MG - FF HUM TUM..... updated epilogue on pg 120 May 8 - Page 19

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Posted: 5 years ago

hello...update when you are able to

Edited by khwaishfan - 5 years ago
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Posted: 5 years ago

Hi , hope all is well on your side


I've been waiting for updates


please do try and continue

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Part - 32


Hi everyone.... It's been months since I updated....

Thanks to the lockdown for keeping the housewives busy 24*7...

Stay safe everyone.....


Coming to our Maneet story...

It's a beautiful full moon night...

Maan looks out of the window and he could see the images of Geet and Aditi in that.....

Maan has a strong hunch that Geet is hiding something big from him...

He is the MSK and MSK has his own ways of getting things done in his favour.... That Geet also knows very well but Geet Handa has also become stronger and learnt her lessons the hard way... It's said that time heals everything but there are some wounds that last with us forever.... The silver lining here is the fact that just like those wounds the attachment with thier maker also stays with us forever....

Geet is playing with Aditi on the terrace under the moonlight and they usually have a moonlight dinner once in a white whenever Aditi makes a fuss eating her dinner....

Aditi is just like the moon for Geet...

It all started with Geet struggling her way out of her golden cage which her family happily gifted her as she grew up thinking that they have given their princess a royal life not knowing that their princess wants to flap her wings and see the world on her own...

Maan entred like Sunshine when Geet was in the darkness of ignorance and inexperience...

Geet bloomed like a sunflower in his warmth and guidance... But just when she thought that she found her life in him little did she know that her Sunshine would abandon in the middle leaving her in the darkness again...

But just like the moon that shines and embraces you in it's cool light unlike the sun's harsh rays Aditi has become the moon in Geet's life now...

As Geet shows the moon shining bright in the sky and tells some interesting tales about it to Aditi, Geet is surprised to see a different moon tonight.... the moon looked more pleasant and beautiful as Maan's images flash in the moon...

Geet immediately takes her eyes off the sky and tells Aditi that something is wrong with the moon suddenly and that they should get back to the house...

Aditi is really enjoying very much and is not willing to go... But Geet takes her in telling that it's time for sleeping...

Poor Aditi is disappointed but she had to follow Geet....

Geet put Aditi to sleep... Kash Geet Aditi ki tarah apne mann ko bhi control kar pathi...

Par kya karein, jaise Don ko pakdna namumkin hai waise apne iss pagal mann ko apne kabooh mein lana bhi mushkil hi nahi namumkin hai...

Dev calls.... He has gone to meet a client and would be late....

Dev: Geet, tumlog sojao, I'll be late

Geet doesn't even hear what he is saying... Her mind is lost elsewhere...

Geet: hmm

Dev: Aditi kya kar rahi hai?

Geet: hmmm

Dev: Geeeeet Geeeeet

Geet: haan

Dev: sab teek haina?

Geet: haan

Dev: tum maa ki baatein ko lekar parishan mat ho, mujhe bhi shadi ki koi jaldhi nahi hai

Geet: woh mein wahi baat karna chahti thi, jaise ki maaji chathe hai waise hi hum iss bar shadi karlenge, aap maaji se kaho ki shadi ki tayaariyan shuru karein

Dev is surprised to hear that.... Whatever it is Gayatri would be very happy... If the ladies are happy then Dev is also happy...

Dev: that's very good Geet, mein kal hi maa se baat kartha hoon

Geet: aur ek baat

Dev: haan Geet

Geet pauses for a while....

Dev: Geet, laktha hai ki tum tak gayi ho, hum kal baat karthe hai, good night

Geet: nahi nahi, mere baat ko suno

Dev: I'm waiting

Geet: let's announce the wedding date to our friends tomorrow, I'll arrange a small party at the office, we just have to put an to the office romours first

There's been speculations of Geet's relationship with Dev among the Mumbai office staff as they have no idea about their new boss who rarely comes to office... Geet's highly professional and bossy nature is not much appreciated by the employees specially the egoistic men who always have a problem with their lady boss...

Geet has actually learnt to be a strict task master from Maan only...

She has seen him getting things done with ease using his no no sense attitude... Though it sometimes seems a little rude Geet's experience has proved that it works pretty good for her.....

Dev: if you think so, b'coz you are the boss

Geet: haan

Dev: yes boss

Geet: what's this Dev?

Dev: mein bhi abhi se shadi ki tayaariyan shuru kartha hoon, kal kaam aayega, haina boss?

Geet: Devvvvv

Dev: ok just kidding, bye

As you know Geet wants to give this message to someone special at once, yes, the first invitation for the party is for MSK

Geet needs to make it clear to him that he has no place in her life ever... But the truth is that Geet needs to tell her stupid heart that Maan is just the past and only Dev is her present, future, everything....

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Posted: 5 years ago

sad update

what happened in past that geet is not ready be near maan n his little presence in her life

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Posted: 5 years ago

hope you are well?

thanks for the pm and update


Part 32

Maan knows Geet is hiding something from him?

Geet and Aditi share a nice bond.

oh no Geet is ready to marry Dev but she still loves Maan.

what happened in the past?

update soon

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Posted: 5 years ago

Originally posted by: khwaishfan

hope you are well?

thanks for the pm and update



Thanks for your concern....

