PAHELI **** Update Pg.26***** 15/02/2020 - Page 7

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Chapter 2.

Maan is now a changed man.

But how long will the change be.

Neelakshi n geet have a huge age difference.

But have too many similarities apart from their age, name, dressing style, nature.

Some Indian traditional dresses fell down from her cupboard along with a diary.

I guess it belongs to geet.

Khushi is missing geet.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Part 3.

Geet n neelakshi share same birthday's

Everyone remembers her n are lost in her memories during the havan.

Maan still believes that she is alive.

Mr. Chopra saw neelakshi n all he could do was being reminded of geet Or say Mrs. Maan singh khurana.

He is now going to inform commissioner pradyuman about it.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice update

Maan understand that in anger everything will be destroyed

Update soon

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Posted: 6 years ago
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CHAPTER 4





ALL THE NAMES & PLACES ARE FICTITIOUS (if any resemblance to persons & places is purely coincidental). Any royal titles, POLICE & LEGAL PROCEDURES, MEDICAL TERMS, MEDICAL PROCEDURES, RELIGIOUS TERMS, Punjabi terms, architectural terms, IT terms & programs, office hierachy, wedding rituals, etc. are from my imagination hence THEY ARE NOT TRUE. !!!!!

ALL THE PHOTOGRAPHS DOWNLOADED DO NOT BELONG TO ME BUT BELONG TO THE ORIGINAL UPLOADER. I HAVE JUST USED THEM AS THEY GO WITH MY STORY!

TEN DAYS LATER

Location: Khuarana Mansion at 09:00a.m.



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Commissioner Pradyuman along with a man in his late fifties entered Khurana Mansion. Seeing Savitri Devi passing by Commissioner Pradyuman wished her and she nodded her acceptance. Same was her reaction to man in his late fifties as he was none other Mr. Baldev Chopra, Khuranas business acquaintance. Just then Maan walked in and Savitri Devi walked out of the living room. Maan came and touched Commissioner Pradyuman’s feet, as Maan was no longer in CBI, he had started treating Commissioner Pradyuman as a father figure! Once men were relishing their choice of beverage, Commissioner Pradyuman broached the topic at once, “Maan CBI needs you to go as an “Undercover Agent as it a matter of National security.”


“But Sir I have left CBI five years back. How can I.....…?


“Mr. Khurana, yeh kaam aapke siwaiye aur koi nahi kar sakta hai. Please meri madatt kariye.” (Mr. Khurana, please help me. You are the only one who can solve this mystery.)


“Baldev chup raho. Maine tumse kaha thaa ki mai Maan ko logically facts present karoonga naa ki emotionally.” (Baldev, Keep quite. I had told you that I’ll explain to Maan the sequence of events in logical manner not emotionally.) Commissioner Pradyuman said in a displeased voice. Then thought of something and said, “Khair, abb tumne baat shuru ki hai toh tum hi poori karo.” (Anyway, now as you have started the conversation please finish it as well.)


“Mr. Khurana, baat yeh hai ki mera naadaan beta Maharaj Vasudev Singh Rajawat ki ladki Rajkumari Neelakshi Vasundhara Rajawat se shaadi karna chahta.” (Mr. Khurana, my immature and naive son wants to marry Maharaj Vasudev Singh Rajawat’s daughter Rajkumari Neelakshi Vasundhara Rajawat.)


“Theek hai toh ismei problem kya hai?” (So what is the problem?)


“Problem yeh hai Maan ki naa toh Maharaj Vasudev iss shaadi ke liye tyaar hain aur naa ki Baldev kyunki........” (Problem is that neither Maharaj Vasudev is agreeable for this nor is Baldev. Because.......) Looking at Mr. Chopra, Commissioner Pradyuman said, “Baldev, Maan ko ladki ki tasveer dekhao.” (Baldev, show Maan the photograph.) Mr. Chopra handed Maan the envelope and Maan opened the envelope and looked at the photograph startled. Unable to stop himself, “MISHTY!” slipped from his lips.




