MG - FF HUM TUM..... updated epilogue on pg 120 May 8 - Page 60

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Posted: 4 years ago

Smart maan use what you have to entertain his daughter and it worked. Loved ramu kaka. geet had to admit maan was resourceful

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Maan happy spending time with his daughter and try to fulfill her every wish which he can and Geet surprise seeing Aditi bonding with Maan

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Part - 88



Geet should appreciate Maan also, haina?


Tabhi toh kabhi kabhi aaisa madat milega.....


Maan: Aditi ke achche bache ban ne me mera haath bhi hai


Geet: aap ne bahut achcha kaam kiya hai Mr.Khurana, ab kush?


Maan: tummare muh se kuch bhi sun ne ka kushi hi alag hai Geet, tum nahi samjhoge


Maan looks at her yearningly....


Geet: aap ko bhook nahi lagi?


Maan: I think I should skip lunch, agar Ramu kaka aaise hi khilathe toh mujhe khane aur daudne ke alawa koi aur kaam karne ka time hi nahi milega


Geet: aap unke dal ko miss nahi kar sakthe ho, Aditi ne aaise hi khane ko katam nahi kiya, woh utna swadisht tha


Maan: kal tum mere saath jag karne ki promise karthi toh mujhe kahne mein koi problem nahi hoga Geet


Geet: aap na, bhooke hi maro, mujhe kya?


Geet takes Aditi in to put her to sleep...


Maan: hare Geet, Geet


Maan follows her as she got upset....


Maan: mein khatha hoon, agar mere bhooke rehne se tumme itna problem hothi toh mein zaroor katha hoon Geet


Geet: aaise meine kab kaha?


Maan: tumme kuch kehne ki kya zaroorat hai Geet? mein sab samjajhtha hoon


Maan keeps looking at Geet....


Geet avoids looking at him and tries to keep her attention only on Aditi.....


Maan: Ramu kaka, khana lagado


Geet is with Aditi thinking about Maan's care and concern for Aditi...


Jaise hi Maan ko patha chala ki Aditi uska hi beti hai Maan toh bahut hi badla badla lagtha hai.....


Ab apne har zamedari ko bahut seriously letha hai... Aditi ki kushiyon ke barein mein soch soch ke kaam kartha hai....


Uske saath rehne ke moka dhoondhtha rehtha hai...


Uski friend banne ki koshish karthe rehtha hai aur ab shayad ban bhi chuka hai...


Ye sab toh teek hai, lekhin Geet ko apne liye Maan ka pyaar kyun nahi dikhtha....


Ye koi selective aneamia ki tarah selective blindness lagtha hai jo Geet zabardasthi dekhna nahi chahthi, ya phir dekhne ke bawajood usko accept nahi karthi.....


Geet ke aakhon ko khulne ki Maan ka agla asthar tayaar hai....


Ranno is here to see her daughter....


Maan told Lucky about their stay at the farmhouse and asked him to give the message to Ranno....


Maan ko laga ki itne dhoor aake Geet apne maa se mil nahi pathi toh kaisa hoga? woh bhi Maan ka asli plan mein ye part nahi tha, Ranno apne aap Geet se milne ke liye taras rahi thi aur Luckily Lucky did a good job telling her about Geet's Amristar visit....


Ranno comes and waits outside the gate hesitating to enter...


Maan who has been anticipating her arrival deliberately stayed outside pretending to be playing with Aditi...


But he is fortunate enough to bond with his daughter actually...


Ranno thought Geet would be coming with Dev....


She got the news of Maan's return only when Lucky called her last night and told her about Geet's stay at the Khurana farm house...


Ranno immediately understood that Geet is with Maan and all her fears about her daughter's happiness vanished in a minute hearing that she is with her man, the man she loves the most, more than her family....


According to Ranno's knowledge Maan may not be the perfect gentleman but he loves Geet and more than that Geet loves him...


That's the only thing that matters for a relationship to succeed, else Ranno wouldn't have survived at the Handa house given the suppressions she has been tolerating, just for the love both she and Mohinder have for each other....


Ranno found out how much Geet loved and trusted Maan from the fact that Geet wanted to go back to Maan when she learnt about their child....


When Ranno heard about Geet's engagement with Dev Ranno always wanted to meet her daughter once to know if she really wanted this relationship....