I'm fine and hope the same from everyone....

Trying times... Just stay safe guys...

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Posted: 5 years ago

Maan doubt that Geet hiding something from him she told dev to get marry and he's really happy

Geet just want to tell her heart she's over her past

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Posted: 5 years ago

Thank you so much for Updating


Part 32


Fabulous Update


Is Aditi Geet's child or Dev's child or is she both their child

for some reason I think she is Geet and Maan's child

Geet maybe hurt that Maan just left her and went to Canada

and she had to start life again but if he heart still yearns for him

and if she still thinks about him then it would be fair to her to at least

speak to Maan before she marries Dev

as now I think she is just agreeing to marry Dev to keep Maan away from her

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Posted: 5 years ago

emotional update...........


geet maan k upar gusse mein apne dil ko maat dukhao.........tumhare ek decision ne dev k zindagi badbaad kar sakta hai.............jo bhi karna soch k karna...............

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Part - 33


Next day.... Khanna office....

There's news of something big happening is making rounds...

the buzz is that Dev is throwing a lavish party to someone, but there is no clue about that special person... maybe it's a client, maybe some of his friends from Canada...

maybe they have hit a big deal....

another mystery is the absence of Geet, usually it's Geet who spearheads the organization of such parties.... this time Dev himself has passed the orders that it's a day off for the entire staff from official work and they have to arrange this party in the evening....

if it's Geet it would be like a perfect blueprint for the sequence of the work to be done with time limits.... they would just follow it and everything will fall in place on it's own...

now they have just received a verbal message from Dev that it should be the best ever party in the history of Khanna constructions...

everyone is running around bumping into one another like headless chickens and it's chaos at Khanna office...

Geet offered to help but Dev requested her to stay home and groom herself to get that perfect look for the occasion...

Geet too felt that it's better for her to stay alone at home for she needs some time to get her mood ready, or at least she could practice to put up a happy face so that no one(specially Maan) doesn't have any suspicion...

she should perfect this act one last time to put an end to her past once for all...

Maan has overslept since he was up till the wee hours of the night... strangely he got to sleep tight after a very long time.... maybe the hope that his past is not totally lost and there seems to be a new beginning, a new connection, something which Geet is desperately trying to hide from him but failed miserably last night helped him to sleep tight.....

Maan looks at the time and finds a 7 missed calls from Dev.....

It looks like that little bit of happiness that he found is not going to last for long...

An unknown fear grips him, something Maan has never felt in his life before....

the first thing that comes to his mind is Aditi, is everything alright with her, why would Dev call him so early and that too so many times....

then he thinks about Geet, she didn't look good either, who else can understand Geet and read her mind better than Maan?

Maan calls Dev, first ring ends, one more and Maan's patience is lost, he panics and suddenly feels helpless.... the mighty MSK feels like everything is out of his control now...

Maan: just tpick up the damn phone Dev

Dev has just clicked the answer butten and there goes Maan...

Maan: Dev, Kya baat hai? kya hua?

Dev: Maaan, pehle Good morning toh wish karo

Dev is in a very happy mood, that brings Maan's BP down a little...

Maan: Good morning Dev

Dev: it's indeed a very good morning Maan

Maan just got back his lost breadth...

Maan: I'm so happy to hear that Dev

Maan is literally relieved and so happy that everything is fine ....

Dev: I knew it Maan, i knew you would also be equally happy

Maan: what's the good news Dev? bataoge toh meri kushi dukhni ho jayegi

Dev: oh no Maan, that's a surprise, I just need your help

Maan: my help? any new project?

Dev: I think I called the wrong person, why don't you come out of projects and meetings for a change, no business talk for the next 24 hour

Maan: if you say so

Dev: it's this party in the evening, I don't know where to start and what to do

Maan: Geet haina? tum kyun fikar kar rahe ho? hamesha ki tarah tum sirf party ke dress ki chintha karo, bakhi sab Geet samballegi

Dev: that's the problem Maan, I've challenged Geet that I'll make this party a grand success and Geet's parties would be no match for this one party

Maan: that's too much of an ask Dev

Dev: I know I know, but I challenged with the only hope that you would take care of everything

Maan: mein hi kyun?

Dev: Geet and you have worked along for KC's launch party haina? you must have all the details

Maan: Oh yes, don't worry we will rock this one together

Maan loves challenges and if it's opposite his Geet then it's double the fun, haina?

Dev: OK, I'll be there in an hour, be ready

Maan gets charged up for he is happy that he got to confront Geet in the party...

Maan can't wait to meet Geet and know about the truth.... he wants to know the whole story.... Geet is mad about him for leaving then, now when he is back Geet should only be happy, haina? Maan knows that Dev is not a matter at all for Dev is mature enough to understand the situation.... the only thing that bothers Maan is Geet's stupid attitude.... childish ego that stops her to accept the truth, the truth about their love, their life, their family...

Maan would use this opportunity to make Geet realize her mistake and see the truth...

while Maan is thinking in this line Geet has other plans....

poor Maan, always keeps planning ahead while life throws a lots of twists and turns in that plan....

little does Maan know that it's going to be the biggest surprise of his life after meeeitng Geet again....

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