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“Maan, maine personal as well as apni professional capacity mein pichle paanch (5) saalon se bahut patta lagane ki koshish ki hai ki Geetanjali kahaan hai? Magar mai dead end par aa kar rok gaya hoon. Mujhe shuru se uss Maharaj Vasudev par “shaq” thaa ki Geetanjali ke gayab hone mein uska haath hai. Kyunki jiss tehre se uss Maharaj Vasudev ne tumse Geetanjali ki “antim yatra” itni jaldi mein karaayi jab tum uske against the. Aur sirf yeh hi nahi magar yeh bhi ki tumko aur Khurana parivaar ko uss se aur uske parivaar se yaani Geetanjali ke biological parivaar se door rehne ko kaha hai. Aur uska Bharat se achanak se jaana yeh sab usne itni jaldi mein kiya jaise woh kuch chupa raha ho.” (Maan, I’ve tried professionally as well as personally to find the truth about Geetanjali’s exisistence since past five (5) years but came to a dead end. Right from the begining I was “suspicious” of that so called Maharaj Vasudev being responsible for Geetanjali’s disappearnce. First, because Maharaj Vasudev made you hurriedly do Geetanjali’s last rites against your wishes. Second, he forbade you and your family to come in contact with him or Geetanjali’s biological family. He also departed India in hurry as if he is trying to hide anything.)




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“Sir, aapke sab points valid hain. Mujhe toh khudh pichle paanch saalon se gut feeling ho rahi hai ki MERI GEET zindah hai. Magar mera parivaar mujhe paagal (insane) samajhta hai iss liye abb mai unke saamne iss baare mein baat hi nahi karta.” (Sir, you have stated all valid points. In these past five years my gut feeling has been also continously saying that MY GEET is alive. But my family refused to believe and considered me going ‘insane’ hence I stopped mentioning anything related to Geet.)




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“Mr. Khurana, issi liye mai nahi chahta thaa ki mera bewakoof beta kissi aur ki gumshuda biwi se shaadi karke gunah kare!” (This is the reason that I didn’t want my dumb son to commit crime by marrying by some other man’s wife who is presumed to be missing!)


“Mr. Chopra, kya aap iss Rajkumari Neelakshi ke baare mein aur kuch batta sakte hain?” (Mr. Chopra, can you please tell me whatever you know about this Rajkumari Neelakshi ?)


Mr. Baldev Chopra started narrating whatever he knew and he finally concluded, “Mr. Khurana, aakhir mein mai sirf yeh kehna chahoonga ki Rajkumari Neelakshi sirf shaqal se Mrs. Khurana jaiseen hain magar aur sab tehre se alag hain. Maine aapki patni ko aapke shaadi ke reception mein dekha thaa. Agar aapki patni gaay (cow) theen toh Rajkumari sherni (lioness) hain; agar aapki patni sabka aadar, samvedhansheel aur prem karnewaali toh theen Rajkumari ahankaari, bhavna-rahit aur sabse grihna karteen hain. Sabse adhik hai waish-bhusha matlab aapki patni humesha tann dhakke Bhartiye kapade pehnateen theen aur yeh Rajkumari kewal vilayati kapade pehnateen hain. Iss liye mai aapse milke apne doubts clarify karna chahta thaa.” (Mr. Khurana, in conclusion, I would just like to say that Princess Neelakshi’s only face resembles Mrs. Khurana but in all other aspects she is very different! I can this because I met your wife at your wedding reception. If your wife was as docile as a cow, Princess is as ferocious as a lioness; if your wife was warm, compassionate, caring and loving; Princess is cold, arrogant, confident and callous. More than all this is her dressing, what I mean is your wife wore traditional clothes covering her whole body whereas Princess only wears Western attire. Hence, I wanted to meet you in person and clarify my doubts.)