Ranno knows Dev more than Maan and she thinks Dev is a better choice for Geet anyday but only if Geet could love Dev as much as she loved Maan....


Ranno has been waiting to know the truth from her daughter before she ties the knot with Dev.... A mother always worries about her children no matter how far they may go from her or how old they may grow....


Maan goes and invites Ranno in....


Maan: andar aayiye, Geet yahi hai, aap ke liye hi intezaar kar rahi hai


Ranno: meri pothi kaisi hai?


Maan is surrised that she didn't ask about Geet but Aditi, how can she forget her daughter though she would be eager to meet her grand doughter for the first time....


But Ranno knows that Geet must be happy for she is where she should be, where her happiness is, with Maan....


Maan: aap kudh jaan lijiye, aap usse milne hi aaye haina?


Ranno: mein sab se milne aayi hoon


Ranno doesn't want Maan to feel left out...


Maan is happy and thinks why isn't Geet like her mother?


Maan takes her to Geet.....

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Posted: 4 years ago

thanks for the pm


Part 88

beautiful update

liked Maan and Geet's convo

great that Geet realises that Maan love and cares for Aditi

he is responsible when it comes to Aditi

glad that Ranno came to see Geet

she assumes Geet is with Maan and is happy

she was surprised when she heard that Geet got engaged to Dev

Ranno wants to meet Aditi

update soon

Edited by khwaishfan - 4 years ago
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Posted: 4 years ago

Glad Rano has everything down. Now she has to get geet to accept maan and forgive him for his mistakes in the past

she realizes how

Much maan has changed and has done

For adithi and her (if she accepts it


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Posted: 4 years ago

Part 88


Heart Warming Update


Maan truly only does everything and only for Geet

yet she still is stalling about her feelings for him

oh and its priceless that Maan got Geet's mother to come and visit Geet

hope Rano can speak to Geet about Maan in a positive way

so her talks can help Geet

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Posted: 4 years ago

Just came across this story. Looks interesting. Will be back to read.

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Posted: 4 years ago

88

wonderful update

geet deliberately not seeing maan's love for her

but she can't deny the efforts n responsible nature of maan towards aditi.

rano happy knowing geet is with maan as she knows how much maan n geet loves each other

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Posted: 4 years ago

Nice update..

Waiting for next update..

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Part - 89



Maan knocks and slowly opens the door...


Ranno is surprised that Maan needs to knock....


Maan keeps the door open for Ranno to enter...


Ranno enters and Geet is so happy to see her mother....


No matter how much differences you have with your mother, you forget everything when you see her.....


Ranno looks at Aditi and keeps staring her for a few minutes....


Geet: maa, ye meri beti hai, Aditi


Ranno: mujhe patha hai, mujhe toh laga mein tum hai hi dekh rahi hoon, tum bilkul aaise hi thi bachpan mein'


Geet: haan, woh meri parchayi banke aayi hai'


Ranno: bahut pyaari hai


Ranno bends down and kisses Aditi....


Maan interferes....


Maan: Geet, tum maa ko lekhe hummare farm dikhake aao


Maan wants them to speak alone.....


Geet: woh Aditi


Maan: mein hoon na, tum jao


Geet leaves with her mother.....


Ranno: Geet tum log kab aaye?


Geet: kal raat hi aaye


Ranno: Nani tumme dekh ke kush hui hogi? jab bhi hum milthe the tere barein mein hi batein karthe the, aur Nani tumme lekhe kuch zyada hi pareshaan thi


Geet: tum mere barein mein kabhi sochthi bhi thi?


Ranno: har din tere barein mein hi sachke pareshaan hothi thi


Geet: aur papa?


Ranno: woh bhi sochenge, lekhin Darji aur Pammi didi se abhi bhi darthe haina? toh woh bhi mere tarah apne dukh ko apne andar hi rakhthe hai


Geet is in tears... Ranno goes and hugs Geet....


