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This OS part of my story ' Second Choice ' its all about her feelings just before marriage . Didn't add it in main story as it may become boring. It can read stand alone too . Do tell me how you guys find it .


Yeh Dil Nadan


Pal pal dil ke paas

tum rehti ho


Geet kissed her mehendi clad hands . ' rang jitna gehra hota hai , pati utna pyaar karta hai ' . She smiled trying to hide her face in her plam then smacked her forehead realising how foolish she is ! Maan is not here and she already losing her mind . What will happen when she will become his forever .


Jeevan meethi pyaas yeh kehti h

oPal pal dil ke paas tum rehti ho


' Pyaar ' an unknown feelings , a longing of her life . She touched the M word it's bright red . She blushed as if she is touching him not just her mehendi . ' hmm pati ko bolna tumhari hath se apna naam dhoond le., agar nehi dhoond paaya na phir puri zindegi woh tumhari baat sunega ' she recalled her cousins teasing . Will Maan able to find it ? But big question does she want him to find it ? Yes she wants .


Who cares if she lose the game ? Moreover she will enjoy his happy face after he will manage to find it . " Maan mere Maan " she voiced it loud without any hesitation .


Can it possible for anyone to start falling for a person after first meeting ? Her mind asked her . " but he is not some person ? He is Maan mere humsafar, jo hamesha mere sath rahega, mujhe pyaar karega " she gave answer to her own doubt and smiled wholeheartedly. " Dil bhi bohot ajeeb hoti hai , kaise kaise khayal aaraha hai "


Har shyam aankhon par

Tera aanchal lehraye

Har raat yaadon ki

Baarat le aaye


No she not head over heal in love with him but her heart already accepted him as hers , may be it's called connection between souls , that's why she can't stop thinking about him . His eyes , his talks his cares everything touched her heart .


' I like you ' those three words means world to her. When was the last time she heard those yes during first year of her college and that time she was in verge of crying . She smiled at that memory . She was so silly . That time she scared when Rahul said those . When Maan said it she didn't felt bad but why ? ' Because he is sincere ' her heart gave answer .


Maein saans leta hoon

Teri khushboo aati hai

No she not swaying away just by his words by his actions too . Like during their engagement how he hold her tightly when she bumped with waiter and about to fall . Not just that his concern voice if she is hurt ? Who asked her this ? She can't recalled it .


She read about him on internet . He known as beast but she knows he will be her beloved only not beast. He will protect her always like he did in their engagement night .


Geet went to cupboard and picked up her wedding dress which given by him . Infact they both went to select it together . She was so confused but Maan helped her a lot . She never into fashion but Maan didn't judge her only selected which is best . ' I guess red will go perfect with your complextion , you will look nice ' those were his exact words. She only gave small nod .


Ek mehka mehka sa

Paigham laati hai


But she doesn't understand why he talks so less . During whole shopping he said only 5 sentence that's it . ' so introvert ' she frowned at her own thought . She is very talkative. She always wanted someone who will listen to her may be now she will get that person . She hugged her bridal dress as small tears fallen .


Meri dil ki dhadkan bhi

Tere geet gaati hai ...Pal pal


Is Maan also thinking about me ? is he also trying to find my presence like I'm doing . She missed their engagement ring their first bond. " are you also dreaming about our future like I'm doing ? " . She laughed at her own question .


" Geet you gone mad " yes she is . With each second she feeling more closer to her humsafar . She not fallen yet but she knows she will for him without any fear . Maan is that special . May be marriage bond is that special and strong which bind two souls easily . She can't wait to enter in this bond . She can't wait for tomorrow when she will be finally Maan ki Geet.


Yeh Dil Nadan kya pata kaha kho gaya

Jaha humsafar hai waha jana cahai

Ek chahat ho raha hai mann main

Kaise karu baiya

Woh bas mere chahat ko samajh le zara

Yeh Dil Nadan...

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Posted: 6 years ago
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I will keep posting these type OS which will be related to ' Second Choice ' which i won't add in main story . Mostly all will be her emotions briefly , giving in main story may turn boring that's why. Do tell me if you guys want it or should I let go of this idea ?

Add me for pm .

My Story - Second Choice

Edited by Bluemoon94 - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Beautiful OS

Geet is so lost in her own world.. her thoughts were Beautifully presented..

Let's see that if Maan can be her Humsafar or not

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Fabulous and so Beautiful OS


Geet's feelings her acceptance for Maan

is just so beautifully portrayed

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Posted: 6 years ago
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I have no idea how to add you in my buddy list

it does not give any option

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Posted: 6 years ago
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And yes I'm looking forward to reading these


extra bits connected to the story as OS


do continue

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Beautiful update. Geet feeling is nicely written. But feeling sad for geet. She will be hurt badly. As she is in love with Maan . But she should stand strong. Not like helpless gir

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Posted: 6 years ago
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Congrats on the OS!

thanks for the pm!

beautiful OS! Geet's thoughts well portrayed!

will she get Maan as her life partner?

update soon


Edited by khwaishfan - 6 years ago
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Posted: 6 years ago
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Lovely keep giving these so v can understand wat r her thoughts

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Thanks for pm geet is so lost in maan she is not in love with him yet but may be she start to feel for him hope maan will not hurt her

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