“Scientifically, jo bhi kuch Maharaj Vasudev Singh Ranawat ne media aur world ko battaya hai woh sab sach hai aur uska proof bhi hai. Magar meri gut feeling kehti hai ki woh Maharaj sirf aadha sach batta raha hai jahaan tak uske liye convenient hai.” (Scientifically, whatever Maharaj Vasudev Singh Ranawat has told media and the world is absolute truth and has proofs to sunstantiate it. But my gut feeling still says that Maharaj has told only half truth, as much as suits him.)


Unknown to three men, Arnav had heard the whole conversation. “Commissioner Sir, I apologise that by mistake I heard your conversation. I would suggest that bhai should go and meet bhabhi.......I mean Rajkumari Neelakshi and put these doubts at rest once and for all.” Arnav said walking into the room.




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“I agree with Arnav.” Commissioner Pradyuman supported Arnav’s direction of thought.


“Magar, mai ek dam kaise jaaon mere Khurana Constructions......” (But how can I just go leaving everything. What about my Khurana Constructions......)


“Mr. Khurana, mere paas aapki problem ka solution hai.” (Mr. Khurana, I have a solution to your problem.) Mr. Baldev Chopra said in a helpful manner. “Kuch dino baad US mein poore vishwa ki Construction Companies can ek seminar ho raha hai. Wahaan aap kyun nahi Khurana Constructions ko represent karte? Woh seminar US Government ne organise kiya aur Sunshine Constructions uska sponsorer hai. Wahi Sunshine Constructions jahaan Rajkumari Neelakshi kaam karteen hain.” (After few days in US there is going to be a seminar of all contemperory Construction Companies. Why don’t you represent Khurana Constructions? The seminar has been organised by US Government and Sunshine Constructions are its official sponsorers. Princess Neelakshi is an employee of Sunshine Constructions.)


“Kaam karti hai? Ek Rajkumari ho kar Geetanjali kissi aur ke office mein kaam kar rahi hai.” (She is working? But she is a Princess how can she work as a common man.) Commissioner Pradyuman asked inquisitively.



“Sir, Geet humesha kehti thee har kissi ko apne bal-boote par kaam karna chahiye naa ki baap-dadaon ki virasat par.” (Sir, Geet use to always say that one should work according to ones capability and merit not because their ancestors left them business.) Maan at once said reflecting on Geet’s values. “Mr. Chopra aap chinta matt kariye. Mai US jaa kar patta lagata hoon ki woh Rajkumari MERI GEET hai; Maharaj Vasudev Singh Rajawat ki beti Rajkumari Neelakshi Vasundhara Rajawat; yaa koi berupia (imposter)!” (Mr. Chopra, don’t worry! I’ll come to US and investigate whether that Princess is MY GEET; Maharaj Vasudev Singh Rajawat’s daughter Rajkumari Neelakshi Vasundhara Rajawat; or an imposter!)


Mr. Baldev Chopra thanked Maan profusely and left with Arnav escorting him.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Interesting.

Commissioner sir n Mr. Chopra told maan about neelakshi.

They all decided on maan going n checking if she is geet Or someone else.

Even arnav supported them.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Nice update

Waiting for next update

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Posted: 6 years ago
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so glad they came and told maan the whole truth...now its unto maan to figure out if it is his mishty....just want him to be patient, caring and considerate this time....not callous rude arrogant like before....

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Posted: 6 years ago
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So Maan is set to go to US to see is Dee is Geet or not. It’s not going to be easy. Dee is not as gullible as Geet.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Yes finally maan came to know abt neelakshi plss maan don't blow up your chance this time .If this neelakshi is geet then as Mr Chopra said she is not like ur geet handle her with love and care and don't show that attitude of urs.

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Chapter 4

intriguing update! well written!

as expected Praduyman and Baldev meet Maan and tell him about Princess Neelakshi!

Princess Neelakshi and Geet are vastly different in personality and behavior!

is she Geet?

Praduyman shares his views with Maan!

great that Maan agreed to go USA!

update soon! thanks 4 da pm

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