front of her daughter....


Maan: you should also learn swimming Geet


Geet: I don't want to


Maan: why Geet? I'll teach you, you'll learn before Aditi, let's see if you can do it, haina Aditi?


Aditi joins Maan's team...


Aditi: haan


Geet: pehle tum seekhlo


Maan whispers something in Aditi's ear....


Aditi: aap bade hai


Geet: kya?


Aditi: itna bade


Aditi tries to lift her hand as much as she could....


Maan lifts her and Aditi touches Geet's head and says....


Aditi: itna bade ho


Maan keeps prompting her....


Aditi: aap pehle seekho


Maan laughs hearing that....


Aditi too laughs....


Geet is embarrassed.... She hits Maan....


Geet: jao, tum dono bahar jao, mujhe disturb mat karo


Geet forcefully sents them out....


Geet goes to find them after a while...


They are riding the cycle, Aditi is riding and Maan is following her.....


Geet is getting bored sitting alone...


These two always leave her behind and have fun on their own.....


Geet wants to join them....


Geet goes and checks the ice cream that Maan has loaded the refrigerator with.....


She takes Aditi's favourite cotton candy flovor and goes to woo Aditi...


Geet: I'm eating ice cream... Who wants ice cream? It's so yummy, I love cotton candy


Aditi immediately stops the cycle and comes to Geet....


Maan knows that Geet can't stay away from them longer....


Maan smiles looking at Geet.....


Maan goes and gets chocolate flavor, Geet's favourite....


He then gives it to Geet....


Maan: tum bhi khao Geet


Geet: nahi chahiye mujhe, mein toh moti hoon na?


Maan: itna bhi moti nahi hui


Geet: aap nahi kaoge?


Geet asks looking at the single bowl in Maan's hand....


Maan: this is for us, why Geet? Would you eat the whole bowl?


Geet would finish it in one go....


Geet doesn't answer...


Maan understands that she would have it....


Maan: now I know how you got the extra kilos


Geet snatches the bowl from him and starts to eat....


Geet: app ko chahiye toh jaake lelo, ye mera hai


Aditi has finished her bowl, Geet got her too little


Aditi looks at Geet's hand....


Aditi: mama, mujhe chocolate ice cream chahiye


Maan keeps looking at Geet to see what she does....


Geet shares with Aditi reluctantly...


She puts a spoon in Aditi's bowl...


Maan: Geet, isse khake Aditi moti nahi hogi, give her some more, I'll get you more


Maan wonders who is the kid here, Aditi or Geet?


But Maan is happy to see Geet free from her worries....

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Maan now knows geet don't know swimming so he insist on geet to learn and makee aditi to force her mom

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Nice update. Geet is slowly coming out of her woods and enjoying herself with Maan and Aditi.

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