Ranno: ro mat puthar, meine tumme rona nahi sikhaya


Geet: mujhe tummari bahut yaadh aathi thi


Raano: patha hai puthar, jab kissi maa ko patha chaltha ki apni beti maa ban ne wali hai toh woh utna hi kush hothi jaise ki woh hi maa ban ne wali ho, aur woh bhi apne beti ke saath saath uske bache ka khyaal rakhthi, par mein aaise maa hoon jo apne hi beti ko maa ban ne ki kabar se dukhi hui thi, lekhin ab mein sab samajhthi hoon puthar, mujhe toh ussi din samajh aa gaya ki tummara pyaar kitna gehra hai jis din tum sab kuch chodke Delhi bhaag gayi thi Aditi ke papa ko uske aane ki subh kabri sunaane, par mere mamtha ne mujhe andha bana diya tha, tab mujhe patha nahi chala ki meri beti ki mamtha mere mamtha se kam kaise ho sakthi


Geet: purane batein karne se kya faida jab usse humme sirf dukh hi miltha toh


Ranno: tumne ye bahut teek kaha puthar, lekhin mujhe nahi lagtha tumne purane bathon ko abhi tak bhoola hai


Ranno has seen confusions on Geet's face instead of the happiness which she expected....


Geet: tum kya keh raho ho?


Ranno: kal jab mujhe patha chala ki Maanji ke saath ho toh mujhe kushi hui ki tummari kushiyan ab laut aagaye hai, Maanji jo tummare zindagi mein woh kushiyan wapas zaroor laye honge


Geet: ye kaise baat hai maa, kya ek ladhki ki kushi uske haath mein nahi, kya woh akhele kush nahi reh sakthi?


Ranno: zaroor reh sakthi? aur har ladhki ki kushi uske hi haath mein hai puthar, pehle tum mera ek sawaal ka jaqab dena


Geet looks at Ranno confused....


Ranno: itne din toh tum akhele hi thi na puthar? kya tum kush thi?


Geet can't answer that.....


Ranno: chup kyun ho puthar?


Geet: woh mein


It's hard for Geet to find words to answer this question without revealing the truth.........


Ranno: mein bathathi hoon Geet, tum akheli kush nahi reh sakthi, kyun ki tummare zindagi ab sirf tummari nahi rahi, tum shayad bhool gayi ho ki tumne apne kushiyon ko bhi Maanji se judi hai jab tumne tummare zindagi ko unke zindagi se judi thi


Geet looks confused.....


Ranno continues...: jab tak ek ladhka ya ladhki akhele hai woh akhele hi kush rehthe, par jab woh kissi bhi rishthe mein judthe hai toh ussi waqt woh kudh faisla karthe hai ki woh akhele kush nahi reh sakthe, kissi aur ke saath mein hi unki kushi hai, issilye woh apne akhelepan ko khothe haina? phir tum kitne bhi koshish karo tumme woh kushi akhele rehne se wapas nahi millegi


Geet: aaisa kuch nahi hai


Ranno: kya tum ab kush nahi ho ki Maanji tummare saath hai?


Geet again has no answers.....


Ranno: kitne din ke badh mein kal raat hi chain se soyi thi jab mujhe patha chala ki tumme tummari Maanji wapas mil gaye


Geet bhi bahut din ke badh kal raat chain se soyi thi....


Geet: aap meri chintha mat karo ab'


Ranno: ab tummare chintha karne Maanji haina? mujhe chintha karne ki zaroori nahi hai


Geet keeps thinking deep..... why is every one trying to confuse her?


Ranno: itna bhi mat sochna puthar ki haath mille kushiyon ko apnane se bhi dar lag jaaye, bas itna sochke kush ho jaana ki babaji ke meherbaani hamesha tummare saath hai


Geet is overwhelmed with emotions she suddenly hugs her mother tight for she needed her support badly, to tell her about the things that she didn't know, to tell her where she has gone wrong.....


Ranno: hamesha kush raho puthar, itne din tumne akhela hi sare bhoj utaya hai, ab waqt aagaya hai ki tum apna bhoj ko halka karlo, ek baat ka dhyaan rakhna puthar, kabhi kabhi saalon se bhoj utane se woh ek aadat ho jaathi hai, ek junoon ho jaathi hai, aur achchi moke aane se bhi hum uss bhoj ko apne upar se chuta nahi pathe


Geet keeps listening like a obedient student, sometimes our parents become our teachers....


Ranno: ab tumme woh moka mila hai puthar, tum sare bhoj se chutkara pao aur azad ho jao


Geet: hmmm


Ranno: toh mujhe jaana hai puthar, warna sab ko shak ho jayega


Ranno leaves after completing her job to perfection....


Geet has begun to think about Maan for a change.....

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